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Something so right – chapter 28
Shane shook her head
“That is where you are wrong. I guess one of the reasons that I admire Bette so much is that I see something of myself in her. She’s always needed what she’s found with Tina – an equal – someone who is as beautiful and successful and sexy and all that. Bette isn’t going to mess this up. Yeah she’s struggling but that’s because its happened so fast for her. She didn’t expect Tina to be anything other than a twinkie – like most of the women in here. But she instead finds someone who is going to be her life partner “
“You think that ?”
Shane smiled
“I KNOW this – their lives are always going to be entwined “
Helena considered Shane’s comments for a few minutes while she and several other women watch the couple sitting alone at a table lost in each other’s lips
“How well do you know the DJ in here ?” Helena asked
“Pretty well – why ?”
“You’ll see Yodah – I’ve an idea “
Bette was sitting gazing into Tina’s eyes when Helena came across
“It was cute watching you two make out but now its just getting boring – come and dance “
“Leave us alone “ Bette muttered kissing Tina’s lips again
“If you had wanted to pet all night you should have stayed home – come on Tina – get you ass to the dance
floor “
Tina glanced at her friend and sighed before looking back at Bette
“She’s got a point “
“No she doesn’t “
Helena put her hands on the table and looked at the two very love struck women
“Not like you Porter “
“What isn’t ?”
“To lose an opportunity to hold Tina close while you are dancing -the right dancing will tell a lot of the women in here that you are now in an exclusive relationship”
Bette looked from Helena to Tina
Tina grinned “ Remember dancing in Hawaii ?”
Bette nodded “Okay – come on sweetie – lets see some of your moves “
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(11 votes, average: 3.91 out of 5)
Great chapter, Bette should know by know that what she has with Tina can be once in a life time opportunity, the love that will change her life forever. Thanks Ally you are brilliant I can’t wait for your next story.
So not surprised you’d spend your idle elevator time with dirty images going through your mind. I’d expect nothing less of you and would probably do the same in that situation.
I’m glad Bette is beginning to grow her backbone. thanks for the update, glad you made it out of the elevator!!!
very cool chapter. going dancing myself tonight. thx
Glad to see Bette back with her backbone :)
Bette should pay attention, this is the love of her life and vice versa. they are so right for each other and so lovely together. Great one AllyE and hope you feel better quickly. PPS
Terrific update Ally! So…stuck in an elevator…well now you’ll be able to empathise with poor Bette and Tina on Sunday (snicker, snicker)
I love Alice’s speech to Bette – I love all the support you are writing from their friends. Awesome awesome awesome as usual. Were you really stuck in an elevator??
Oh my… now I want to be stuck in an elevator… how screwed up is that?? Great update Ally. As usual, can’t wait for your next post. Maybe you can fit in L&P somewhere in between too *wink*
Sometimes Alice is so on the bulls eye. Bette needs to take her lady home and make love to her until the sun comes up. thanks
Aww, I loved this one. The Alice/Bette friendship was really cute. Glad she is being so supportive of B/T because that always endears me to a character. Glad that Bette is getting her bearings more. Hmm, a new B/T story? I’m there. Although, I seriously check for this one religiously so I can’t wait for more of it.
Great chapter AllyE as per usual!! I love this story oh well actually I love all your stories, but this one I dont know has Bette in a slightly different light and makes it very interesting.Anyways please post soon
Hey Ally. Great chapter. Stuck in an elevator huh? I wouldn’t mind being stuck in one if Tina was there with me. *wink. At least you had the girls in your head. Can’t wait for the next chapter and for your new story.
I love Alice she is so right! what fantastic update. :)
so LIQUID went well then, lol.Great stuff. Get well. PPS
Good old Foreigner! I LOVE that song – I think that was one of the final clues that I REALLY liked women a lot ;o) I really am enjoying this story. Thank you for sharing!
oh yeah, GO ALICE GO! I am glad that Alice is there for Bette and talks sense to her. I am still chuckling my head off over Helena’s cheesy love song dedication.
That was great. Alice is good and glad to see the Alpha Bette is back!