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Something so right – chapter eleven
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Bette walked along the beach watching Tina as she stretched her long pale legs – the closer she got the more Bette liked the view. Tina had just bent over to stretch the back of her thighs – giving Bette a fantastic view of her ass – taunt in white running shorts. Tina could see Bette approaching as she looked through her legs -even upside down Bette was beautiful.
“You don’t mind if I take a bite out of that now do you ?” Bette said
Tina straightened up and looked with a raised eyebrow at Bette
“Would you like to make that offer again ?”
“I said would it be okay if I just sunk my teeth into your ass now ?”
Tina laughed “ Whose in a mucky mood today ?”
“That would be me “ Bette replied “I could have hidden it but I am being upfront and letting you know that seeing your ass like that – and seeing you in that vest and shorts – well -I may have to ravish you here and now “
Bette looked Tina up and down with no attempt to disguise that she liked what she saw. Tina blushed but at the same time she liked the flattery.
“So you have gone from smooth to dirty ?”
“I am both all the time “ Bette replied – then letting her voice take on a much softer tone
“Morning Tina “
Tina took Bette’s hands “Morning babe “
Bette smiled – she wanted a kiss – hell she wanted several but she was aware that Tina still hadn’t officially come out. There was a lot of difference between knowing that you were a lesbian and being in love with a woman and coming out. Announcing to the world that you were the same person except you loved women and rejected society’s attempt to pigeon hole you into a life of heterosexual death by boredom. Bette did think that Tina would come out and handle any hassle that her announcement would cause – but it had to be at a time where she wanted it.
Tina didn’t look around or show any sign of anxiety as she lent closer to Bette and kissed her softly on the lips. The kiss lingered for a few seconds – if anyone had been watching they would have been in no doubt that these two women were partners. When the kiss ended Bette raised an eyebrow at Tina
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another great chapter allie! Thanks! You just validated my vote for me once again. Oh, and there are tons more exervise women to oogle if you go to the gym! Good luck with getting fit.
Too cute:-) can’t get enough of this sweet story PPS
i wanna go on ‘holiday’. all this coming and going, makes a girls head spin. thx
It’s about fucking time! Interpret that any way you wish.
HEy Ally, Thank you for showing the sweetness and romance that Bette and can share. Their partnership here lights up my heart and soul to the wondrs of true love. Both gals are playing this tune perfectly. As ever it is your writing that sparkles and shines. Thank you so much for this and all your other tales. Happy New Year and will try to so better in the feedback stakes. My gratitude and appreciation. Your Loyal Fan.
awesome as usual :D
WOW, this story is amazing ! Thanks! Hope to read the trip to Hawai soon ;-)
Great update, frankly spell anyway you want,lol. i think we get the idea,lol… now i can’t wait for them to go away for a week! :)
Great as usual – love Tina running Bette down to size – surprize who is the athlete in this relationship??
I truly can’t get enough of this…and “you are dating someone who has the biggest reputation of any lesbian in a very lesbian city” makes me grin. Hope the trip will not spell gallery trouble for Bette though
Hi Ally – I’m with you on the spelling; can’t text for the life of me. I love this story, this Bette, this Tina. All I can say is, God you’re good!
OMG, OMG, OMG!!!! I can’t wait to go to Hawaii!!!!!! This story just keeps getting better and better. PLEEEEEEEEASE post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
Once again, one of your loyal fans checking in. I loved this chapter. Can’t wait for the Hawaii trip…looks like Tina is up for the task! PPS
Glad Helena didn’t blow a gasket when Tina told her who she was dating she needs the support of her friends. Can’t wait for the girls to get to Hawaii and lose a lot of clothes. PPS
oh yay! PPS
As usuall Allyemmerson , great job and I cannot wait to read the Hawaii trip… bet its going to be a sizzler
This is so good, B&T are so cute and sweet and can’t wait to see they at Hawaii. Glad to see Helena didn’t freak out when Tina tell her she dating Bette. Anyway please post soon, thanks!
I love the sweet and oh so love the dirty! :) Tina and Bette are so fun in this story. I can’t wait to read about Hawaii.
geezzz Ally, they better rent some scuba gear in Hawaii, I think they’ll need the oxagen tanks. Md
of course, where tina leads bette will follow…that ass…is hot!!!! pps
Great update Alley! Finally Bette and Tina on a holiday together. They hardly ever leave WEHO even in the fan fics. Bring on Hawaii!
Hi Ally, I had such a horrid day at work today. I’m so glad to find that you have posted this chapter when I got back. Reading it makes me feel a whole world better. Thanks a million! Hope you’ll post the next one real soon. Can’t wait to read about them in Hawaii…
Lamentamini – when i write it its “come” because i am such a pedant that i cannot use predictive texts – so all my text messages are 2-3 pages long because i have to use the proper word – mind you i am an old so and so. i know that doesn’t clear anything up but i thought i would offer my opinion.
I really, really love this story. I like that Tina has all this cool stuff in her background like being a great athlete. Bette would admire something like that.. as long as it came with brains as well. Can’t wait for Hawaii. How exciting.
“The answer is yes Tina – of course I can come on holiday with you ” And come you shall, Ms. Porter. or is it cum? Anyone care to settle this once and for all?
LOL@ogling the exercise lady. XD