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Something so right – chapter five
Alice considered the explanation -it seemed truthful enough. She knew how hard Bette worked on her business and that Bette was driven to make it a success. If hard work and bloody mindedness counted for anything then The Bette Porter Gallery would be the most enormous success.
“So that’s even more important that you unwind – Liquid at 8 ?”
Bette sighed “ No “
“What ?”
“What part of no did you not get ? “
“All of it – you don’t want to score ?”
“Alice – I can score in more places than Liquid “
“So you are going to a different club tonight – which one ?”
Bette shook her head “Alice I am going out tonight and you are not part of my plans “
“Where are you going ?”
“Alice – you are not my keeper – I don’t have to tell you “
“You were funny last week “
“Funny ?”
“Yeah – snappy with me and then you ended up playing pool with Shane – and you didn’t score”
“Alice – there is more to life than picking up random women – I am tired doing that “
Alice looked at Bette like she was talking Sanskrit – for several minutes she just stared at the brunette
“That blonde turned you down two weeks ago and its dented your ego “
She decided
Bette hesitated – yes Tina had turned her down but Bette was glad – if she had slept with her it would have been wrong on every single level. Bette didn’t want Tina’s first sexual experience with a woman to be a wham-bam one. Tina deserved to be treated well and feel totally at ease.
“No “ Bette said “ That’s got nothing to do with it – I am fed up with the same old faces in Liquid.”
Alice frowned “You need a nice young chick – someone to fuck your brains out “
Bette wanted to tell Alice that she had found the woman she wanted. But hell would freeze over before she admitted that to Alice – she wouldn’t understand and Bette didn’t have the time or the desire to explain her feelings to her oldest friend.
“I have too much work to do to be getting involved “ Bette lied
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I really like your take on this story. Bette and Tina are having a clandestine relationship that they are keeping secretive. It’s full of electricity. Bring on Bette romancing Tina!! PPS
oh my……..will they kiss tonite…nice story…ally….bring on tlwing
It’s a breath taking story but honestly did you have to stop here Ally please post another one soon
I love this. Alice is sooo nosy. I hope Tina starts to crumble & at least gives Bette a kiss soon.
You are so good at writing all different kinds of stories. This one has a gentle and measured progression. PPS.
Tina romancing Bette WOW…love is in the air…:)
Another great one AllyE.So happy that you are off for a couple weeks and have the time and desire to write. Thank you for taking the time to write, we do enjoy your diverse writing.Oh talented one. You should be writing romance for a living, you would be hugely successful. Seriously. I would but any and everything you write. PPS
Great post. I am glad they are taking the time to get to know each other without the added stress of thier friends butting in. This is slowly becoming my favorite over AYNIL. PPS
I’m really enjoying this story
funnyone, thats kinda funny. jesus as a busybody!!! a little romance never hurt anyone. dont know what you might get from it. thanks.
Talk about building a solid foundation. This story is great!
Ally, beautiful doesn’t do justice to describe this story. You are an amazing writer. This is my new favourite beginning story. It’s simply amazing. Please post soon and more. Merry Christmas and God bless you!
Please let Dana take on Alice. Soon. Is would be soooo good for everybody. Bette could live her own life then. Now what are you going to do about Alice’s counterpart in Tina’s life, namely Helena? Jesus, such busybodies!
Ally, this is a marvelous story… love the way you portray Bette falling for Tina… please post soon!!
I love this story. Its a beginning..which is the best kind because its not messed up by cannon like the affair, Tina going back to men, and all that BS. Plus, watching B/T fall in love in this clandestine relationship they aren’t sharing with anyone is interesting. Can’t wait for more of the date.
That was beautiful!