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    Something so right – chapter 58

    Story written on November 1, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Christmas approaches

    SOMETHING SO RIGHT

     

    Chapter 58

     

    Tina pushed the plug in the socket and with a flick of her wrist she turned the power on. She looked back and grinned. She had taken the afternoon off to do some Christmas shopping and had bought a 6ft tree in a container plus decorations and lights. It had taken her an hour to get the tree the way she wanted it. The decorations were simple – red and silver were the main colours and even if she said it herself – the effect was wonderful. The whole picture was topped off by white lights. Bette would love it – almost as much as Tina loved the brunette.

    Tina poured herself a glass of red wine and sat down to admire her work. They had been living together for almost a month – Christmas was a week away and things were calming down at Tina’s work. Bette was gearing up for her big show in February – and that would be when Tina was taking the lead on a new comedy show that the production company was developing. So they would both be under pressure – it was going to be a time when Tina knew that it was vital that they supported one another – and she knew that they would.

    As Tina was considering getting herself another glass of wine while she made a start on dinner she heard the key turning in the front door – that announced the arrival of Bette. Tina lent back on the sofa and waited for Bette to get her first sight of their Christmas tree. The brunette came in carrying her briefcase and carrying a bunch of flowers. Tina watched Bette’s face for her reaction – she was not disappointed – she looked in awe at the tree and smiled her nicest and warmest smile

    “Its perfect “ Bette said

    Tina stood up

    “We kept talking about it – I just decided to go ahead and buy it – I hope you don’t mind that I did it myself “

    Bette shook her head “No – its wonderful – I love it “

    Tina moved to Bette and slipped her arm around her waist

    “I wanted you to love it “

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    2. wow maybe tina will at least talk to her mom. if anything they need to talk to willow poor kid is getting crap for her sister that doesn’t even live there! :)PPS

    3. Very nice chapter Ally, and their family situation is really complicated that you don’t know what is the right thing any more. thank you and please post soon. Love

    5. I like Bette and Tina’s commitment but it’s no fun for kids having parents who fyck around especially when they’re still living 2gether. The world has not caught up with ‘free love’ as yet. Especially not teenagers who can be very cruel. I feel for Willow and understand Tina’s contempt [almost] for her parents. PPS.

    7. Utterly glad that you posted and plan on continuing with this story. Its lovely, there so much love even between chaos. And you’re such a fantastic writer.

    12. Your pages seem to last longer than the average fanfic story. They are to be savored. They contain multiple layers and a rich story text. Are you going to L5?

    15. They really should not start a family until Tina grows up. She’s all about her gay pride-now that she’s gay, but she has an endless hissy about her parents’ unconventional marriage that suits them just fine. Kind of hypocritical on her part I’d say.

    16. So glad that Tina Dad came over to see her. Tina and Bette are happy,and his reaction to children was priceless. Tina standing by her gun for Christmas was being her own woman. thanks

    18. Thank you for bringing it back!!!!! I love this story. Actually, I love all of your stories, and how you form Bette and Tina’s personality in each. You are a phenominal writer, thank you. PPVS

    19. It’s so nice to see an update on this story. It’s one of my favorites. I’m glad Tina is talking to her dad. Hopefully a conversation with her mom isn’t too far off. It’s good that Bette and Tina are taking a holiday to themselves. Thanks for posting!

    25. thanks for that great update ally.a house with a pool and a garden. well i think i know a nice place :)and another holiday for them WOW that will make all my dreams come true

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