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Something so right — chapter 33
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Tina took Bette’s hand “I don’t want to hurt him “
“Just be natural around him – wonder where you annoying ex is ?”
“I just want him to get it all the comments over with – here’s Lara “
The tall red haired young woman walked down the room and stopped in front of them
“That was almost scripted to perfection – I saw the whole thing from the bar and its safe to say that you two stopped the traffic. Pity slug-boy isn’t here “
“He’s about to have the worst night of his life “
“Hey Lara -nice outfit “
“Nothing beats the way the two of you look – wow – I am so glad that I witnessed that “ she sat down and lent close to Tina “ How did Henry take Bette ?”
“Fine – and be tactful – here he comes “
“I saw you coming across- red wine for you “
“You are a star Henry – even if you are a man “
Henry sat down “ Don’t tell me “
Lara nodded “ Fraid so – been gay since college. Didn’t want to come out at work but now that my boss is so free about her sexuality “
Tina raised an eyebrow at Henry “ You okay ?”
“Sure – three stunning women – a guy can day dream “
“You three want a bet on what the first words that sexist slug comes out with to Tina first ?” Lara sipped her wine
“Probably an offer to try and convert me back “ Tina said “ which would be impossible “
Lara smiled – Tina was so smitten with Bette and it was two way – Bette loved Tina deeply.
Henry shrugged “ I don’t know him that well but it will be something offensive “
Lara looked at Bette “Tina must have told you enough about him “
“From what T has said I will agree with Henry – it’ll be offensive “
“He thinks he’s funny – I never saw what you saw in him Tina “
“I do wonder “ Tina laughed “ I claim insanity “
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I soo can’t wait to see Eric’s response. I am headed out of town for the weekend and I so hope that when I get back Sunday that there is another chapter posted. Thanks Ally.
ohhhhhhhhh so nasty…Hope the l wing is next…
I want to tell you .You were really missed. Loved that Tina was kissing Bette whwn Eric walked in
oh nasty…a cliffie…pps
Another home run for this story Ally! However, it is about this obsession that all you authors have with cliff hangers…I want….no need to know what Eric’s reaction to that kiss was!
Glad you’re back to pump up this site. I’ve missed your stories. This one is so good. PPS.
So glad you’re on a roll. Thanks for fantastic and multiple updates.
Hi there AllyE. I can just picture the two of them walking down the room, stunningly beautiful as ever. Now I know that you are well and truly back back and you must be doing really well because we have a CLFFIE!! Couldn’t resist it could you? Loved it. Slugboy, (never would have thought of that name, may I use it please) love it. Well now, PPVS
Now that’s just mean to stop there!! Can’t wait for Eric’s reaction.
I’m with mightymouse. I love this story. Thanks
You’re really back, Ally! No doubt about that! Loved this update. What can I say, I’m a sucker for happy, loving, hot and heavy Bette & Tina stories! Thank you, thank you and I hope your trip back to Wellville is going on smoothly. :-}
ARGH you had to leave off there? LOL can’t find out what eric says to tina! great update!! :)
I actually like Henry in this story. Can’t wait to read about slug boy’s reaction.
NO!! You can’t stop there!! LOL.
Glad you’re back. Hope you’re feeling better. Thanks for the post.
What a cliff hanger. The moment we have all been waiting for.. I hope that Henry finds someone nice. He sounds like a great guy in this story. This is a big night for Tina..and I love how she and Bette have handled themselves thus far. PPS.
I’m glad you’re back, welcome Ally, you are feeling much better I hope. It was a great chapter and I’m so excited to see how Eric will react when he sees for himself with whom Tina is.Post soon dear
Oh good, a healthy Ally makes happy readers. Here’s to your health Ally. I really don’t want to miss out on any chapters of the other stories but I hope Eric is up off the floor soon so we can continue this one. Thank you, Md
This chapter was so great. Glad you are back to writing and feeling more like yourself. I can’t wait for the house to fall on Eric. :)
Hi Ally. It’s so good to have you back. Your update to both stories are great.
That was great!
i think id be afraid if i was at a swishy hotel. thx