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Something so right – Chapter 99
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They drove back slower than they had depart the town. It took three quarters of an hour before they arrived at Tina’s grandparents. As soon as Tina and Bette started to walk down the path the front door opened and Tina’s grandmother was standing waiting for them. Tina was annoyed that her grandmother hadn’t come out and told her where her father was- in fact she had lied to her and that was one of the reasons why Tina was bristling with anger. Bette spoke to Tina as they walked towards the front door
“Tina – going off the deep end is not going to help anyone – please moderate your language and your temper – that’s not going to solve anything “
They reached the front door
“Its amazing what sort of day we have had “ Tina said sarcastically “ We found my father despite your best efforts – where do you think he was hiding out ?”
“Tina “ Bette warned reflecting that this was the sort of day where her words often enough went in one ear and out the other with her partner.
“Come into the house “ Jacky urged “Lets keep this private “
They went into the house and Jacky closed the door
“Your grandfather is with Finn “
“How did it go ?” Bette asked
Jacky shook her head “As bad as Niall feared “
“Is Niall still here ?”
“He’s gone to the farm to see your mother “ Jacky explained
Bette closed her eyes – she would not be in his shoes for all the sand on beaches of California.
“How’s Finn ?” Bette asked. Even though Finn acted the clown and his career was rather based on his tall frame and good natured personality – Bette also knew that he was a rather sensitive young man.
“Shattered “ Jacky assessed “He hit him “
“What – who hit who ?” Tina demanded
“Finn took a swing at his father – I think it was more by luck than judgement that he actually connected”
“Finn is the most non violent male I know “ Bette said
“Niall’s handling of the situation wasn’t oozing with tact “ Jacky said in a measured assessment of the situation
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gosh i realy realy hate neil right nowif he was my father i dont think i could have forgive him or want anything to do with himat least for a few years
hard times
Hi Ally, It is awesome to read how Niall’s actions have completely destroyed his family. Tina and Finn are totally devastated by his ‘mid-life’ crisis affair. Could he just have bought a sports car. Particularly relevant given Tina’s recent drivign demonstration.Ot was a shame to find out that Finn and Niall had actually come to blows. Yes, I appreciated that much of this anger is due to the shock of a step-brother and young girlfriend.Bette has been a star as she has calmed Tina down and it able to lift Finn’s spirits a little.I do get the feeling that Niall and Sarah will be firing on all cylinders.This is tramatic and I hope that Tina and Bette come through it stronger and more in love and committed to one another than ever before.Ally, you rock.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
What a mess.Thank you for posting.
thank you for posting – I can’t wait to know how Tina’s mom will take this – Please post soon! :)
I love the drama. But the sadness that Niall’s thoughtless behavior has caused is devastating.
Thanks for posting, I wouldnt want to be at the Kennard farm right now. Younger than Tina,well the older Kennard is really in a world of trouble. thanks
Niall is in for a complete session of hell from Sarah as he should be. And to think that he thought he could gloss over the situation with Finn by trying to be chums and be casual about it. Shows just what he was thinking with. I guess he forgot they taught their children to be responsible. Glad that Finn decked him and if Sarah has an iron skillet, she should beat the hell out of him with it. Can’t wait to see what happens next. Thanks for posting.
WOW an angry Tina is somewhat scary? with that fast moving car?…Wow good thing they did not crash into something?..And Fin?..can’t blame the kid?…why be so casual?…is that how you tell YOUR SON THAT YOU’VE HAVE OTHER FAMILY THEN YOU HAD!..WHAT A JERK!!
Niall certainly regressed when he hooked up with this woman. I can almost understand him getting involved with her over his head but running away?….that was really immature and irresponsible. He needs to act like a mature adult and take on the responsibility of running the farm again, in nothing else.
Niall is some piece of work. To try to take a casual approach with Finn— STUPID and an insult to Finn’s intellegance. “I have a Sugar Mama, so I don’t have to slave away on the farm” is NOT going to play well with any of his childrenI hope that B, T & Finn can help pick up the pieces with Sarah. I also hope that they are there to support Sarah in court and fight for their percentage of their family legacy. Since Niall’s was willing to leave Sarah and his family high and dry with work on the farm, he should get less. How will Willow take it alone in school? PPS:o).
Amazing update. Thank you for this story.