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Something so right – chapter 58
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“I do – its fantastic T “
Bette handed Tina the flowers
“For you “
“Thank you “
Bette put her briefcase down and rested her hand on Tina’s waist
“God I just love coming home to you “
Tina put the flowers on the chair behind her and put her other arm around Bette.
“I feel the same – work can be hell and I know that when I get home I have so much love and support “
Bette lent closer and kissed Tina – they moved nearer and the kiss slowly started to develop.
Tina moved her hand so they were wrapped around Bette’s neck – the kiss deepened for several seconds. Finally Tina came up for air
“That was the sort of kiss that tells me that you in a horny mood “
Bette didn’t reply – she kissed Tina again – harder and with intent that this was just the start of the evening together. When the kiss ended
“In a horny and silent mood tonight are you ?”
Bette nodded playing along with the joke. Tina smiled
“That bodes well for me “
“I am resting my tongue for taking care of you “
Tina burst out laughing
“Statement of intent ?”
“Yes “
“Been on your mind all day ?”
“It been on my mind since you fucked me in the shower this morning “
Tina raised her eyebrow at Bette
“Took you by surprise did it ?”
“I never expected to have that happen to me “
“You dropped the soap “
“I dropped the sponge “
“Saying soap sounds funnier “
“That sit com is going to turn you into another Alice – please do not let that happen”
Tina laughed
“I promise babe “
“Good – that deserves a reward “
Bette took hold of Tina by the head and kissed her with passion. While still kissing her Bette popped open the button that was holding Tina’s black trousers up – she tugged the zip down and placed the tip of two fingers against the soft material of her pants. Tina sighed – she had been thinking about Bette touching her during her idle moments most of the day.
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I was so happy when I saw this tory posted, Ally!!!! Wonderful Chapter!!! Thank you
wow maybe tina will at least talk to her mom. if anything they need to talk to willow poor kid is getting crap for her sister that doesn’t even live there! :)PPS
Very nice chapter Ally, and their family situation is really complicated that you don’t know what is the right thing any more. thank you and please post soon. Love
Thanks for updating this story Ally…it’s a really good one too. We can never have too many Ally updates.
I like Bette and Tina’s commitment but it’s no fun for kids having parents who fyck around especially when they’re still living 2gether. The world has not caught up with ‘free love’ as yet. Especially not teenagers who can be very cruel. I feel for Willow and understand Tina’s contempt [almost] for her parents. PPS.
I love the way Bette and Tina support each other. It’s beautiful.
Utterly glad that you posted and plan on continuing with this story. Its lovely, there so much love even between chaos. And you’re such a fantastic writer.
catching up. thx
That was great!
Nice update Ally…Love his reaction about having kids…
L5 ? Not going – i am far too shy !!
Your pages seem to last longer than the average fanfic story. They are to be savored. They contain multiple layers and a rich story text. Are you going to L5?
I’m so glad you decided to continue this story. It’s great! Thanks for sharing your talent.
i was so glad to see an update to this story! thanks, ally!
They really should not start a family until Tina grows up. She’s all about her gay pride-now that she’s gay, but she has an endless hissy about her parents’ unconventional marriage that suits them just fine. Kind of hypocritical on her part I’d say.
So glad that Tina Dad came over to see her. Tina and Bette are happy,and his reaction to children was priceless. Tina standing by her gun for Christmas was being her own woman. thanks
Seriously Ally, I wasn’t sure which story this was until Niall called. Don’t keep us waiting so long.
Thank you for bringing it back!!!!! I love this story. Actually, I love all of your stories, and how you form Bette and Tina’s personality in each. You are a phenominal writer, thank you. PPVS
It’s so nice to see an update on this story. It’s one of my favorites. I’m glad Tina is talking to her dad. Hopefully a conversation with her mom isn’t too far off. It’s good that Bette and Tina are taking a holiday to themselves. Thanks for posting!
bringing up parents is a challenge
Yeah, uh, who was it just had a birthday?
No funnyone – thats old age sweetie !
Blast you and your confounded logic!
i am still younger than you funnyone
thanks for that great update ally.a house with a pool and a garden. well i think i know a nice place :)and another holiday for them WOW that will make all my dreams come true