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    Something so right – chapter 28

     

    Tina smiled “ Its not a fraction of what you do to me “

     

     

    Bette kissed Tina softly on the lips again “ I promise that I am going to take good care of you when we get back”

     

    “Babe – just relax “

     

     

    Bette smiled “I know – its just weird for me “

     

    “Well look at it from their point of view -they are watching the most beautiful lesbian in all of LA spoken for – happy and in love with a woman who isn’t them. We need to feel sorry for them – as well as happy that we have found one another “

     

    “God I love you “ Bette whispered kissing Tina again

     

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    Standing a few metres away Helena and Shane were watching the lovers

     

    “I just cannot believe the change in Bette “ Shane commented

     

    “I have seen huge men reduced to tears of happiness because of Ms Kennard “

     

    Helena commented “ She has this power “

     

    “Did you think she could do that to Bette ?”

     

    “I admit that I was worried when I found out -hell I nearly hit the roof but Bette is very protective towards her and not taking advantage of one of the few times when Tina was vulnerable did show me that maybe Bette was not all her reputation makes her out to be “

     

     

    “When she told us that she was dating Tina and they hadn’t made out – Alice and I just didn’t believe that Bette could be like that. But when she talks about Tina – she’s got this goofy smile on her face that I swear to you Helena I have never seen on her face before. Bette’s never had this before – maybe that’s why she is floundering “

     

    “She does look like she is floundering with her tongue down Tina’s throat “

     

     

    “Well that’s something that she can do – the feelings might be harder for her to handle “

     

    “Tina does love her – I have never seen Tina looking so content. Coming out is a big thing for her – she’s really happy with Bette – I just worry that Bette’s old habits are going to fuck this up “

    Comments

    1. Great chapter, Bette should know by know that what she has with Tina can be once in a life time opportunity, the love that will change her life forever. Thanks Ally you are brilliant I can’t wait for your next story.

    2. So not surprised you’d spend your idle elevator time with dirty images going through your mind. I’d expect nothing less of you and would probably do the same in that situation.

    3. Bette should pay attention, this is the love of her life and vice versa. they are so right for each other and so lovely together. Great one AllyE and hope you feel better quickly. PPS

    4. Terrific update Ally! So…stuck in an elevator…well now you’ll be able to empathise with poor Bette and Tina on Sunday (snicker, snicker)

    5. I love Alice’s speech to Bette – I love all the support you are writing from their friends. Awesome awesome awesome as usual. Were you really stuck in an elevator??

    6. Oh my… now I want to be stuck in an elevator… how screwed up is that?? Great update Ally. As usual, can’t wait for your next post. Maybe you can fit in L&P somewhere in between too *wink*

    7. Aww, I loved this one. The Alice/Bette friendship was really cute. Glad she is being so supportive of B/T because that always endears me to a character. Glad that Bette is getting her bearings more. Hmm, a new B/T story? I’m there. Although, I seriously check for this one religiously so I can’t wait for more of it.

    8. Great chapter AllyE as per usual!! I love this story oh well actually I love all your stories, but this one I dont know has Bette in a slightly different light and makes it very interesting.Anyways please post soon

    9. Hey Ally. Great chapter. Stuck in an elevator huh? I wouldn’t mind being stuck in one if Tina was there with me. *wink. At least you had the girls in your head. Can’t wait for the next chapter and for your new story.

    10. Good old Foreigner! I LOVE that song – I think that was one of the final clues that I REALLY liked women a lot ;o) I really am enjoying this story. Thank you for sharing!

    11. oh yeah, GO ALICE GO! I am glad that Alice is there for Bette and talks sense to her. I am still chuckling my head off over Helena’s cheesy love song dedication.

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