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Something so right – chapter eleven
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“And she’s holding to that ?”
“Its getting harder – not because she is putting me under pressure but because I don’t know how much longer I want to wait. She leaves me in a puddle when she goes home . I never thought I could want someone with an all consuming passion like I want Bette “
“She’s being old fashioned ? “ Helena was still sounding amazed. Tina nodded
“Says she will wait as long as it takes me – we didn’t kiss until Saturday and even since then I have been on fire for her “
“Sorry Tina – but this is a lot to take in. I knew that you were coming closer to coming out but dating the lady-killer Bette Porter is huge. And this person that you are describing – well it doesn’t sound like anything I have ever heard of concerning B Porter “
“Have you met her
I have been at a couple of art exhibitions where she has been centre stage – she is a terrible show off “
“A show off being anyone who is more extrovert than you. If Bette can get any of the stage from you she must be damn good “
Helena nodded in good grace “I never said I wasn’t a show off – I merely observed that Bette is a show off “
“Ms Pot -there is call here from Ms Kettle – something to do with the colour black “ Tina said dryly causing Helena to laugh.
“I know that you are going to tell me that you are a big girl and that you can handle Bette – but its just a lot for you to face “
“I have thought all this through -yes its going to be hard but the rewards make it worthwhile. Yes she has a reputation – so what – I see how she looks at me Helena – I see that she wants me. She could have any woman but she wants me and I want her. I know that I make her happy. She’s complex – of course she is but that’s part of her appeal to me “
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another great chapter allie! Thanks! You just validated my vote for me once again. Oh, and there are tons more exervise women to oogle if you go to the gym! Good luck with getting fit.
Too cute:-) can’t get enough of this sweet story PPS
i wanna go on ‘holiday’. all this coming and going, makes a girls head spin. thx
It’s about fucking time! Interpret that any way you wish.
HEy Ally, Thank you for showing the sweetness and romance that Bette and can share. Their partnership here lights up my heart and soul to the wondrs of true love. Both gals are playing this tune perfectly. As ever it is your writing that sparkles and shines. Thank you so much for this and all your other tales. Happy New Year and will try to so better in the feedback stakes. My gratitude and appreciation. Your Loyal Fan.
awesome as usual :D
WOW, this story is amazing ! Thanks! Hope to read the trip to Hawai soon ;-)
Great update, frankly spell anyway you want,lol. i think we get the idea,lol… now i can’t wait for them to go away for a week! :)
Great as usual – love Tina running Bette down to size – surprize who is the athlete in this relationship??
I truly can’t get enough of this…and “you are dating someone who has the biggest reputation of any lesbian in a very lesbian city” makes me grin. Hope the trip will not spell gallery trouble for Bette though
Hi Ally – I’m with you on the spelling; can’t text for the life of me. I love this story, this Bette, this Tina. All I can say is, God you’re good!
OMG, OMG, OMG!!!! I can’t wait to go to Hawaii!!!!!! This story just keeps getting better and better. PLEEEEEEEEASE post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
Once again, one of your loyal fans checking in. I loved this chapter. Can’t wait for the Hawaii trip…looks like Tina is up for the task! PPS
Glad Helena didn’t blow a gasket when Tina told her who she was dating she needs the support of her friends. Can’t wait for the girls to get to Hawaii and lose a lot of clothes. PPS
oh yay! PPS
As usuall Allyemmerson , great job and I cannot wait to read the Hawaii trip… bet its going to be a sizzler
This is so good, B&T are so cute and sweet and can’t wait to see they at Hawaii. Glad to see Helena didn’t freak out when Tina tell her she dating Bette. Anyway please post soon, thanks!
I love the sweet and oh so love the dirty! :) Tina and Bette are so fun in this story. I can’t wait to read about Hawaii.
geezzz Ally, they better rent some scuba gear in Hawaii, I think they’ll need the oxagen tanks. Md
of course, where tina leads bette will follow…that ass…is hot!!!! pps
Great update Alley! Finally Bette and Tina on a holiday together. They hardly ever leave WEHO even in the fan fics. Bring on Hawaii!
Hi Ally, I had such a horrid day at work today. I’m so glad to find that you have posted this chapter when I got back. Reading it makes me feel a whole world better. Thanks a million! Hope you’ll post the next one real soon. Can’t wait to read about them in Hawaii…
Lamentamini – when i write it its “come” because i am such a pedant that i cannot use predictive texts – so all my text messages are 2-3 pages long because i have to use the proper word – mind you i am an old so and so. i know that doesn’t clear anything up but i thought i would offer my opinion.
I really, really love this story. I like that Tina has all this cool stuff in her background like being a great athlete. Bette would admire something like that.. as long as it came with brains as well. Can’t wait for Hawaii. How exciting.
“The answer is yes Tina – of course I can come on holiday with you ” And come you shall, Ms. Porter. or is it cum? Anyone care to settle this once and for all?
LOL@ogling the exercise lady. XD