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Something so right – -chapter 31
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“Excellent – I hope you get it “
“You not going to give me your attention ?” Bette said smiling
Tina looked at Bette
“We talked until 3am on the phone last night – – I had to be at work at 7 – I had three hours sleep so no – you are a bad Bette “
Bette laughed and tried to look sheepish
“Why were you talking on the phone ? “ Alice asked
“Because Madam Porter decided that she really wanted to sleep in her own bed last night – on her own “
“A night apart “ Shane didn’t think that there were many nights when Bette and Tina didn’t share the same bed.
“That was the principle “ Tina chuckled “ Tell them the actual “
“We went to dinner – I dropped her off at her apartment and got home just after 11. I rang her as soon as I got home and we talked until 3am “
“Idiots – would you have talked so late if you’d been sleeping together ?”
“Probably not “
“So Bette – how well do you think the experiment went ?” Shane asked as seriously as possible
“Badly “ Bette laughed “I admit that as an idea it sucked – its right up there with some of my finest dumb ass ideas “
“Why would you not want to sleep with your partner ?” Alice asked “I thought you two were inventing lesbian sex “
Tina looked at Bette “ It was your crazy idea not mine Porter “
Bette blushed “ I just thought – well it doesn’t matter what I thought “
“No – what did you think ?” Alice pressed
Tina could guess at Bette’s motivation and knew that she wasn’t going to say it in front of her friends. Tina took hold of Bette’s hand and lent across and kissed her
“Come over to my place tonight and we can have an early night “
Bette smiled “Thanks “
Tina winked at her before looking round
“I need food – preferably hot and lots of it – I’ll go and see whats on the board – you coming Shane ?
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Alice can be so sweet and adorable. I am glad that she was there for Bette and gave her some truths. Too bad Kit can’t be bothered to show up, I think that really hurt Bette. Amazing chapter, I am so thrilled everytime I get to read more.
AllyE, good one. Bette sometimes does not see the forest for the trees. But they do love each other so much and yes, sometimes that can be a bit scary. You just take a deep breath and sally forth. Keep writing and we’ll keep reading. Black tie event, here they come. I would love to see Bette or Tina dressed in a long black tuxedo gown, like Diane Keaton wore in “First Wives Club.” That outfit was just so beautiful. PPS
Bette is so funny. For someone who appears so sure of herself to the outside world, she is so insecure in a relationship. Great story Ally!
Brilliant read, as always Ally. Looking forward to the black-tie event along with Bette’s birthday. Loving this story more with each chapter. Completely agree with you about Tina/Laurel… so hot, sexy, and talented… could not be any more appealing this season.
I’m so with you about the acting performance of Laurel Holloman, and so glad that people finally start realizing how great an actress she is. She’s as good an actress as you are a writer.
Thanks for another great chapter!!!!!!
Bette needs to just chill out and go with the flow. Great chapter thanks.
I love this story.It just gets better and better.Bette needs to stop being afraid.
Love how Tina is looking out for Shane. To bad that Kit didnt show up. Alice set Bette straight on Tina and the love they have for each other.. Now for the black Ie party. thanks
bette really needs to get her act together and step up and relax a bit! :)
Well it’s kind of sweet, again amazing chapter. Keep posting Ally.Thanks Hun, have a great day
Thank goodness Bette has such good friends. It really isn’t so unusual for beautiful, successful women to feel so un-assured about their personal feelings and decisions they make regarding their personal lives. I think Bette is especially lacking confidence in this area due to the absence of her mother and the fact that her father showed her very little, if any affection. It is amazing that Bette is such a loving and gentle person. Ally have I told you lately what a phenomenally awesome person you are? Well, I’m saying it again. You rock my world with your writing and I love you for it. I can’t say thank you enough for sharing your precious gift in such a generous way. So, again I say thank you Ally! I think Tina should get Bette some type of ring for her 30th birthday – maybe a promise ring? Thanks for the note about Erin Daniels being on CSI. I’m not sure who the other cast members that have appeared on CSI, but have you ever seen the Law & Order Special Victims Unit episode that Kate Moennig appeared in? She plays the part of a young man that is just starting the process of trans gendering to be a woman. When she was sentenced to prison, they put her in a male prison and she was killed by inmates almost immediately. Kate played the part extremely well. Thanks again Ally and as usual, I can’t wait for more!
They are so right for each other. Thanks
WOW!!! Ally, this just keeps getting better. Thank you
Yeah, dumbass.
Love the friendship they have and how they help each other out. Love B&T, they are so cute and let see more of them. Please post more, thanks!
Al and Shane r great friends!!!! More soon plz.
Loved so much of this. Loved how Henry commented on how happy Tina has been. Loved how Tina got Shane a job. Loved how Alice talked sense into Bette. I don’t think Bette would cheat on Tina.. and I hope Bette/Tina lose that fear soon too. Poor Bette about Kit though.. her only family family and she wanted to show Tina off. Can’t wait for more.
Awesome, awesome, awesome. I can’t wait for the black tie event when Tina comes out. Loving it Ally. Please post again soon.
Leisha was in CSI Vegas but was covered in hairs so u cant tell that it’s her and Karina was in CSI NY I think. Lovely post Ally. Thanks!
Leisha was in CSI Vegas but was covered in hairs so u cant tell that it’s her and Karina was in CSI NY I think. Lovely post Ally. Thanks!
a free meal at the planet for Blase. don’t ya think Laurel would be awesome as one of those ass kicking criminalists ? oh and Marlee was in CSI NY last season and Clare Fortane ( ?) who was in CSI NY last season looks like Rachel Shelley !
bette can be so …. thats the right word funnyone, dumbass. thx