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Something so right — chapter 33
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Bette stroked Tina’s fingers
“You are doing well “
“I feel fine”
“Good “
Tina looked across and saw one of the “Beastie Boys “ looking at her – well he was staring – never seen a gay couple before ass-hole. Several other people had spotted Tina walking hand in hand with a woman and were quickly realising that she was gay. Tina heard someone say wow.
“I need a drink “ Tina said
“is it a free bar ?” Bette asked looking at her. Tina looked across at Bette and grinned
“I want to get drunk but if I do will you take advantage of me ?”
“Depends -if you are very good I probably will“
Tina could see the love and support in Bette’s eyes – she hoped that it was obvious that they were very much in love. Finally they arrived at their table.
Tina pulled a chair out for Bette who laughed and sat down. Henry was sitting facing Tina
“You like to make an entrance “ he said smiling. He had been sitting alone waiting for the moment when Tina arrived. He was looking forward to seeing what Tina’s partner looked like – he had been shocked at how stunning she was. It had also been amusing to see how people had stopped mid conversation when Bette and Tina had walked down the room. Tina looked absolutely stunning but then so did her partner. And the way they were holding hands and looking at each other left him in no doubt that they were very much in love.
Tina smiled – grateful for Henry’s decency.
“Henry – I would like you to meet Bette Porter “ Tina swallowed “ My – eh “
“I think I know she’s your girlfriend “ Henry laughed and held out his hand to Bette. Bette stood up and shook his hand
“Pleased to meet you Henry “
“I’m the nice ex “ Henry said
“I know “ Bette replied with supreme calmness “Tina has told me a lot about you – all good “
“I just didn’t want you to think that I was the other one “
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I soo can’t wait to see Eric’s response. I am headed out of town for the weekend and I so hope that when I get back Sunday that there is another chapter posted. Thanks Ally.
ohhhhhhhhh so nasty…Hope the l wing is next…
I want to tell you .You were really missed. Loved that Tina was kissing Bette whwn Eric walked in
oh nasty…a cliffie…pps
Another home run for this story Ally! However, it is about this obsession that all you authors have with cliff hangers…I want….no need to know what Eric’s reaction to that kiss was!
Glad you’re back to pump up this site. I’ve missed your stories. This one is so good. PPS.
So glad you’re on a roll. Thanks for fantastic and multiple updates.
Hi there AllyE. I can just picture the two of them walking down the room, stunningly beautiful as ever. Now I know that you are well and truly back back and you must be doing really well because we have a CLFFIE!! Couldn’t resist it could you? Loved it. Slugboy, (never would have thought of that name, may I use it please) love it. Well now, PPVS
Now that’s just mean to stop there!! Can’t wait for Eric’s reaction.
I’m with mightymouse. I love this story. Thanks
You’re really back, Ally! No doubt about that! Loved this update. What can I say, I’m a sucker for happy, loving, hot and heavy Bette & Tina stories! Thank you, thank you and I hope your trip back to Wellville is going on smoothly. :-}
ARGH you had to leave off there? LOL can’t find out what eric says to tina! great update!! :)
I actually like Henry in this story. Can’t wait to read about slug boy’s reaction.
NO!! You can’t stop there!! LOL.
Glad you’re back. Hope you’re feeling better. Thanks for the post.
What a cliff hanger. The moment we have all been waiting for.. I hope that Henry finds someone nice. He sounds like a great guy in this story. This is a big night for Tina..and I love how she and Bette have handled themselves thus far. PPS.
I’m glad you’re back, welcome Ally, you are feeling much better I hope. It was a great chapter and I’m so excited to see how Eric will react when he sees for himself with whom Tina is.Post soon dear
Oh good, a healthy Ally makes happy readers. Here’s to your health Ally. I really don’t want to miss out on any chapters of the other stories but I hope Eric is up off the floor soon so we can continue this one. Thank you, Md
This chapter was so great. Glad you are back to writing and feeling more like yourself. I can’t wait for the house to fall on Eric. :)
Hi Ally. It’s so good to have you back. Your update to both stories are great.
That was great!
i think id be afraid if i was at a swishy hotel. thx