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Something so right – chapter 73
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“God – serious – how are you ?”
“I have been better – I need rest and some oxygen “
“And some loving from Bette “
Bette smiled “While you two have a brother and sister chat I am going down to the hospital shop to get you some things – take care of her and don’t make her laugh too much “
“He’s not that funny “ Tina replied smiling at her brother.
Bette left the room – she needed some fresh air and she was flagging – she needed sleep and some rest but there was no way she was going to leave Tina’s side when she needed her. And Bette was in no doubt that Tina had been shaken by the words of the doctor. Tina loved being fit and their relationship thrived on how competitive they both were. Neither were good losers but they were learning that it wasn’t possible for one of them to win all the time. Tina was the better runner – something that Bette hated, but Bette was the better swimmer and they were pretty equal when it came to cycling – so the triathlon would have been a good measure of their individual skills.
Bette vowed to pull out of the triathlon – they could do another one in the future. Bette went out in search of some fresh air – she needed to get an handle on everything
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Finn looked at his sister
“You scared us “ he said
“I don’t think I did myself any good “
“What did the doctor say ?”
“I have damaged my lungs – its not permanent – I will recover but it’s a matter of time and rest “
“Are you in a lot of pain -this is me remember – not Bette “
Tina thought about lying but she nodded
“Yes – there is a horrible tightness in my chest and when I cough it hurts “
Finn hugged her “ You are a Kennard and we are damn near invincible “
“I know that “ Tina coughed again. Finn looked concerned
“Apparently when I cough and I feel phlegm in my mouth I have to spit it out – it will be a test of how fast my lungs are recovering – for a while it will be pretty black stuff “
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Yay Tina is alright! and Bette is just too cute spoiling Tina like that! Parents can stay home for till Tina is recovered in my mind! PPS:)
Well, I think Finn can sell it to the parents to stay away for now, by telling them that Tina wants to see them in a few weeks. If they are smart, they will listen to him. They really started to communicate in this chapter, but I was sorry to see that without this catastrophic catalyst they couldn’t find common ground. Hoping you update again soon Ally…thanks!
well sometimes you write a chapter that just take my breathe away. i hope you will stay for a couple of weeks here because you write the interaction between them sooo good !and admit that teddy bear is from 604 ;) give it back to BooBooPPS ally
I am releaved, Thank God that it went well, and they are both OK and found their way back to each other. It’s wonderful the way they love each other, it kind of reminded me of love and pride, I don’t know why but I missed this story so very much, and I was wondering when will you post it again Ally??? I hope we can see B&T healthy and happy in the next chapter, and for them to find a new common thing to do while getting Tina better again. Thanks Hun, you are great. Love
I am glad to hear that Tina is going to be fine. Yes, they need to talk. Tina has had Bette face her demons, gragually. I think it’s time that Tina faces her fear about marriage. As Helena has said before she and Bette are NOT her parents. It is not fair to Bette.
Nice to see them willing to discuss. Too bad it took a crisis to do so but maybe that’s what it took to move them from spots. ITA w/funnyone. Tina and Finn must be from the English part of NC.
aahww thank you,, they are so sweet together! love your story, but they really need to talk :) PPS!
I loved this chapter!! Thanks ally!!
Wonderful chapter, AllyE. Parents need to stay away till later. They need to talk seriously and Tina has named the things they need to discuss including others she did not mention but the crux of the matter has been voiced. Thanks for psoting. Post when you can.
Wonderful chapter, AllyE. Parents need to stay away till later. They need to talk seriously and Tina has named the things they need to discuss including others she did not mention but the crux of the matter has been voiced. Thanks for psoting. Post when you can.
Glade that Tina will be okay. Finn love the both so much,and understands both of them and the stubborness in both. Her parents shouldnt come for a couple of weeks but should come. thanks
Love this story and chapter. PPS please Ally.
Thanks god Tina is ok and hope she get well soon. B&T need to talk and work thing out when Tina is well. Please post soon, thanks!
lovely; and great that they equals. thx.
So glad that Bette and Tina made up. Thanks for yet another fabulous update.
So they’ve finally kissed and started the long road to making up. We can all breathe a sigh of relief now. But they do need to talk some more about all the difficult stuff about their relationship and their future. Thanks a bunch for this update, Ally! :>
thank you for brightening my weekend, ally! :) loved this chapter. good to see them really starting to communicate and handling this mess maturely. enjoy your movie night!
I just loved this chapter. Finally they are communicating, but have so much more to talk about. Nix to the parental visit too, unless Tina’s mum apologizes to Bette.
You know, I’ve inhaled a fair amount of smoke in my day, but never in enough concentration to put me in the hospital. However, I HAVE woken up in the hospital and seriously, as much as you want to be elsewhere, if you’re that sick, you don’t really feel like jumping out of that uncomfortable bed. And yes, just as it’s not the best make out spot, it’s also not the place for deep relationship discussions. I was struck by how oddly people from North Carolina speak: Mums in bloody knickers. Or is it bloody mums in knickers? Despite their ongoing beef, I don’t see how Tina’s parents could be made to stay away under the circumstances.
well at least tina will be okay! yes ia gree they both need to talk… not sure about the parents coming to visit could create world war 4…:)PPS