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Something so right – Chapter 85
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“She’s so like you Bette “
“I want to be her daughter – I want a relationship with her but what if she walks away again? What if it becomes too much for her – I don’t know what I would do “
“Well you have to get that idea out of your head – this is not like when she left you and your father. She isn’t drinking, she is obviously much more stable – she has a partner and she is the CEO of a huge investment company – history is not going to repeat itself Bette. She wants to get to know you – she’s looked for you for so long and she’s found you “
“I want to be angry with her – I want to yell at her and ask her why she wasn’t there to tell me the facts of life or to explain things to me when my periods started – or why she wasn’t there for me to talk over how I felt about knowing that I was gay “ Bette had tears in her eyes “ It was so hard Tina “
Tina took the beer bottle out of Bette’s hand and pulled her close
“Its okay babe “
Bette rested her head on Tina’s shoulder and started crying.
“Its okay babe – come on- cry all you want sweetie “
Bette sobbed as Tina held her close – she really appreciated that Tina was always there to catch her when life caused her to stumble. Tina stroked Bette’s hair and rubbed her back.
Slowly Bette calmed down and finally pulled back
“Thanks “
“You okay ?”
“Its just been a lot to take in “
“I know that “ Tina said “Why don’t you go in the bath ?”
“Yeah – I think I need one “
They kissed for a few seconds before Bette headed into the bathroom. Tina got a couple of plates out and put them out ready for the arrival of their Chinese food. Ten minutes later the delivery man arrived and Tina paid for their food which was piping hot. She left the bags in the kitchen and went in to see how Bette was doing. The brunette was standing in their bedroom with a huge towel wrapped around her body – she was brushing her long wet hair. Bette walked around the bedroom and stood looking out of the window. Tina watched her – she knew it was inappropriate but she was fighting a rising desire for her lover. She loved Bette so much and what she longed to do was to take Bette into their bed and make her forget about everything other than what was happening between them on a purely physical level.
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thx for the update. good convo
I like the interaction between Bette and her mom. I think a dinner with Hannah and Tina might be in order. Thanks for posting!
I love B’s beautiful story of her life w/T. B is understandably wary of Elizabeth, but at least she is open to the possibility of allowing her into her life. PPS!
Gosh, I have been waiting for this update forever. I am glad to see it. I’m loving this story so much right now. I want to see how this relationship between those two unfolds. Keep it coming, please.
What a delight to see this today! Ally this was beautifully written. Tina’s sensitivity to Bette is wonderful and I love the conversations Bette and her Mom are having. I’m glad your weekend was so good. I love it when you’re in the writing mood!
Its nice to see both Elizabeth’s talking to each other. May Bette’s fears be put to rest. Great post.
:) Bette has a mommy. More please :)
Nice one!!!! Listen to Tina Bette. You need some loving about now. I’m eager to learn more about Elizabeth and Hannah so hoping there will be some family time. Thx for the entertainment.
Thanks for updating this. I love this story. I love the way you have written Tina to be a strong person with convictions and the confidence to stand behind them. She really is a good match with Bette.
I love this story and have so missed it! Thank you for posting and it’s excellent that Bette’s talking to her mother and telling her how she feels. Love how Tina is there for Bette as wel. Thank you again for posting :)
Yehey! Its been sometime on this one. And great writing as ever. The reconciliation of Bette and her mother may take longer than they were apart, but its a start that they are both willing to get on. Tina is so good for Bette. PPS
This is a great story AllyE and am so happy that Bette is talking to her mother. I think they will be great for each other and I can’t wait until they confront Melvin and get his feeble explanations as to his actions. Bette will have to be extra kind to Tina. Thanks for posting.
I so love this story!!! I an glad Bette is talking to her mother about what she is feeling. Now I can not wait to see how Bette makes it up to Tina. Thank you Ally
I didn’t realize how much I’ve missed all your postings til now….Where the heck have you been, pls don’t go away there again or at least take us with you!!! Can’t wait for more, TKS
Your writing is so descriptive. I am actually feeling Bette’s pain and longing for her mother to be back in her life yet Bette being circumspect about this happening. She has that little girl fear of abandonment. That’s what your writing does.
Well I hope you have only amazing weeks from now on. Thank you for this.
Hooray Ally!
Your writing is so fantastic… I’m really glad you decided to come back. Bette’s confusion and fear and joy at having her mother back all come through so clearly. And Tina is being so great at supporting her through it.
That was great and glad to see Bette is have a talk with her mother. Please post more, thanks!