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Something so right – chapter 67
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Tina laughed “I am not sure if its your scene Shane “
“A good dose of fresh air and organic food might be just the tonic. “
“I am going to ring dad next week and ask if he will send a couple of veg boxes to us.”
“Shane doesn’t do vegetables “ Tina replied
“Well – that’s not true – Finn has been telling me about how delicious the food is that he produced on the farm and we have started to cook “
“Finn- when you said you wanted to make new friends I didn’t know that they had to be my friends “
“Tina – Finn and I are cool. For a man he’s really nice “
Finn beamed “I just have a certain way with women -gay or straight “
“That’s true – he has a very well defined gay dar “
“You have a gay dar ?” Tina said slightly taken aback
“I do “ he beamed “ Shane helped me “
“We sat in The Planet one afternoon and by the end of it he was spotting lesbians quicker than me “
“You should think of teaching that skill at night school “ Tina told Shane “ What do you think of the show ?”
“This piece is cool “ Shane said
“And the food is great – pity there is no beer. “
“And we have been people watching “ Shane admitted “How are you doing Tina ?”
Tina nodded “It means so much to both of us to be beside Bette for what is the most important night of her life. She is wonderful – I am so proud of her “
“Its obvious that she loves you “
“I adore her “ Tina confirmed
“She is getting a lot of admiring looks “ Shane commented
“I know and she isn’t interested “
Finn walked across to get more food from a very attractive looking waitress. Tina watched him
“Are you really friends with him ?” Tina asked
“Yes – he is a great laugh – he is very funny and he has a very kind heart. We have similar taste in music and I think that
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Okay, Ally… you know I love this story, but Tina needs to put her notions about marriage related to her parent’s arrangement to rest and move on to the monogomist union example she and Bette can define… seriously! Tina needs to say YES! *wink* PPS!
Oh my God Ally that is worse than Miss Chaiken herself.I don’t believe Tina said NO. Then again with her parents marriage being the way that it is, she maybe scared.I hope this doesn’t mean they will separate or anything like that.
ÙAlly what’s that???? Did you honestly ended this chapter like this, I am shocked, why did you do this to Bette?? My God my heart is breaking for her, I honestly didn’t see that coming, I mean what does Tina have to say to justify herself??? Unless she wanted to be the one who propose. PLEASE post soon, you are probably laughing at us and at our comments, I feel like you have something in store and I can’t wait to find out what is it exactly. Thank you so much for being the amazing writer and one the most talented writers that you are. Love
Aww why Tina why? PPS
The night was going so well. Why did Tina say no? There better be a good explanation for this. Thanks for posting!
OMG, I think Tina said no because of her parents lousy open marriage. But the embarrassment for Bette is astronomical. I feel so sad and sorry for Bette that others have witnessed this debacle, not to mention ruining one of the greatest nights of Bette’s life. Please post your explanation very soon. Thanks for posting, I think.
Are you kidding…who would ever believe theywould say no to Bette Porter???? There better be a way out of this Ally. Great update and it certainly made everyone take notice!
Aahhh.So cruel of you for leaving it like that. PPS :)
Ok gang, the fugitive’s name is ‘Ally Emmerson’ she’s on the run…we’re gonna spread out and check every hen house, pool house and dog house in the area… LOL! Got carried away there but you better post soon or I will send my posse out to get you!
WHAT!!!!!!!! (i just scared the dog with my screaming)
Please don’t do this to us, your loyal readers! Not nice! And it was so good up to the last line!
This is a joke right, Please update soon
So you are saying that Bette is on her knee and Tina says no? All I have to say is why Ally why? I know you love the cliffhangers but this was just cruel. Excuse me as I wipe a tear from my eye.
oh my god !! Why ………… I am really sad now – PPS really soon I cant cope !
Just got caught up on this story and loving it. I hope that Tina is just in shock and rethinks her answer. Please? PPS!
What?….you bette continue this and soon!
Ok, before any panic sets in here is my take. The no, is because Tina is going to whip out a ring and ask her……..pls pls pls.
What?!?! And you stop at that. Bad, Ally. Bad! This is a great chapter… But I think a page is missing. ;) PPS
hihi oke you held something back for us huh! because this isn’t happening, is it?!? :S OMG.. you have the worst timing you know, how can you stop right here.. there is something about writers, they always stop at the wrong moment you know! :P but i like it, i have some fate.. so do not disappoint me oke!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PPS! and thank you very much for this update :)
You’re bad, Ally! You know you can’t stop there! Just maybe Tina is saying no because she wants to propose to Bette! PPS
what? why did u stop there? hopefully tina has a good reason for saying like she has a ring for bette?:)PPS
oh boy… good thing its a friday which i am hoping means you will have time to give us the next chapter over the weekend! at least i’m sure that B&T will be fine in your hands :)
Ally, that was just bad of you to stop there. Why would Tina say No? Please give us a new chapter ASAP!!!! Thanks
Noooooo, why oh why do cliffies even exist!!! Come on Ally… between you and Tina are going to give me a heart attack! What’s wrong with that girl, why doesn’t she want to marry Bette?? Great update… oh and I didn’t leave a comment on JTWYA but I’m still loving every minute of it! Please post pretty soon… pleeaasssee?? :o)
WTF! No!!! i am so hurt for bette or is T or U playing us? pps
I tend to agree with honda90, but the fact that Bette ask her to marry her and she said No worries me. I could see if she asked her to be her wife and she said No I want you to be MY wife and wipped out a ring. Come on Ally PPVS :o).
OMFG NO ???? O_oPPS ally PLEASE
Oh Ally you’re such a tease! Anyway who says no to Bette Porter? Please explain before too long, pretty please!
Oh, Ally, you are sooooo naughty! Hehe! What were the Hitchcock films Shane and Finn saw? Vertigo is my favorite, but I admit it had to grow on me and I wonder if those two are quite old enough to appreciate it fully.
oh no why ????????