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Something so right – chapter eleven
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“This is not happening – my best friend has gone potty “
“I haven’t – I have found a woman I want to be with “
Helena as struggling to regain her famous composure – she took several deep breaths and looked at Tina . For the first time she realised what had been different when she had first looked at her friend – Tina was in love and she looked so beautiful and at peace with the world. Tina was smiling at her discomfort – she was calm about being gay and about who she was dating.
“Are we talking about the same woman -about 5ft 8 -long dark hair, moves with utter grace ?”
“And has a dazzling smile and the deepest eyes I have ever seen “
Helena couldn’t deny those two additions to her description of Bette – wow. !
“You are dating someone who has the biggest reputation of any lesbian in a very lesbian city ?”
Tina nodded “It looks that way “
“From what I have seen of her she doesn’t look the easiest person to get close to “ Helena was still concerned but knew Tina well enough to know that the blonde was capable of handling most people – she just was still unsure if Tina knew how much of a reputation Bette had
“There are a lot of stories about Bette – if you are dating her you are going to hear them all “
Tina shrugged “ So what “
“She’s had a lot of women “
“I know that – Helena I was in that club and I saw how the women all just fawned over her and how they all wanted her. Guess what – its doesn’t freak me out. She picked me – out of all of those women in that club she chatted me up and took me home “
“And you couldn’t put out ?”
Tina nodded “I felt such a fool – I cried but she . Hel – she was wonderful – she hugged me and we talked and the next day she called me. We met up and she said that she just wanted to be with me – she wanted to wait for as long as it took “
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another great chapter allie! Thanks! You just validated my vote for me once again. Oh, and there are tons more exervise women to oogle if you go to the gym! Good luck with getting fit.
Too cute:-) can’t get enough of this sweet story PPS
i wanna go on ‘holiday’. all this coming and going, makes a girls head spin. thx
It’s about fucking time! Interpret that any way you wish.
HEy Ally, Thank you for showing the sweetness and romance that Bette and can share. Their partnership here lights up my heart and soul to the wondrs of true love. Both gals are playing this tune perfectly. As ever it is your writing that sparkles and shines. Thank you so much for this and all your other tales. Happy New Year and will try to so better in the feedback stakes. My gratitude and appreciation. Your Loyal Fan.
awesome as usual :D
WOW, this story is amazing ! Thanks! Hope to read the trip to Hawai soon ;-)
Great update, frankly spell anyway you want,lol. i think we get the idea,lol… now i can’t wait for them to go away for a week! :)
Great as usual – love Tina running Bette down to size – surprize who is the athlete in this relationship??
I truly can’t get enough of this…and “you are dating someone who has the biggest reputation of any lesbian in a very lesbian city” makes me grin. Hope the trip will not spell gallery trouble for Bette though
Hi Ally – I’m with you on the spelling; can’t text for the life of me. I love this story, this Bette, this Tina. All I can say is, God you’re good!
OMG, OMG, OMG!!!! I can’t wait to go to Hawaii!!!!!! This story just keeps getting better and better. PLEEEEEEEEASE post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
Once again, one of your loyal fans checking in. I loved this chapter. Can’t wait for the Hawaii trip…looks like Tina is up for the task! PPS
Glad Helena didn’t blow a gasket when Tina told her who she was dating she needs the support of her friends. Can’t wait for the girls to get to Hawaii and lose a lot of clothes. PPS
oh yay! PPS
As usuall Allyemmerson , great job and I cannot wait to read the Hawaii trip… bet its going to be a sizzler
This is so good, B&T are so cute and sweet and can’t wait to see they at Hawaii. Glad to see Helena didn’t freak out when Tina tell her she dating Bette. Anyway please post soon, thanks!
I love the sweet and oh so love the dirty! :) Tina and Bette are so fun in this story. I can’t wait to read about Hawaii.
geezzz Ally, they better rent some scuba gear in Hawaii, I think they’ll need the oxagen tanks. Md
of course, where tina leads bette will follow…that ass…is hot!!!! pps
Great update Alley! Finally Bette and Tina on a holiday together. They hardly ever leave WEHO even in the fan fics. Bring on Hawaii!
Hi Ally, I had such a horrid day at work today. I’m so glad to find that you have posted this chapter when I got back. Reading it makes me feel a whole world better. Thanks a million! Hope you’ll post the next one real soon. Can’t wait to read about them in Hawaii…
Lamentamini – when i write it its “come” because i am such a pedant that i cannot use predictive texts – so all my text messages are 2-3 pages long because i have to use the proper word – mind you i am an old so and so. i know that doesn’t clear anything up but i thought i would offer my opinion.
I really, really love this story. I like that Tina has all this cool stuff in her background like being a great athlete. Bette would admire something like that.. as long as it came with brains as well. Can’t wait for Hawaii. How exciting.
“The answer is yes Tina – of course I can come on holiday with you ” And come you shall, Ms. Porter. or is it cum? Anyone care to settle this once and for all?
LOL@ogling the exercise lady. XD