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Something so right – -chapter 31
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Tina looked across at Bette and looked back at Shane
“I know that “
Bette looked across at Tina who was deep in conversation with Shane.
“So – why did you decide that you didn’t want to sleep with her last night – does she eat pickled gherkins in bed or something ?”
Bette looked at Alice
“Sorry ?”
“There must have been a pretty compelling reason for you to not want to sleep with her – does she cut her toe nails in bed or something ?”
“No – of course not “
“So – Bette – why ?”
Bette sighed “No teasing okay “
Alice nodded “ I can do serious you know “
Bette smiled “ I don’t want her to well – get sick of me “
Alice raised her eyebrows
“The Porter self destruction truck rolls into town again “
“What ?”
“When you get close to being happy you always – and I mean always look for ways to fuck things up – this is one time I am not going to let you mess up Porter. She’s fantastic Bette – you are not going to throw away what this could mean to you “
“Its just that we have been together nearly every night since we got back from Hawaii”
“That’s been a month now hasn’t it ?”
Bette nodded “She takes my breath away Alice – she just takes my breath away. She is so amazing. I don’t want to lose her “
“What makes you think that you will lose her ?”
Bette looked at Alice with sadness in her eyes
“I’ve lost everyone else I have ever loved. Why wouldn’t she be the same ?”
Alice was about to make a joke but saw how desperate that Bette was. Alice pulled her chair closer to Bette and spoke to her friend.
“Bette – you have to stop thinking like that – she’s crazy about you. She wants to be with you. She is so different to all the other women you have been with – including me. She’s your level – don’t you see that “
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Alice can be so sweet and adorable. I am glad that she was there for Bette and gave her some truths. Too bad Kit can’t be bothered to show up, I think that really hurt Bette. Amazing chapter, I am so thrilled everytime I get to read more.
AllyE, good one. Bette sometimes does not see the forest for the trees. But they do love each other so much and yes, sometimes that can be a bit scary. You just take a deep breath and sally forth. Keep writing and we’ll keep reading. Black tie event, here they come. I would love to see Bette or Tina dressed in a long black tuxedo gown, like Diane Keaton wore in “First Wives Club.” That outfit was just so beautiful. PPS
Bette is so funny. For someone who appears so sure of herself to the outside world, she is so insecure in a relationship. Great story Ally!
Brilliant read, as always Ally. Looking forward to the black-tie event along with Bette’s birthday. Loving this story more with each chapter. Completely agree with you about Tina/Laurel… so hot, sexy, and talented… could not be any more appealing this season.
I’m so with you about the acting performance of Laurel Holloman, and so glad that people finally start realizing how great an actress she is. She’s as good an actress as you are a writer.
Thanks for another great chapter!!!!!!
Bette needs to just chill out and go with the flow. Great chapter thanks.
I love this story.It just gets better and better.Bette needs to stop being afraid.
Love how Tina is looking out for Shane. To bad that Kit didnt show up. Alice set Bette straight on Tina and the love they have for each other.. Now for the black Ie party. thanks
bette really needs to get her act together and step up and relax a bit! :)
Well it’s kind of sweet, again amazing chapter. Keep posting Ally.Thanks Hun, have a great day
Thank goodness Bette has such good friends. It really isn’t so unusual for beautiful, successful women to feel so un-assured about their personal feelings and decisions they make regarding their personal lives. I think Bette is especially lacking confidence in this area due to the absence of her mother and the fact that her father showed her very little, if any affection. It is amazing that Bette is such a loving and gentle person. Ally have I told you lately what a phenomenally awesome person you are? Well, I’m saying it again. You rock my world with your writing and I love you for it. I can’t say thank you enough for sharing your precious gift in such a generous way. So, again I say thank you Ally! I think Tina should get Bette some type of ring for her 30th birthday – maybe a promise ring? Thanks for the note about Erin Daniels being on CSI. I’m not sure who the other cast members that have appeared on CSI, but have you ever seen the Law & Order Special Victims Unit episode that Kate Moennig appeared in? She plays the part of a young man that is just starting the process of trans gendering to be a woman. When she was sentenced to prison, they put her in a male prison and she was killed by inmates almost immediately. Kate played the part extremely well. Thanks again Ally and as usual, I can’t wait for more!
They are so right for each other. Thanks
WOW!!! Ally, this just keeps getting better. Thank you
Yeah, dumbass.
Love the friendship they have and how they help each other out. Love B&T, they are so cute and let see more of them. Please post more, thanks!
Al and Shane r great friends!!!! More soon plz.
Loved so much of this. Loved how Henry commented on how happy Tina has been. Loved how Tina got Shane a job. Loved how Alice talked sense into Bette. I don’t think Bette would cheat on Tina.. and I hope Bette/Tina lose that fear soon too. Poor Bette about Kit though.. her only family family and she wanted to show Tina off. Can’t wait for more.
Awesome, awesome, awesome. I can’t wait for the black tie event when Tina comes out. Loving it Ally. Please post again soon.
Leisha was in CSI Vegas but was covered in hairs so u cant tell that it’s her and Karina was in CSI NY I think. Lovely post Ally. Thanks!
Leisha was in CSI Vegas but was covered in hairs so u cant tell that it’s her and Karina was in CSI NY I think. Lovely post Ally. Thanks!
a free meal at the planet for Blase. don’t ya think Laurel would be awesome as one of those ass kicking criminalists ? oh and Marlee was in CSI NY last season and Clare Fortane ( ?) who was in CSI NY last season looks like Rachel Shelley !
bette can be so …. thats the right word funnyone, dumbass. thx