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Something so right – Chapter 99
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“Where is he ?” Bette asked concerned
“In the garden “
They went outside – the garden was large with flowers in one place and a small vegetable patch further down. Beyond the runner beans and their cane frames Finn was sitting on the grass. Tina’s grandfather was a tall man with white hair. A walking stick was on the ground next to the home made stool he was sitting on
“Sit still Finn “
He was bathing Finn’s hand
“Hey there “ Bette said. Finn looked up – he had been crying but seemed calm now
“Hey granddad “ Tina said
“Hello darling – you have stirred one hell of a hornets nest here Tina “ his accent was as broad as Bette had heard so far.
“What the hell happened ? “ Tina asked to Finn
“He was so fucking casual “ Finn began
“Mind your tongue young man – there is no reason to use words like that “ his grandmother chastised him
“Sorry gran “
“What happened Finn ?” Tina asked again
“He was so casual “ Finn continued “ as if he had stumbled into the situation “
“He was upset when we confronted him “ Bette said “ He seemed genuinely contrite “
“Well he didn’t when he told me – he just said guess what you have a brother -”
Tina went across to Finn and looked at his hand
“What the hell did you hit him for ?”
“I told him to leave me alone – to get out of my face – he came towards me and tried to hug me – I pushed him away and he slapped me – I just swung at him. I didn’t mean it “
“What did you contact with Rocky ?” Bette asked
Finn looked at her and he smiled “ I thought you would be the sophisticated type who secretly loved boxing “
Bette chuckled “ You should see my right hand jab “
Jacky smiled to see the interaction between Bette and Finn – the arrival of the two women did seem to have made Finn happier.
“So what did you hit ? “Tina asked “Ouch – that looks sore “
“It is “
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gosh i realy realy hate neil right nowif he was my father i dont think i could have forgive him or want anything to do with himat least for a few years
hard times
Hi Ally, It is awesome to read how Niall’s actions have completely destroyed his family. Tina and Finn are totally devastated by his ‘mid-life’ crisis affair. Could he just have bought a sports car. Particularly relevant given Tina’s recent drivign demonstration.Ot was a shame to find out that Finn and Niall had actually come to blows. Yes, I appreciated that much of this anger is due to the shock of a step-brother and young girlfriend.Bette has been a star as she has calmed Tina down and it able to lift Finn’s spirits a little.I do get the feeling that Niall and Sarah will be firing on all cylinders.This is tramatic and I hope that Tina and Bette come through it stronger and more in love and committed to one another than ever before.Ally, you rock.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
What a mess.Thank you for posting.
thank you for posting – I can’t wait to know how Tina’s mom will take this – Please post soon! :)
I love the drama. But the sadness that Niall’s thoughtless behavior has caused is devastating.
Thanks for posting, I wouldnt want to be at the Kennard farm right now. Younger than Tina,well the older Kennard is really in a world of trouble. thanks
Niall is in for a complete session of hell from Sarah as he should be. And to think that he thought he could gloss over the situation with Finn by trying to be chums and be casual about it. Shows just what he was thinking with. I guess he forgot they taught their children to be responsible. Glad that Finn decked him and if Sarah has an iron skillet, she should beat the hell out of him with it. Can’t wait to see what happens next. Thanks for posting.
WOW an angry Tina is somewhat scary? with that fast moving car?…Wow good thing they did not crash into something?..And Fin?..can’t blame the kid?…why be so casual?…is that how you tell YOUR SON THAT YOU’VE HAVE OTHER FAMILY THEN YOU HAD!..WHAT A JERK!!
Niall certainly regressed when he hooked up with this woman. I can almost understand him getting involved with her over his head but running away?….that was really immature and irresponsible. He needs to act like a mature adult and take on the responsibility of running the farm again, in nothing else.
Niall is some piece of work. To try to take a casual approach with Finn— STUPID and an insult to Finn’s intellegance. “I have a Sugar Mama, so I don’t have to slave away on the farm” is NOT going to play well with any of his childrenI hope that B, T & Finn can help pick up the pieces with Sarah. I also hope that they are there to support Sarah in court and fight for their percentage of their family legacy. Since Niall’s was willing to leave Sarah and his family high and dry with work on the farm, he should get less. How will Willow take it alone in school? PPS:o).
Amazing update. Thank you for this story.