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Something so right – chapter 61
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“Bette “ Tina objected
“No babe. Your mother had no right to take it out on you and you are not going to take the flak for it. Finn ?”
Bette raised one eyebrow at the young man – he looked ashamed
“I am sorry – I just didn’t want to be talked out of leaving. She had no right taking it out on
Tina – I am sorry Tina “
“I understand that mom is difficult Finn but Bette is right – you have a right to do what you
want with your life and that includes exploring “
“Right – Tina and I are going to bed. The TV remotes are on top of the TV – try not to be too loud “ Bette took hold of Tina by the hand and they walked to their room door
“I will be in soon – just give me a few minutes with him “ she spoke quietly
Bette looked exasperated
“Please babe – I will not be long. I swear – he’s done a huge thing and he needs his big sister and you to be on his side “
Bette nodded “ Just remember I am waiting for you “
Bette went into their room and closed the door leaving Tina looking at her brother
“Do not worry about Bette – she is very fond of you but it has been a surprise to discover you
waiting for us “
“I had to leave the farm – I was afraid that I would never escape. “
Tina walked across and stroked his long hair
“I know that – I know that more than you think. Bette and I will support you in anything that you want to do but we are both busy career women and we desperately cherish the limited time we spend together. She knows how much my family mean to me but you have to be respectful of our privacy “
Finn nodded “ You and Bette are the best – I won’t mess things up for you “
“Or I will beat you up like I did when I lived at home “
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Oh man fin couldn’t have called tina first? very immature, especially not to let his parents know, whose is next their little sister will? :)PPS
Hello Ally, Great update! Bette’s frustration was so hysterical and her taking it out on Finn was a real treat. No wonder Tina was in stitches. SHame that Finn’s arrival caused Tina’s tenuous relationship with her mother to weaken further. Especially as it upset Tina so much. I do think that Tina and her mom need to sort this out once and for all. Perhaps Bette will find a way to heal this wound. More to the point I hope that Bette and Tina can find some alone time and really enjoy each other’s company. Hot sex loving is due for this stressed out couple. Please let there be love… Many thanks for a fantastic rollercoaster ride. Your Loyal Fan.
Finn is probably thinking wow my sister is one lucky woman. PS
Alpha Bette at this point is funny but I do understand her frustrations. Is Willow showing up next? Tina’s mother has a lot of nerve accusing her but, we don’t know what Finn has been talking about or threatening to leave and we don’t know what has been going on at the farm between the rest of the family. Then he just up and disappears without a thought to anyone else and how they might feel about that. Kids.Great chapter AllyE. Post when you can.
Bette in frustration is cracking me up, and its only Fridau right. Just fantastic
Wow, That line was so sexy! Bette ordering Tina to get on the bed – I thought I was going to die. Amazing chapter! Now let’s see what else Bette tells Tina to do … hehehe. Thanks for posting! PPS!
O.K., there’s an easy resolution to this problem…Bett and Tina only have this weekend off and they had planned on it being a love fest…so they make good money, either they get a hotel for the weekend or they pay for Finn at a hotel for the weekend. Monday, everyone’s back at work and the 3 of them are back at the apartment together. Great chapter Ally!
I really got frustrated just reading how this Finn interrupted their weekend plans, I feel for Bette, poor thing she doesn’t needed all the family popping up in their house like that, if I were her I would change the address and not tell them what is it for awhile. God, Ally will you please send him away, he is so getting on my nerves. Post soon please. Love
“Is the apartment on fire ?” “Can you smell gas ?”ha ha haLOVE your story
That was funny and Tina need to do something quick or Bette gonna go crazy with her frustrations, poor Finn show up not in a good time lol. Please more, thanks!
He may be tall, but Finn is nowhere near being a man. He ran away from home without telling Mommy or Daddy for fear he’d never escape (I wasn’t aware the farm was encircled with razor wire) and couldn’t be bothered to call ahead. If that’s the best he can do he really should go home until he’s a bit more grown up.
Wonder what Finn wanted. But love a frustrated Bette and love this story! Thanks for posting!