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Something so right – chapter 95
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“Bette and I can sort that out. Actually Bette has a first class business brain – she should look at the books – will mom agree ?”
“Mom isn’t going to be given an alternative “ Finn said “ Without help she isn’t going to be able to cope. What are you planning to do tomorrow ?”
“Go see grandpa and gran – take Bette with me to meet them “
He grinned
“Funny ? “
“Grandma was pumping me for information about Bette last Christmas “
“What did you tell her ?”
Finn stood up “That Bette’s beautiful, intelligent, kind and is way too good for my sister “
Tina laughed and got up slapping Finn around the head as he went inside. Tina followed him into the house making sure the house was locked up for the night.
Going upstairs she opened the bedroom door. The room was dimly lit with candles and across in her bed she could see Bette lying on her side. Tina quickly stripped naked and crept across. If Bette was asleep she didn’t want to disturb her. Not many girlfriends would do what she had done without Tina asking or without the slightest delay to weigh things up. It had been Bette’s instinct to instantly say that she would be by Tina’s side. That meant everything to Tina – that Bette didn’t have to think about things – she knew what was the right thing to do. Tina really didn’t think that Bette would ever know how she felt about her. Which was ironic because she knew that Bette often said that Tina would never know how much she loved her. I guess that meant that they were both blessed with the love that they had found in one another.
Tina snuggled up to Bette and rested her hand on her side and kissed her back
“You awake ?”
“I wasn’t until your cold hand touched my warm skin “
“Sorry “ Tina giggled
“I am glad that you find it funny”
“I’m sorry B “
“If you were really sorry you wouldn’t do it every time you come to bed after me”
Tina found this even funnier and laughed. Bette rolled over and looked at Tina.
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Great Chapter!!! I am glad Sarah is seeing how Bette and Tina belong together. Now I hope Tina’s grandparents will be kind to Bette. I hope the B&T find Tina’s dad. Thank you Ally
That was great and can’t wait to see Bette meet Tina’s grandparents. Please post more, thanks!
I’m going to agree with geekgal’s gay dad theory. Can’t wait for the intro to the grandparents.
I love how Bette and Tina support each other.
something is up with dad, might be gay? dunno but great updates!!! :)PPS
The Niall mystery deepens by the minute. I can’t wait to see what Tina’s grandparents think about Bette. They are young enough though to have a more open mind than some. Absolutely fabulous chapter Ally. PPS!
I think Tina’s dad is gay (and initially hid it) which is why they had an open marriage (so her mom could have sex with others)and was mad when she found out Tina was gay.
It’s almost sad to see this kinda defeated version of Sarah, who went from this formidable woman who her 6’5″ son was scared of to someone who will just let her kids make decisions about her business when she hadn’t been willing to make changes before. It seems like Niall’s devotion was returned in spades if not in quite such an obvious manner. It’s a nuanced thing but you do those so well, Ally. Thanks for posting!
Thanks for the update. I’m so glad Sarah is welcoming Bette this time around. It seems that this experience has softened her, maybe made her think about things more than she had to before. I agree with Jikes, I don’t like to see her feeling defeated but maybe this will eventually make her a stronger person…she’s a fighter.
Wow! The mystery thickens. Thank you for this story. Love it :)
Hello AllyE, Back at the farm and loving it. Good to get Finn’s thoughts on his time with Tina and Bette as well as on their relationship.Bette has been an absolute star in dealing with so much to get them there safe and sound.Tina is trying to sort through things in her head and I feel that she needs to discuss them with her father to get some resolution and closure.Bette and Tina’s baby talk was sweet.Now, where the heck can Tina’s dad be? I want her grand-parents to fall in love with Bette and tell Tina where her dad is.Only by facing problems and talking can things get truly sorted.More plaase of your magical writing and storytelling.Many thanks for it all, Your Loyal Fan.
Thanks for this posting! I was on the same wavelength as geekygal. Wouldn’t it be a strange twist if Niall is gay and the open relationship worked fine because it gave him a chance to dabble in the lifestyle freely. PPS
There are relationships where the strong, vocal partner is really not the strongest but the quiet one the rock. When the rock leaves, the “strong” one wanders about randomly looking for solace. Your 3 pages in like other writers 6 pages. Just detail and depth. So satisfying.
“”Mom isn’t going to be given an alternative ” Finn said” Ally, do you WANT me to hate an entire generation of Kennards? When’s Willow going to show up with her need for world domination? That would just round things out nicely.
Regardless of why Niall left, he is WRONG for abandoning the family business with no one there but Sarah. This is his children’s legacy and he is WRONG for just walking away and letting it possible just fail. I hope this helps Tina havew more respect for her mother. It is soooo easy to be a daddy’s girl and be judgemental. Been there, done that. PPS:o).
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