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Something so right – chapter 73
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after me. I don’t want to have to rehash all the old ground with my mother”
“You don’t think its time to bury the hatchet ? “
Tina sniffed “Probably but not when I feel like shit and not when Bette has a show. Maybe we will go and see
them when its all over. I want to see Willow anyway “
“You want me to come along ?”
“When I go back to the farm ? Yes you will be with me “
“But if you let them come here they would see that we are both doing really well “
Tin nodded – he had a point
“Get them off our backs for a few weeks and we can look at it again. I do think its time to maybe meet mum
half way over this whole business “
“I will go back as long as you and Bette promise me that you won’t let me stay “
“Do you want to stay ?”
“NO – I love living here – there is so much happening – I have never been happier”
“I am the same – for all the crap that has happened in the last 18 hours or so – I love Bette more than I can express and she is so perfect “
“I am glad – I have to go to work. I will come in and see you tomorrow – is there anything I can bring you in ?”
“You might have to drag Bette home- I don’t think she is planning to leave my side tonight “
Finn stood up and looked down at his sister
“If she was in hospital with smoke inhalation and coughing up black phlegm would you leave her side ?”
Tina thought about it
“No – no I wouldn’t “
“You have to have it equal in all ways “ he said
“You mean I cannot stop her worrying about me when I would be the same if it was her?”
“Pretty much – see you Tina – I am glad that you are okay “
“You worried ? “ she teased
“Nah – I am not that lucky “
Tina laughed which made her cough again
“Just as well I am not that funny then “
He kissed her brow and left .
Bette returned after 20 minutes – Tina looked at her with amusement when she walked in
“You just love shopping “ Tina commented “ What have you bought me ?”
Bette put her bag down and sat down and delved inside
“Bottle of squash for your water “
“That’s great “
“Magazines “ Bette handed Tina the current edition of three movie magazines
“Fruit “
“A bag of candy “
“Bette” Tina said softly
“Am I spoiling you ?”
Tina nodded
“So if I bought you something really childish you would be cross ?”
“Depends “
Bette pulled a teddy bear out of the bag and smiled sheepishly at Tina.
“Bette – promise me something “
“That I have to stop spoiling you ?”
Tina shook her head – she took hold of Bette’s hands
“Promise me that you will love me this much for the rest of our lives. Never change – because I love you for the stubborn, arrogant pain in the ass you are right now “
Bette moved close and for the first time she placed a soft kiss on Tina’s lips before whispering
“As long as you don’t stop being the stubborn pain in the ass that you are “
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Yay Tina is alright! and Bette is just too cute spoiling Tina like that! Parents can stay home for till Tina is recovered in my mind! PPS:)
Well, I think Finn can sell it to the parents to stay away for now, by telling them that Tina wants to see them in a few weeks. If they are smart, they will listen to him. They really started to communicate in this chapter, but I was sorry to see that without this catastrophic catalyst they couldn’t find common ground. Hoping you update again soon Ally…thanks!
well sometimes you write a chapter that just take my breathe away. i hope you will stay for a couple of weeks here because you write the interaction between them sooo good !and admit that teddy bear is from 604 ;) give it back to BooBooPPS ally
I am releaved, Thank God that it went well, and they are both OK and found their way back to each other. It’s wonderful the way they love each other, it kind of reminded me of love and pride, I don’t know why but I missed this story so very much, and I was wondering when will you post it again Ally??? I hope we can see B&T healthy and happy in the next chapter, and for them to find a new common thing to do while getting Tina better again. Thanks Hun, you are great. Love
I am glad to hear that Tina is going to be fine. Yes, they need to talk. Tina has had Bette face her demons, gragually. I think it’s time that Tina faces her fear about marriage. As Helena has said before she and Bette are NOT her parents. It is not fair to Bette.
Nice to see them willing to discuss. Too bad it took a crisis to do so but maybe that’s what it took to move them from spots. ITA w/funnyone. Tina and Finn must be from the English part of NC.
aahww thank you,, they are so sweet together! love your story, but they really need to talk :) PPS!
I loved this chapter!! Thanks ally!!
Wonderful chapter, AllyE. Parents need to stay away till later. They need to talk seriously and Tina has named the things they need to discuss including others she did not mention but the crux of the matter has been voiced. Thanks for psoting. Post when you can.
Wonderful chapter, AllyE. Parents need to stay away till later. They need to talk seriously and Tina has named the things they need to discuss including others she did not mention but the crux of the matter has been voiced. Thanks for psoting. Post when you can.
Glade that Tina will be okay. Finn love the both so much,and understands both of them and the stubborness in both. Her parents shouldnt come for a couple of weeks but should come. thanks
Love this story and chapter. PPS please Ally.
Thanks god Tina is ok and hope she get well soon. B&T need to talk and work thing out when Tina is well. Please post soon, thanks!
lovely; and great that they equals. thx.
So glad that Bette and Tina made up. Thanks for yet another fabulous update.
So they’ve finally kissed and started the long road to making up. We can all breathe a sigh of relief now. But they do need to talk some more about all the difficult stuff about their relationship and their future. Thanks a bunch for this update, Ally! :>
thank you for brightening my weekend, ally! :) loved this chapter. good to see them really starting to communicate and handling this mess maturely. enjoy your movie night!
I just loved this chapter. Finally they are communicating, but have so much more to talk about. Nix to the parental visit too, unless Tina’s mum apologizes to Bette.
You know, I’ve inhaled a fair amount of smoke in my day, but never in enough concentration to put me in the hospital. However, I HAVE woken up in the hospital and seriously, as much as you want to be elsewhere, if you’re that sick, you don’t really feel like jumping out of that uncomfortable bed. And yes, just as it’s not the best make out spot, it’s also not the place for deep relationship discussions. I was struck by how oddly people from North Carolina speak: Mums in bloody knickers. Or is it bloody mums in knickers? Despite their ongoing beef, I don’t see how Tina’s parents could be made to stay away under the circumstances.
well at least tina will be okay! yes ia gree they both need to talk… not sure about the parents coming to visit could create world war 4…:)PPS