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Something so right -chapter 62
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“What ?”
“Are you going to turn me down because of Finn being around ?”
Tina sighed “ I don’t know “
“TINA ! “
“He’s my baby brother – its sick that he can hear me having sex with you ?”
“Better that him hearing your mother having sex with the hired hand “
“Bette – that’s enough – stop it “
“I’m not doing anything – I am trying to show my lover some affection- what’s wrong with that “
“You are laughing at him and my family “
Bette knew that Tina was wound up – she shock her head
“No – that is the last thing that I would do “
“It sounds like it “
Bette took hold of Tina’s hand “ Babe- I am not teasing you or your family. I don’t care that he can hear us “
“You resent him being here “
“No – well – yes – I would have liked if he had given us some notice so we could have done more for him but I don’t resent him being here because I know how much it means to you. I know what your family means to you. Have you forgotten that I was the person who is on your side all of the time “
Bette stroked Tina’s cheek – the blonde managed a small smile
“Okay – I am sorry Bette “
Bette pulled Tina up and they had a full body hug.
“We will be okay won’t we Bette ?”
“Of course – I think Finn is big enough to take me squashing him a few times. Why don’t you go and get dressed and we will take him for pancakes at the Planet – and then we can show him around the place – maybe between us we could afford a loan so he can get some wheels “
“You mean it ?”
“Look at it this way babe – the quicker he gets mobile the quicker you and I get the apartment to ourselves most of the time and maybe we can get him a job delivering pizzas so he is out of the house when you and I want to get friendly “
Tina smiled “ I love you “
“I love you and I am fond in my own way of your family – God knows why when they do make the Addams Family look like the Waltons “
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Thanks for the update, Ally. I think Finn needs to leave ASAP. pps
In-laws always complicate a relationship, I think we’ve all been there. I sympathize with both points of view on this one. Finn needs to find himself a frat house, and live a little.
You know, I do understamd Bette’s disappointment about not having Tina alone all weekend as she planned, but instead of getting all bent out of shape about it, they should consider some alternatives. They are supposed to be smart people. Great update Ally!
It’s about time that Bette came around. At first i thought she was acting so grumpy b/c she needed to get laid but even after that night of passion she still woke up cranky and picking at Finn. I kow he isn’t a kid but give the guy a break. Farmboy to Cityboy is a big transition. It is kinda funny that Tina was super embarassed and Bette had no shame about Finn hearing all their love making the night before. Can’t wait to read what happens next. Hopefully three doesn’t become a crowd and start problems for TiBette. PPS!
Loving this story. IMHO> Bette’s being a little bit mean I think. Finn must think she is a B!!chThe comments about her (Tina’s) family are just wrong..
That was great and hope Finn will find a place for himself soon so B&T can be alone. Please post more, thanks!
bette is right finn needs to get some comments to himself, afterall he didnt give them any notice. tina and finn need to finish their talk so tina can see where finn is thinking of heading! awesome:)PPS
Well I agree with everybody else, he needs to keep those comments for himself, I mean he is the one who came crashing their privacy and home, what did he expect, they hold their life and love for him, I know it sounds a little harsh but it sucks when it happens to anybody who desires the comfort of home and privacy and want to enjoy it as he planned. Thanks Ally, you are incredible and every chapter you post is better than the other. Post soon please. Love
Iknow both B&T were dissapointed about Finn just showing up, but Bette needs to show a lot more maturity here. She knows how tramatized Tina was and is by her parents relationship, so she should understand Finn need to get away from the farm. Besides LA is NOT the enviornment you just someone from a farm or smaller city into. Finn could easily get involved with the wring croud as get hooked on drugs or worse. Tina is right for wanting to look out for him as he gets on his feet. They need to look for a house so that they could move into some place with more space.
I love this story!! Can’t wait to hear what you have in store for our loving couple. PPS
Bette is being more juvenile than Finn. Yes, he should gave called and he should keep the comments to himself. Neither of them are thinking clearly. If Bette still has her apartment why don’t they let Finn have that apt or Tina’s apt and they go to Bette’s. (can’t remember if Bette let her apt go). They could help him enroll in college and a dorm or help him find a job and a small place to live.But the first thing is Bette needs to act her age and stop being a snippy bitch. If she keeps that up she will turn Tina from her.Tina will not abandon her brother, nor should she. Great chapter. Post when you can.
I’m not suggesting they throw him out on the street, but neither Bette nor Tina are Finn’s mommy. The should help him either get on his feet there or to get back home, but they also need to set ground rules for him (well beyond smart alecky comments about their sex life) since he clearly doesn’t impose any on himself. And if Tina is serious about being with Bette, she needs to be more considerate of her feelings and less worried about nurturing little brother.
Love this story! Thanks for posting!
I feel sorry for B&T. Finn being there is not going to be easy. Bette has been there for Tina all along but sometime enough is enough. Thanks Great Chapter!!!