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Something so right – -chapter 31
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“Sure – I can use Alice’s computer – she can help me – I’m not that good with words – you know – putting things down on paper “
“That’s okay Shane – I saw a screen test from an actress this morning and she could barely speak. It was a joy to reject her. If you have any problems come and see me – actually – why don’t you come and see me anyway. I can show you around and you can chat to people – see what we are about “
Shane shook her head again
“I am just speechless Tina – thank you so much “
“I like being able to do things for people “
“You have certainly transformed Ms Porter “
Tina looked back at Bette
“She has changed “
“She’s less tense – well she seems less angry “
“She’s got issues – but she’s fine “
“You make her very happy Tina “
“She makes me very happy “ Tina replied “ It took a lot for her to stop playing the field and wanting to be faithful “
“Does it worry you ?” Shane asked with curiosity
“Not the way it bothers her. She – sometimes I see her so lost fighting her demons. The thing that does bother me is that if she thinks she cannot be faithful she will see it as a self fulfilling prophecy – you know – she’s do something just to prove that she cannot be faithful “
“What would you do ?”
“If she cheated – I don’t know. This might sound weird but I have never had it happen to me before. I don’t know how I would deal with it – I hope that it won’t happen “
“You want my opinion – as your soon to be employee “
“Go on “
“I don’t think she would – she is so into you Tina. You really have turned her life upside down. She loves you “
“I love her “
Shane looked at the blonde
“I don’t think you get just how much she does love you . I don’t know this for sure but I would say that in time Bette will be ready to put down roots with you “
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Alice can be so sweet and adorable. I am glad that she was there for Bette and gave her some truths. Too bad Kit can’t be bothered to show up, I think that really hurt Bette. Amazing chapter, I am so thrilled everytime I get to read more.
AllyE, good one. Bette sometimes does not see the forest for the trees. But they do love each other so much and yes, sometimes that can be a bit scary. You just take a deep breath and sally forth. Keep writing and we’ll keep reading. Black tie event, here they come. I would love to see Bette or Tina dressed in a long black tuxedo gown, like Diane Keaton wore in “First Wives Club.” That outfit was just so beautiful. PPS
Bette is so funny. For someone who appears so sure of herself to the outside world, she is so insecure in a relationship. Great story Ally!
Brilliant read, as always Ally. Looking forward to the black-tie event along with Bette’s birthday. Loving this story more with each chapter. Completely agree with you about Tina/Laurel… so hot, sexy, and talented… could not be any more appealing this season.
I’m so with you about the acting performance of Laurel Holloman, and so glad that people finally start realizing how great an actress she is. She’s as good an actress as you are a writer.
Thanks for another great chapter!!!!!!
Bette needs to just chill out and go with the flow. Great chapter thanks.
I love this story.It just gets better and better.Bette needs to stop being afraid.
Love how Tina is looking out for Shane. To bad that Kit didnt show up. Alice set Bette straight on Tina and the love they have for each other.. Now for the black Ie party. thanks
bette really needs to get her act together and step up and relax a bit! :)
Well it’s kind of sweet, again amazing chapter. Keep posting Ally.Thanks Hun, have a great day
Thank goodness Bette has such good friends. It really isn’t so unusual for beautiful, successful women to feel so un-assured about their personal feelings and decisions they make regarding their personal lives. I think Bette is especially lacking confidence in this area due to the absence of her mother and the fact that her father showed her very little, if any affection. It is amazing that Bette is such a loving and gentle person. Ally have I told you lately what a phenomenally awesome person you are? Well, I’m saying it again. You rock my world with your writing and I love you for it. I can’t say thank you enough for sharing your precious gift in such a generous way. So, again I say thank you Ally! I think Tina should get Bette some type of ring for her 30th birthday – maybe a promise ring? Thanks for the note about Erin Daniels being on CSI. I’m not sure who the other cast members that have appeared on CSI, but have you ever seen the Law & Order Special Victims Unit episode that Kate Moennig appeared in? She plays the part of a young man that is just starting the process of trans gendering to be a woman. When she was sentenced to prison, they put her in a male prison and she was killed by inmates almost immediately. Kate played the part extremely well. Thanks again Ally and as usual, I can’t wait for more!
They are so right for each other. Thanks
WOW!!! Ally, this just keeps getting better. Thank you
Yeah, dumbass.
Love the friendship they have and how they help each other out. Love B&T, they are so cute and let see more of them. Please post more, thanks!
Al and Shane r great friends!!!! More soon plz.
Loved so much of this. Loved how Henry commented on how happy Tina has been. Loved how Tina got Shane a job. Loved how Alice talked sense into Bette. I don’t think Bette would cheat on Tina.. and I hope Bette/Tina lose that fear soon too. Poor Bette about Kit though.. her only family family and she wanted to show Tina off. Can’t wait for more.
Awesome, awesome, awesome. I can’t wait for the black tie event when Tina comes out. Loving it Ally. Please post again soon.
Leisha was in CSI Vegas but was covered in hairs so u cant tell that it’s her and Karina was in CSI NY I think. Lovely post Ally. Thanks!
Leisha was in CSI Vegas but was covered in hairs so u cant tell that it’s her and Karina was in CSI NY I think. Lovely post Ally. Thanks!
a free meal at the planet for Blase. don’t ya think Laurel would be awesome as one of those ass kicking criminalists ? oh and Marlee was in CSI NY last season and Clare Fortane ( ?) who was in CSI NY last season looks like Rachel Shelley !
bette can be so …. thats the right word funnyone, dumbass. thx