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Something so right — chapter 33
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Bette sat down beside Tina and smiled
“You don’t have scales “
Henry laughed “ You have been telling her all about him “
“I have – is he here ?”
“Not yet – did you want him to see your entrance ?“
“I really didn’t mind one way or the other. He’ll know soon enough “
“I arrived early – I didn’t want to miss the two of you arriving or the look on his face. Really – where are my manners- can I get the two of you a drink ?”
“Thanks – white wine for me “
“Bette ?”
“Red if you don’t mind “
“Not at all – won’t be a minute – I might get the sympathy vote tonight “
He walked away aware that a lot of people were watching him – well he had one over all of them – he knew Tina was gay and as odd as it was- he was happy for her. She seemed genuinely in love with her partner – and what a stunner Bette Porter was.
Left alone Tina looked around the room
“I think if we dance together tonight we’d have the dance floor to ourselves “
“Would you like to dance with me ?”
“I think it would get the message across “
“I thought that was what we just did or do you want to rub Eric’s nose in it ?”
“Is that bad of me ?”
“No – but lets not go over the top – we don’t want to rub Henry’s nose in it “
Tina nodded “ He’s sweet “
“He’s still in love with you “
“What ?”
“He still loves you – it obvious from the way he looks at you “
Tina looked at Bette
“Sure ?”
“The look in his eyes when we arrived and you looked at him – yeah “
Tina looked shamefaced “ I don’t want to hurt him and I told him first – should I say anything ?”
“No – just let him deal with himself. However liberal it is – he is going to find you being gay odd – especially as he’s been with you himself “
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I soo can’t wait to see Eric’s response. I am headed out of town for the weekend and I so hope that when I get back Sunday that there is another chapter posted. Thanks Ally.
ohhhhhhhhh so nasty…Hope the l wing is next…
I want to tell you .You were really missed. Loved that Tina was kissing Bette whwn Eric walked in
oh nasty…a cliffie…pps
Another home run for this story Ally! However, it is about this obsession that all you authors have with cliff hangers…I want….no need to know what Eric’s reaction to that kiss was!
Glad you’re back to pump up this site. I’ve missed your stories. This one is so good. PPS.
So glad you’re on a roll. Thanks for fantastic and multiple updates.
Hi there AllyE. I can just picture the two of them walking down the room, stunningly beautiful as ever. Now I know that you are well and truly back back and you must be doing really well because we have a CLFFIE!! Couldn’t resist it could you? Loved it. Slugboy, (never would have thought of that name, may I use it please) love it. Well now, PPVS
Now that’s just mean to stop there!! Can’t wait for Eric’s reaction.
I’m with mightymouse. I love this story. Thanks
You’re really back, Ally! No doubt about that! Loved this update. What can I say, I’m a sucker for happy, loving, hot and heavy Bette & Tina stories! Thank you, thank you and I hope your trip back to Wellville is going on smoothly. :-}
ARGH you had to leave off there? LOL can’t find out what eric says to tina! great update!! :)
I actually like Henry in this story. Can’t wait to read about slug boy’s reaction.
NO!! You can’t stop there!! LOL.
Glad you’re back. Hope you’re feeling better. Thanks for the post.
What a cliff hanger. The moment we have all been waiting for.. I hope that Henry finds someone nice. He sounds like a great guy in this story. This is a big night for Tina..and I love how she and Bette have handled themselves thus far. PPS.
I’m glad you’re back, welcome Ally, you are feeling much better I hope. It was a great chapter and I’m so excited to see how Eric will react when he sees for himself with whom Tina is.Post soon dear
Oh good, a healthy Ally makes happy readers. Here’s to your health Ally. I really don’t want to miss out on any chapters of the other stories but I hope Eric is up off the floor soon so we can continue this one. Thank you, Md
This chapter was so great. Glad you are back to writing and feeling more like yourself. I can’t wait for the house to fall on Eric. :)
Hi Ally. It’s so good to have you back. Your update to both stories are great.
That was great!
i think id be afraid if i was at a swishy hotel. thx