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    Something so right – Chapter 85

     

    “Chinese ? “

     

    “Yes “

     

    “You wanted to go out “

     

    “It doesn’t matter – I am still loving how great it is to be living in our dream house – a night in is fine by me “

     

    “Thanks “ Bette kissed Tina on the lips “ You are so good for me “

     

    “Its two way you know “

     

     

    Tina touched Bette’s face – Bette was vulnerable at the moment and Tina was feeling very defensive towards her. She just wanted to do anything that she could to take away the heavy load that was sitting on her partner’s shoulder. Tina rested her forehead against Bette’s

     

    “I am worried about you “

     

    “I’ll be okay – its just overwhelming “

     

    “I was very touched when you were both crying “

     

    “She was saying that she couldn’t believe that she was sitting having breakfast with me “

     

     

    “it’s a lot for both of you – you both need to go at a slow pace. There will be times when you are dealing better with it than her and visa versa. it’s going to be a long process “

     

    “Just to see her and hear her story – you know that my biggest fear was that she just wasn’t interested “

     

    “Well I think we know that she is definitely interested “

    Bette kissed Tina and stood up “Lets go into the house – I need a drink “

     

    Tina followed her inside – Bette got a beer from the fridge and offered it to Tina

     

    “Not for me “

     

    “Okay “

     

    They walked through to sitting room – Bette sat down and Tina joined her. Bette opened the bottle and took a long satisfying drink

     

    “She’s so like me that its scary Tina “

     

    Tina nodded

     

    “A highly competitive Yale educated Lesbian “ Bette said “ Its amazing “

     

    “Who is a coffee snob, always on time and may I say has all the charm and personality of her daughter “

     

    “It must be weird for you to watch the two of us “ Bette laughed

    Comments

    1. I love B’s beautiful story of her life w/T. B is understandably wary of Elizabeth, but at least she is open to the possibility of allowing her into her life. PPS!

    2. Gosh, I have been waiting for this update forever. I am glad to see it. I’m loving this story so much right now. I want to see how this relationship between those two unfolds. Keep it coming, please.

    3. What a delight to see this today! Ally this was beautifully written. Tina’s sensitivity to Bette is wonderful and I love the conversations Bette and her Mom are having. I’m glad your weekend was so good. I love it when you’re in the writing mood!

    4. Nice one!!!! Listen to Tina Bette. You need some loving about now. I’m eager to learn more about Elizabeth and Hannah so hoping there will be some family time. Thx for the entertainment.

    5. Thanks for updating this. I love this story. I love the way you have written Tina to be a strong person with convictions and the confidence to stand behind them. She really is a good match with Bette.

    6. I love this story and have so missed it! Thank you for posting and it’s excellent that Bette’s talking to her mother and telling her how she feels. Love how Tina is there for Bette as wel. Thank you again for posting :)

    7. Yehey! Its been sometime on this one. And great writing as ever. The reconciliation of Bette and her mother may take longer than they were apart, but its a start that they are both willing to get on. Tina is so good for Bette. PPS

    8. This is a great story AllyE and am so happy that Bette is talking to her mother. I think they will be great for each other and I can’t wait until they confront Melvin and get his feeble explanations as to his actions. Bette will have to be extra kind to Tina. Thanks for posting.

    9. I so love this story!!! I an glad Bette is talking to her mother about what she is feeling. Now I can not wait to see how Bette makes it up to Tina. Thank you Ally

    10. I didn’t realize how much I’ve missed all your postings til now….Where the heck have you been, pls don’t go away there again or at least take us with you!!! Can’t wait for more, TKS

    11. Your writing is so descriptive. I am actually feeling Bette’s pain and longing for her mother to be back in her life yet Bette being circumspect about this happening. She has that little girl fear of abandonment. That’s what your writing does.

    12. Your writing is so fantastic… I’m really glad you decided to come back. Bette’s confusion and fear and joy at having her mother back all come through so clearly. And Tina is being so great at supporting her through it.

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