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Something so right – chapter 98
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“And what do you do ?”
“Hired hand “ Bette said “ I left my new cowboy hat in the car “
“I will wait until you have all gone home and I will go and face Sarah. I don’t want anyone around -this is between the two of us. “
Niall turned and got out four cups and in a few minutes they were back in the living room. Bette walked in first and assessed the situation – Tina was silent – she was staring at the carpet. Gemma had gone.
“Where is she ? “ he demanded
“She’s gone to change him “ Tina said “I didn’t kill her and bury her body “
“Sorry – but I love her Tina and I do expect you to at least be civil to her “
Bette was just glad she hadn’t been on the receiving end of the look that Tina gave her father as her went to check up on his new girlfriend and their son. Bette sat down beside Tina and looked at her
“You okay ?”
Tina shook her head “This is huge Bette “
“He seems happy “
Tina looked away and rubbed her face. Bette knew how much her lover was hurting. It was only begin to dawn on her that the repercussions of this would run for a long time. And if you put this on top of her own troubles with her parents it just added up to a huge pressure on them and their relationship. But just as Tina had held Bette together so she would hold Tina up for as long as she needed. There was no lengths that Bette would not go to for the love of her life. She rested her hand on Tina’s thigh
“I am proud that you have kept your cool “
“Its not easy and its not over “
“Just remember that none of us are comfortable here in this situation. There is an innocent baby in the centre of all of this and none of this is his fault. “
Tina nodded “Its hard that’s all “
Bette nodded “I know that sweetheart. Hear him out — you owe him that “
“I am not his toughest audience – my mother is “
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neil is just a basterd, i brother? i can understand another wife but a kid? i cant fogive a thing like that
What a mess!!! My mama always says that there is no fool like an old fool. Niall has totally wrecked his family’s life and wants everyone else to feel like it’s all great and wonderful. He expects Tina to be happy for him and protect him from Sarah’s wrath. Great Dad, huh? Bette, put Tina on the next plane and get the hell away from the explosion.
Well written. But was hard for me to read. Brought up a lot of memories. Mixed feelings about the whole situation, you know seeking to make yourself happy and the expense of others. My thoughts if a person is unhappy being in a relationship don’t lie your way out. Be honest and just get the hell out. For me being deceived is the more painful part. But than again they were in an open relationship and they both knew that they were taking the chance that the other could fall for someone else. But the situation would be painful non the less. It takes a long long time to be happy for people who make choices that hurt the people you love. That’s a deep hurt that her father inflected on her family.
If I were in Tinas shoes I would most likely react like she did, but from the position as an outsider I totally understand what Niel did. Tell me one reason why he should stay in an unhappy relationship. Yes he could have and should have told his wife and not just go and hide. For me he seams like someone who always choose flight over fight and that is just the way he is.
Glad to see you back with this one and are you ever back with it(lol)! I can see where Tina is hurt,and her father should have told them sooner.So glad that Bette is there with her.PPS
Yes annaluis, they were is an open relationship, but Niall is MORE than old enough to know what “safe sex” is and to wear a rubber. The fact that he actively choice to have unprotected and a child while he was still married and living with his family is MUCH MORE than just cowardous. If he was so unhappy in his marriage, than he should have ended it before starting a family with someone else. Nine months is more than enough time for you to make a move and leave. Another thing that gets me is when he says I didn’t want to be with someone who thought so little of her daughter that she wouldn’t hide her affair with him ” Niall said “I was appalled and ashamed So it is better to sneek around, lie, not confront the elephant is the room, be illresponsable, and disrespect your wife and marriage enough to not even tell her before you tell your children. He has also put his parents in a bad position with their grandchildren. NO Nialls is the DOG here and his feet should be held to the fire. What if his old butt crocks before he updates his will, MESSY. Oh but he has a good lawyer. Okay sugarmama, you love him so much and can support him, have his sign away all rights to the farm. He said he wants a new life, than be a Big Boy and start anew completly. Bette should tell Tina about the miscarriage, because she needs to know the kind of hurt her mother is going to be feeling. PPS
Glad to see you back, Ally! I have much to catch up on. Thanks! :)
That was a tough scene, but beautifully written! PPS
i hate the niall keeps comparing his affair to bette and tina romance… to me they are total opposits… niall is a coward… what happened to his balls… he should of asked and gotton a divirce way before the baby was born… and i hope the other kids all feel the same way as tina… i felt like he kicked the three of them in the ass… and i liked niall… he was a good father… but he is showing his true colors… can’t wait to see what sarah is going to do and say… pps
Hey AllyE, that was termendous. You walked the line perfectly as Bette was the peacemaker. She understood exactly what Tina was going through as her own father, Melvin, had done this to Kit and her mother. Bette was emphathetic to Niall, and Gemma, and especially Adam.This was a moment when relationships can be destroyed forever by harsh and hurtful words.Giving Tina her head while focussing on the present and future was the right thing. Not allowing it to get too snippy was also a good thing.There is much to digest and work through here.The best thing is that Bette is by Tina’s side all of the way. Whatever happens will only strengthen their committment to each other.Ally you always challenge and provoke interesting discussions. Keep up the most excellent service.Many thanks from Your Loayl Fan and Friend.
Oh man! An amazing chapter. Thank you.
What an amazing scene! You wrote it perfectly. Do you have a little L Wing awaiting us?
OH FUCKER!..I’VE MISSED THIS?..I GET LOST NAVIGATING IN THIS SITE?..SORRY? I understand Tina for not wanting to be involved at the moment?..’Cause It’s a shock to her!..imagine your dad who you idolize?..Is nothing BUT A JERK!…WHO WOULD NOT BE?…THANKS ALLY.
When you love someone,protection is not on the top of your list. Accident do happen. Now its uo to the three adult to get this straighten out. The baby is not the problen, Sarah and Niall is. thanks
This is such a mess and drama, poor Tina and glad Bette is there for her!