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Something so right – chapter eleven
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“Very daring “
Tina shrugged “ Unless Eric is stalking me I don’t care – and even if he is stalking me he just found out why I don’t want him – I have found something much, much better – something that I want with a fire that I didn’t know burnt inside of me “
“Not sure if that was smooth or dirty “
“So you can be both but I cannot “
Bette laughed “ You okay ?”
Tina nodded “ Better for seeing you – how did you sleep ?”
Bette smiled – the memory of her dream was still fresh in her mind – if the image of a naked Tina straddling her had soaked her – what would the reality do ?
“Fine “ Bette omitted the highly erotic dream, the 3am need to “take care of business” and the deep sleep that had followed – maybe she would share that with Tina later – maybe the blonde had also dreamt about her ?
“You need to warm up ”
“I’ll be okay – I’ll just start lightly – what did you have planned for us ?“
“My car is 3 miles that way – I thought we would run to that – I’ve got a cool box with some drinks and fruit in -we can rest there for a while, run back to your car – you can drive me back to my car and we can go back to my place and I’ll cook – I need to do some shopping first “
“How did you get here if the car is 3 miles away ?”
“I took a cab “
Bette nodded and kissed Tina again – the blonde slipped her arms round Bette and let the kiss get deeper and more passionate. Tina pulled away first
“You okay ? “ Bette asked. It had been less than 24 hours since they had kissed for the first time – she didn’t want to rush Tina – but at the same time she did want to make love to her until she blacked out. Bette had vowed when she had been in the shower that morning that she would let Tina dictate when they went to bed but once they took that ultimate step, once they became lovers -then Bette wasn’t going to let Tina get dressed for a long few hours
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another great chapter allie! Thanks! You just validated my vote for me once again. Oh, and there are tons more exervise women to oogle if you go to the gym! Good luck with getting fit.
Too cute:-) can’t get enough of this sweet story PPS
i wanna go on ‘holiday’. all this coming and going, makes a girls head spin. thx
It’s about fucking time! Interpret that any way you wish.
HEy Ally, Thank you for showing the sweetness and romance that Bette and can share. Their partnership here lights up my heart and soul to the wondrs of true love. Both gals are playing this tune perfectly. As ever it is your writing that sparkles and shines. Thank you so much for this and all your other tales. Happy New Year and will try to so better in the feedback stakes. My gratitude and appreciation. Your Loyal Fan.
awesome as usual :D
WOW, this story is amazing ! Thanks! Hope to read the trip to Hawai soon ;-)
Great update, frankly spell anyway you want,lol. i think we get the idea,lol… now i can’t wait for them to go away for a week! :)
Great as usual – love Tina running Bette down to size – surprize who is the athlete in this relationship??
I truly can’t get enough of this…and “you are dating someone who has the biggest reputation of any lesbian in a very lesbian city” makes me grin. Hope the trip will not spell gallery trouble for Bette though
Hi Ally – I’m with you on the spelling; can’t text for the life of me. I love this story, this Bette, this Tina. All I can say is, God you’re good!
OMG, OMG, OMG!!!! I can’t wait to go to Hawaii!!!!!! This story just keeps getting better and better. PLEEEEEEEEASE post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
Once again, one of your loyal fans checking in. I loved this chapter. Can’t wait for the Hawaii trip…looks like Tina is up for the task! PPS
Glad Helena didn’t blow a gasket when Tina told her who she was dating she needs the support of her friends. Can’t wait for the girls to get to Hawaii and lose a lot of clothes. PPS
oh yay! PPS
As usuall Allyemmerson , great job and I cannot wait to read the Hawaii trip… bet its going to be a sizzler
This is so good, B&T are so cute and sweet and can’t wait to see they at Hawaii. Glad to see Helena didn’t freak out when Tina tell her she dating Bette. Anyway please post soon, thanks!
I love the sweet and oh so love the dirty! :) Tina and Bette are so fun in this story. I can’t wait to read about Hawaii.
geezzz Ally, they better rent some scuba gear in Hawaii, I think they’ll need the oxagen tanks. Md
of course, where tina leads bette will follow…that ass…is hot!!!! pps
Great update Alley! Finally Bette and Tina on a holiday together. They hardly ever leave WEHO even in the fan fics. Bring on Hawaii!
Hi Ally, I had such a horrid day at work today. I’m so glad to find that you have posted this chapter when I got back. Reading it makes me feel a whole world better. Thanks a million! Hope you’ll post the next one real soon. Can’t wait to read about them in Hawaii…
Lamentamini – when i write it its “come” because i am such a pedant that i cannot use predictive texts – so all my text messages are 2-3 pages long because i have to use the proper word – mind you i am an old so and so. i know that doesn’t clear anything up but i thought i would offer my opinion.
I really, really love this story. I like that Tina has all this cool stuff in her background like being a great athlete. Bette would admire something like that.. as long as it came with brains as well. Can’t wait for Hawaii. How exciting.
“The answer is yes Tina – of course I can come on holiday with you ” And come you shall, Ms. Porter. or is it cum? Anyone care to settle this once and for all?
LOL@ogling the exercise lady. XD