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Something so right – chapter 95
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“I know – that makes it even more important to me that you have come here to be with me “
“I would go to the ends of the earth with you – you have to know that “
“I do “ Tina kissed her “And I feel the same “
Tina softly touched Bette’s full lips- they were just perfect. They looked at one another and Bette sighed
“So what’s the battle plan Cpt Kennard ? “
“Tomorrow Finn is going to get a couple of his pals in to do some of the work that dad normally would. They can be paid for out of petty cash. You and I are going to see my grandparents and then we are going into town to buy some supplies. I also hope that at some point – maybe tomorrow night you and I can spend a couple of hours in the office and see what bills need to be paid and get an idea of the balance sheet. Normally my mother would protect the books to the death from me but when Finn told her that you and I were going to look at them she didn’t even put up a fight “
“Books – that’s something that I can do – grandparents – less certain about “
“Babe – you will be fine – they are great people and Finn said grandma has been asking about you “
“I dread to think what Finn told her “
“He said that he said – she’s beautiful, intelligent, kind and is way too good for my sister “
Bette laughed “ I do adore your brother “
“Mutual admiration society “ Tina replied “He adores you “
“That means a lot to me – that your family accept me “
“They do – even my mother “
“Yes “ Bette said dryly “Not the greatest start ever – but we will brush that under the carpet. So – what do I need to know about the old folks Kennard ?”
“Well don’t call them old folk for a start “ Tina said “Grandma is only 65”
“65 – bloody hell “
“Dad was 19 when I was born and granny had dad when she was 18 “
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Great Chapter!!! I am glad Sarah is seeing how Bette and Tina belong together. Now I hope Tina’s grandparents will be kind to Bette. I hope the B&T find Tina’s dad. Thank you Ally
That was great and can’t wait to see Bette meet Tina’s grandparents. Please post more, thanks!
I’m going to agree with geekgal’s gay dad theory. Can’t wait for the intro to the grandparents.
I love how Bette and Tina support each other.
something is up with dad, might be gay? dunno but great updates!!! :)PPS
The Niall mystery deepens by the minute. I can’t wait to see what Tina’s grandparents think about Bette. They are young enough though to have a more open mind than some. Absolutely fabulous chapter Ally. PPS!
I think Tina’s dad is gay (and initially hid it) which is why they had an open marriage (so her mom could have sex with others)and was mad when she found out Tina was gay.
It’s almost sad to see this kinda defeated version of Sarah, who went from this formidable woman who her 6’5″ son was scared of to someone who will just let her kids make decisions about her business when she hadn’t been willing to make changes before. It seems like Niall’s devotion was returned in spades if not in quite such an obvious manner. It’s a nuanced thing but you do those so well, Ally. Thanks for posting!
Thanks for the update. I’m so glad Sarah is welcoming Bette this time around. It seems that this experience has softened her, maybe made her think about things more than she had to before. I agree with Jikes, I don’t like to see her feeling defeated but maybe this will eventually make her a stronger person…she’s a fighter.
Wow! The mystery thickens. Thank you for this story. Love it :)
Hello AllyE, Back at the farm and loving it. Good to get Finn’s thoughts on his time with Tina and Bette as well as on their relationship.Bette has been an absolute star in dealing with so much to get them there safe and sound.Tina is trying to sort through things in her head and I feel that she needs to discuss them with her father to get some resolution and closure.Bette and Tina’s baby talk was sweet.Now, where the heck can Tina’s dad be? I want her grand-parents to fall in love with Bette and tell Tina where her dad is.Only by facing problems and talking can things get truly sorted.More plaase of your magical writing and storytelling.Many thanks for it all, Your Loyal Fan.
Thanks for this posting! I was on the same wavelength as geekygal. Wouldn’t it be a strange twist if Niall is gay and the open relationship worked fine because it gave him a chance to dabble in the lifestyle freely. PPS
There are relationships where the strong, vocal partner is really not the strongest but the quiet one the rock. When the rock leaves, the “strong” one wanders about randomly looking for solace. Your 3 pages in like other writers 6 pages. Just detail and depth. So satisfying.
“”Mom isn’t going to be given an alternative ” Finn said” Ally, do you WANT me to hate an entire generation of Kennards? When’s Willow going to show up with her need for world domination? That would just round things out nicely.
Regardless of why Niall left, he is WRONG for abandoning the family business with no one there but Sarah. This is his children’s legacy and he is WRONG for just walking away and letting it possible just fail. I hope this helps Tina havew more respect for her mother. It is soooo easy to be a daddy’s girl and be judgemental. Been there, done that. PPS:o).
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