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Something so right — chapter 33
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“Oh God “
Bette smiled “ You rather I’d worn something else ?”
“No “ Tina approached Bette “ You look stunning “
Bette smiled “I am rather pleased with the effect I have to say “
“I know that you will be the most beautiful woman in the room “
“I am not as sexy as you – especially in the bra and pants look “
Bette pulled Tina close and gently she placed a kiss on her lips
“I am going to be so proud of you tonight – I love you “
“I love you more “ Tina replied “ Thank you – thank you for being so kind and loving and amazingly sweet “
“If I have been any of those things its because of loving you “
Tina looked down “ You’re girls look amazing “
“You are biased “
“Yes – yes I am indeed biased “
They kissed for a few minutes before Bette pulled away
“As much as I love you dressed like that I would rather you put on a dress and maybe some shoes – call me traditional but I like keeping that sight for my own viewing pleasure “
“Okay – only if you are sure “
“Get a move on Kennard – I’ll go and watch the news. I brought an over night bag over – remember we are buying our bikes tomorrow “
“I know – maybe I could stay with you sometime next week and get some time in your pool “
“That’s fine by me – as long as you don’t forget about me once you are a high flying Senior Executive “
Tina laughed
“Go and watch the news “
“Yes Ms K “
Bette strolled out of the room chucking. She sat down and turned on the TV. She soon became engrossed in a documentary – it took a small cough to make her look up. Tina looked stunning – she was wearing a red dress – it was shorter than the dress that Bette was wearing and she was also wearing black stockings and high heels. Her normally curly blonde hair was loose and she had straightened it. The whole effect was topped off with a pearl necklace and earrings. It was a classic look and it made her look terrific
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I soo can’t wait to see Eric’s response. I am headed out of town for the weekend and I so hope that when I get back Sunday that there is another chapter posted. Thanks Ally.
ohhhhhhhhh so nasty…Hope the l wing is next…
I want to tell you .You were really missed. Loved that Tina was kissing Bette whwn Eric walked in
oh nasty…a cliffie…pps
Another home run for this story Ally! However, it is about this obsession that all you authors have with cliff hangers…I want….no need to know what Eric’s reaction to that kiss was!
Glad you’re back to pump up this site. I’ve missed your stories. This one is so good. PPS.
So glad you’re on a roll. Thanks for fantastic and multiple updates.
Hi there AllyE. I can just picture the two of them walking down the room, stunningly beautiful as ever. Now I know that you are well and truly back back and you must be doing really well because we have a CLFFIE!! Couldn’t resist it could you? Loved it. Slugboy, (never would have thought of that name, may I use it please) love it. Well now, PPVS
Now that’s just mean to stop there!! Can’t wait for Eric’s reaction.
I’m with mightymouse. I love this story. Thanks
You’re really back, Ally! No doubt about that! Loved this update. What can I say, I’m a sucker for happy, loving, hot and heavy Bette & Tina stories! Thank you, thank you and I hope your trip back to Wellville is going on smoothly. :-}
ARGH you had to leave off there? LOL can’t find out what eric says to tina! great update!! :)
I actually like Henry in this story. Can’t wait to read about slug boy’s reaction.
NO!! You can’t stop there!! LOL.
Glad you’re back. Hope you’re feeling better. Thanks for the post.
What a cliff hanger. The moment we have all been waiting for.. I hope that Henry finds someone nice. He sounds like a great guy in this story. This is a big night for Tina..and I love how she and Bette have handled themselves thus far. PPS.
I’m glad you’re back, welcome Ally, you are feeling much better I hope. It was a great chapter and I’m so excited to see how Eric will react when he sees for himself with whom Tina is.Post soon dear
Oh good, a healthy Ally makes happy readers. Here’s to your health Ally. I really don’t want to miss out on any chapters of the other stories but I hope Eric is up off the floor soon so we can continue this one. Thank you, Md
This chapter was so great. Glad you are back to writing and feeling more like yourself. I can’t wait for the house to fall on Eric. :)
Hi Ally. It’s so good to have you back. Your update to both stories are great.
That was great!
i think id be afraid if i was at a swishy hotel. thx