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Something so right – chapter 58
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“You have been in the flat less than five minutes “ Tina said between kisses
“I am sorry that I didn’t know there was a minimum time limit “
“There isn’t – I was just commenting “
“Well shut up “
Bette moved to the sofa and pulled Tina down to join her. Tina found herself on her back in a split second with Bette over her and leaning in for another kiss. Tina wrapped her arms around Bette’s neck and pulled her in so Bette had no option but to kiss her deeply. After a few minutes Bette eased back and looked at her
“Have I mentioned how much I love you ?”
Tina nodded “ Once or twice – you know I am really happy ?”
“Yes – its going well “
“Living together ?”
“Yes “
“The apartment isn’t really big enough – I do think we should start looking for a new place”
Bette stroked Tina’s hair
“Anything that you want “
“No Bette – you have to want it as well “
“It would be nice to have a place with a garden and a pool “
“I know – we could afford it “
“We could afford something really nice – I know how much we both earn “
“You wanted to wait six months “
“We could but if we see somewhere that we both love then I think that we should go for it. We don’t have to wait six months – you are my future babe “
Tina smiled – there were times when Bette could reduce her to tears with just a few simple and heartfelt words.
“You mean everything to me Bette. I know that what we have is special “
Bette touched Tina’s face and kissed her again. Already her passion was rising – she wanted Tina with a desire that frequently took her breathe away with how all consuming it was.
“Lets go and make love “she said softly
“That would work for me “ Tina replied smiling.
Just as Tina stood up the phone rang
“Ignore it “ Bette said
“I can’t “
“It will only be Alice wanting to wind me up “
“We haven’t seen her in days “
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I was so happy when I saw this tory posted, Ally!!!! Wonderful Chapter!!! Thank you
wow maybe tina will at least talk to her mom. if anything they need to talk to willow poor kid is getting crap for her sister that doesn’t even live there! :)PPS
Very nice chapter Ally, and their family situation is really complicated that you don’t know what is the right thing any more. thank you and please post soon. Love
Thanks for updating this story Ally…it’s a really good one too. We can never have too many Ally updates.
I like Bette and Tina’s commitment but it’s no fun for kids having parents who fyck around especially when they’re still living 2gether. The world has not caught up with ‘free love’ as yet. Especially not teenagers who can be very cruel. I feel for Willow and understand Tina’s contempt [almost] for her parents. PPS.
I love the way Bette and Tina support each other. It’s beautiful.
Utterly glad that you posted and plan on continuing with this story. Its lovely, there so much love even between chaos. And you’re such a fantastic writer.
catching up. thx
That was great!
Nice update Ally…Love his reaction about having kids…
L5 ? Not going – i am far too shy !!
Your pages seem to last longer than the average fanfic story. They are to be savored. They contain multiple layers and a rich story text. Are you going to L5?
I’m so glad you decided to continue this story. It’s great! Thanks for sharing your talent.
i was so glad to see an update to this story! thanks, ally!
They really should not start a family until Tina grows up. She’s all about her gay pride-now that she’s gay, but she has an endless hissy about her parents’ unconventional marriage that suits them just fine. Kind of hypocritical on her part I’d say.
So glad that Tina Dad came over to see her. Tina and Bette are happy,and his reaction to children was priceless. Tina standing by her gun for Christmas was being her own woman. thanks
Seriously Ally, I wasn’t sure which story this was until Niall called. Don’t keep us waiting so long.
Thank you for bringing it back!!!!! I love this story. Actually, I love all of your stories, and how you form Bette and Tina’s personality in each. You are a phenominal writer, thank you. PPVS
It’s so nice to see an update on this story. It’s one of my favorites. I’m glad Tina is talking to her dad. Hopefully a conversation with her mom isn’t too far off. It’s good that Bette and Tina are taking a holiday to themselves. Thanks for posting!
bringing up parents is a challenge
Yeah, uh, who was it just had a birthday?
No funnyone – thats old age sweetie !
Blast you and your confounded logic!
i am still younger than you funnyone
thanks for that great update ally.a house with a pool and a garden. well i think i know a nice place :)and another holiday for them WOW that will make all my dreams come true