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Something so right – chapter 61
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“I have grown a little “
“You want me to make you cry in front of Bette ?”
“Hell no – you better go – she seems keen to get you to herself “
Tina smiled
“Bette is a couple of weeks away from a huge exhibition at her gallery. Be careful not to upset her because when she gets angry she doesn’t take any prisoners and you are man – and a man who might threaten her time with me – just watch your step. Good night brother “
“Night sis – thanks again “
“Don’t make me regret this Finbar – sleep well “
Tina opened the bedroom door and closed it behind her
“Lock it “
“It doesn’t lock “
“I’ll ring a lock smith in the morning “
“He might need the toilet in the night “
“I don’t give a flying fuck – he is not going to catch us fucking “
Bette cast her jeans to one side and walked across – Tina could see the passion burning in her lovers eyes. In black matching pants and bra with her fantastically toned skin Tina could not stop a growl from emerging
“Grr – I need you so much “
Bette grabbed Tina and they started to kiss. Bette pulled Tina’s top up and started to remove it. She paused so she could feast her eyes on Tina’s breasts — suddenly Finn knocked at the door
“Oh for fucks sake “
Tina pulled her top back down and opened the door
“Sorry to bother you sis but “
Bette’s patience was about to snap – she went across to the door and faced the young man
“Is the apartment on fire ?” she asked dryly aware of the likely effect of her semi naked body would have on him
“Ah – eh – eh – um – – no “
“Can you smell gas ?”
“Eh – eh – no “
“Only if those two events occur are you to bother Tina and I when we go to bed at night. That is rule one through to a hundred of you living in this apartment “
“Yes Bette “
Tina could help but laugh as Bette slammed the door
“Get your clothes off – get on that bed and get your legs open “
This order caused Tina to crack up laughing
“Do you know how funny you are when you are being all alpha ?”
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Oh man fin couldn’t have called tina first? very immature, especially not to let his parents know, whose is next their little sister will? :)PPS
Hello Ally, Great update! Bette’s frustration was so hysterical and her taking it out on Finn was a real treat. No wonder Tina was in stitches. SHame that Finn’s arrival caused Tina’s tenuous relationship with her mother to weaken further. Especially as it upset Tina so much. I do think that Tina and her mom need to sort this out once and for all. Perhaps Bette will find a way to heal this wound. More to the point I hope that Bette and Tina can find some alone time and really enjoy each other’s company. Hot sex loving is due for this stressed out couple. Please let there be love… Many thanks for a fantastic rollercoaster ride. Your Loyal Fan.
Finn is probably thinking wow my sister is one lucky woman. PS
Alpha Bette at this point is funny but I do understand her frustrations. Is Willow showing up next? Tina’s mother has a lot of nerve accusing her but, we don’t know what Finn has been talking about or threatening to leave and we don’t know what has been going on at the farm between the rest of the family. Then he just up and disappears without a thought to anyone else and how they might feel about that. Kids.Great chapter AllyE. Post when you can.
Bette in frustration is cracking me up, and its only Fridau right. Just fantastic
Wow, That line was so sexy! Bette ordering Tina to get on the bed – I thought I was going to die. Amazing chapter! Now let’s see what else Bette tells Tina to do … hehehe. Thanks for posting! PPS!
O.K., there’s an easy resolution to this problem…Bett and Tina only have this weekend off and they had planned on it being a love fest…so they make good money, either they get a hotel for the weekend or they pay for Finn at a hotel for the weekend. Monday, everyone’s back at work and the 3 of them are back at the apartment together. Great chapter Ally!
I really got frustrated just reading how this Finn interrupted their weekend plans, I feel for Bette, poor thing she doesn’t needed all the family popping up in their house like that, if I were her I would change the address and not tell them what is it for awhile. God, Ally will you please send him away, he is so getting on my nerves. Post soon please. Love
“Is the apartment on fire ?” “Can you smell gas ?”ha ha haLOVE your story
That was funny and Tina need to do something quick or Bette gonna go crazy with her frustrations, poor Finn show up not in a good time lol. Please more, thanks!
He may be tall, but Finn is nowhere near being a man. He ran away from home without telling Mommy or Daddy for fear he’d never escape (I wasn’t aware the farm was encircled with razor wire) and couldn’t be bothered to call ahead. If that’s the best he can do he really should go home until he’s a bit more grown up.
Wonder what Finn wanted. But love a frustrated Bette and love this story! Thanks for posting!