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Something so right — chapter 33
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“You look like a movie star yourself “ Bette whispered getting up and walking across to her lover “ You look so beautiful “
Tina smiled “ Do you think the colour is okay- Helena said that it’s a confident colour “
“It is a confident colour and yes – I think it suits you. You still have some of your Hawaiian tan so that shows off how fair you – I will be so proud of you tonight Tina”
Tina dropped her hand and took hold of Bette’s
“I want to thank you for everything that you have done for me. I know I got this promotion myself but Hawaii was a part of getting the new job and you were wonderful – supportive and calming and wonderful. Thank you babe “
“The pleasure was mine. You have given me so much love Tina – I should be thanking you “
Tina placed a soft kiss on Bette’s lips
“You are beautiful – inside and out – that’s what matters. You are a good person – I am so happy with you B “
“I think I am in a state beyond happy – I love you “
“I love you “
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Bette parked her car in front of one of LA’s swishiest hotels
“This must have cost your company some serious money “
“We have had a good six months – got a couple of awards and we have made serious money –
I think it’s a sign that we are moving up as a company that we are doing something like this “
“And hiring freaking sexy Senior Executives “
“That as well “
“Wonder if Eric has any idea what is about to hit him- I think its called a double whammy “
“I wish I could say that he didn’t deserve it but I think all in all he does “
“He does “
Bette got out of the car and walked round to open the door for Tina. The blonde stepped out
“Thank you “ she said in her best southern drawl
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I soo can’t wait to see Eric’s response. I am headed out of town for the weekend and I so hope that when I get back Sunday that there is another chapter posted. Thanks Ally.
ohhhhhhhhh so nasty…Hope the l wing is next…
I want to tell you .You were really missed. Loved that Tina was kissing Bette whwn Eric walked in
oh nasty…a cliffie…pps
Another home run for this story Ally! However, it is about this obsession that all you authors have with cliff hangers…I want….no need to know what Eric’s reaction to that kiss was!
Glad you’re back to pump up this site. I’ve missed your stories. This one is so good. PPS.
So glad you’re on a roll. Thanks for fantastic and multiple updates.
Hi there AllyE. I can just picture the two of them walking down the room, stunningly beautiful as ever. Now I know that you are well and truly back back and you must be doing really well because we have a CLFFIE!! Couldn’t resist it could you? Loved it. Slugboy, (never would have thought of that name, may I use it please) love it. Well now, PPVS
Now that’s just mean to stop there!! Can’t wait for Eric’s reaction.
I’m with mightymouse. I love this story. Thanks
You’re really back, Ally! No doubt about that! Loved this update. What can I say, I’m a sucker for happy, loving, hot and heavy Bette & Tina stories! Thank you, thank you and I hope your trip back to Wellville is going on smoothly. :-}
ARGH you had to leave off there? LOL can’t find out what eric says to tina! great update!! :)
I actually like Henry in this story. Can’t wait to read about slug boy’s reaction.
NO!! You can’t stop there!! LOL.
Glad you’re back. Hope you’re feeling better. Thanks for the post.
What a cliff hanger. The moment we have all been waiting for.. I hope that Henry finds someone nice. He sounds like a great guy in this story. This is a big night for Tina..and I love how she and Bette have handled themselves thus far. PPS.
I’m glad you’re back, welcome Ally, you are feeling much better I hope. It was a great chapter and I’m so excited to see how Eric will react when he sees for himself with whom Tina is.Post soon dear
Oh good, a healthy Ally makes happy readers. Here’s to your health Ally. I really don’t want to miss out on any chapters of the other stories but I hope Eric is up off the floor soon so we can continue this one. Thank you, Md
This chapter was so great. Glad you are back to writing and feeling more like yourself. I can’t wait for the house to fall on Eric. :)
Hi Ally. It’s so good to have you back. Your update to both stories are great.
That was great!
i think id be afraid if i was at a swishy hotel. thx