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Something so right — chapter 33
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“Sorry – I eh – doesn’t matter “ he turned and reached out for the door handle before looking back at Tina
“Do you have a date for tonight ?”
Tina managed to pull herself together in a few seconds
“Yes – yes I have a date “
“He’s a lucky man “
Before Tina could reply he had gone – she cursed – great. After all the sticking in of the knife for the past few weeks suddenly he turns into almost a human being. Tina shook her head and went back to her report – 5pm was getting closer and she really NEEDED to get home and make herself look like someone who was going to be announced as the newest Senior Executive of the company – this party mattered to her.
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Tina was trying to decide what pair of earrings to wear when the door phone sounded. She looked at her watch – 7pm. Bette had said she would be here at 7 and she was rarely late. Pity Tina couldn’t say the same thing.
“Hello “
“Is there a beautiful Senior Executive in residence ?”
“There is a half dressed and disorganised soon to be Senior Executive – is that any good ?”
“That’s good enough for me “
“Come on up “
“Pleasure “
Tina went back into her bedroom to continue studying her jewellery box. She was busy comparing two pairs when she heard a voice that she loved.
“Going in bra and pants would be different – but I do hope you will be wearing a dress tonight Ms Kennard “
Tina turned and gasped – Bette looked sensational in a black dress. But just calling it a black dress didn’t do it justice. It was a beautiful black dress made even more impressive by who was wearing it. The dress was sleeveless – showing off Bette’s amazing arms, the cut at the front displayed just enough of her breasts for Tina to know that she wouldn’t be able to take her eyes away from them, the dress was long enough to cover Bette’s knees but still show off her shapely calves. The dress was made a perfect picture by the high heels that made Bette taller than her normal 5ft 8in.
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I soo can’t wait to see Eric’s response. I am headed out of town for the weekend and I so hope that when I get back Sunday that there is another chapter posted. Thanks Ally.
ohhhhhhhhh so nasty…Hope the l wing is next…
I want to tell you .You were really missed. Loved that Tina was kissing Bette whwn Eric walked in
oh nasty…a cliffie…pps
Another home run for this story Ally! However, it is about this obsession that all you authors have with cliff hangers…I want….no need to know what Eric’s reaction to that kiss was!
Glad you’re back to pump up this site. I’ve missed your stories. This one is so good. PPS.
So glad you’re on a roll. Thanks for fantastic and multiple updates.
Hi there AllyE. I can just picture the two of them walking down the room, stunningly beautiful as ever. Now I know that you are well and truly back back and you must be doing really well because we have a CLFFIE!! Couldn’t resist it could you? Loved it. Slugboy, (never would have thought of that name, may I use it please) love it. Well now, PPVS
Now that’s just mean to stop there!! Can’t wait for Eric’s reaction.
I’m with mightymouse. I love this story. Thanks
You’re really back, Ally! No doubt about that! Loved this update. What can I say, I’m a sucker for happy, loving, hot and heavy Bette & Tina stories! Thank you, thank you and I hope your trip back to Wellville is going on smoothly. :-}
ARGH you had to leave off there? LOL can’t find out what eric says to tina! great update!! :)
I actually like Henry in this story. Can’t wait to read about slug boy’s reaction.
NO!! You can’t stop there!! LOL.
Glad you’re back. Hope you’re feeling better. Thanks for the post.
What a cliff hanger. The moment we have all been waiting for.. I hope that Henry finds someone nice. He sounds like a great guy in this story. This is a big night for Tina..and I love how she and Bette have handled themselves thus far. PPS.
I’m glad you’re back, welcome Ally, you are feeling much better I hope. It was a great chapter and I’m so excited to see how Eric will react when he sees for himself with whom Tina is.Post soon dear
Oh good, a healthy Ally makes happy readers. Here’s to your health Ally. I really don’t want to miss out on any chapters of the other stories but I hope Eric is up off the floor soon so we can continue this one. Thank you, Md
This chapter was so great. Glad you are back to writing and feeling more like yourself. I can’t wait for the house to fall on Eric. :)
Hi Ally. It’s so good to have you back. Your update to both stories are great.
That was great!
i think id be afraid if i was at a swishy hotel. thx