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    Something so right – chapter 61

    Story written on November 24, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Bette and Tina and Finn

    SOMETHING SO RIGHT

     

    Chapter 61

     

    Bette’s heart fell when Finn dragged in a huge rucksack, an electric guitar and a small holdall into the apartment. Tina was fussing over him but Bette could sense that their intimate weekend was slipping away. He collapsed onto the sofa and looked around

     

    “This is a cool pad Tina – do you know that I had my first burger at the airport – it was so good and really cheap. So I had another one with cheese on it and I had some pie “

     

    Bette walked across to their drinks cabinet – her appetite looked like going unfulfilled with goofy Finn around – so she needed other sustenance. She poured a bourbon and looked at the 6ft 5in frame filling the whole of the sofa and made the bourbon a very large double

     

    “Finn – it is great to see you but what is going on ? “ Tina sat down on the edge of the coffee table facing her baby brother

     

    “I was watching a movie and I just wanted to see this city “

     

    Bette looked hopeful – her wishes quickly dashed when Finn said

     

    “Then I realised that I did not just want to visit LA – I wanted to live here – so I booked a one way ticket and here I am “

     

    “You didn’t pass any telephones on the way to the airport or once you got here ?” Bette asked sourly

     

    “Should I have rung ? Well I guess I should have. Tina – is it okay if I stay here until I find myself a job and a place ?”

     

    “Of course Finn -it is just amazing that you are here “

     

    Finn jumped up and launched himself at Tina – luckily Tina got up in time or the coffee table would have been the first casualty of the extra houseguest.

     

    “Thank you – I will be no bother – you will hardly know that I am here “

     

    Tina looked across at her partner

     

    “That is okay isn’t it babe ?”

    “Whatever – its been a long day – I think its time that we all went to bed “

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    2. Hello Ally, Great update! Bette’s frustration was so hysterical and her taking it out on Finn was a real treat. No wonder Tina was in stitches. SHame that Finn’s arrival caused Tina’s tenuous relationship with her mother to weaken further. Especially as it upset Tina so much. I do think that Tina and her mom need to sort this out once and for all. Perhaps Bette will find a way to heal this wound. More to the point I hope that Bette and Tina can find some alone time and really enjoy each other’s company. Hot sex loving is due for this stressed out couple. Please let there be love… Many thanks for a fantastic rollercoaster ride. Your Loyal Fan.

    4. Alpha Bette at this point is funny but I do understand her frustrations. Is Willow showing up next? Tina’s mother has a lot of nerve accusing her but, we don’t know what Finn has been talking about or threatening to leave and we don’t know what has been going on at the farm between the rest of the family. Then he just up and disappears without a thought to anyone else and how they might feel about that. Kids.Great chapter AllyE. Post when you can.

    6. Wow, That line was so sexy! Bette ordering Tina to get on the bed – I thought I was going to die. Amazing chapter! Now let’s see what else Bette tells Tina to do … hehehe. Thanks for posting! PPS!

    7. O.K., there’s an easy resolution to this problem…Bett and Tina only have this weekend off and they had planned on it being a love fest…so they make good money, either they get a hotel for the weekend or they pay for Finn at a hotel for the weekend. Monday, everyone’s back at work and the 3 of them are back at the apartment together. Great chapter Ally!

    8. I really got frustrated just reading how this Finn interrupted their weekend plans, I feel for Bette, poor thing she doesn’t needed all the family popping up in their house like that, if I were her I would change the address and not tell them what is it for awhile. God, Ally will you please send him away, he is so getting on my nerves. Post soon please. Love

    11. He may be tall, but Finn is nowhere near being a man. He ran away from home without telling Mommy or Daddy for fear he’d never escape (I wasn’t aware the farm was encircled with razor wire) and couldn’t be bothered to call ahead. If that’s the best he can do he really should go home until he’s a bit more grown up.

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