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Something so right – chapter four
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“I am known to have spells of not talking to anyone – just looking myself away and hiding from the big bad world “
“Everyone gets those days – I usually have retail therapy session or go for a run or something
like that – you have to work your way through it in anyway that you can. My friend Helena buys shoes “
“My sister has had spells in rehab for drink and drug addiction. She has an addictive personality – my father “ Bette sighed -she had skirted over the issue of Melvin when they had been talking earlier about fidelity. Somehow she wanted to tell Tina about him. “My father is not an easy man – he’s a gambling addict and a dirty dog “
“Everyone needs a hobby “ Tina smiled lightly hoping to encourage Bette to open up a little more. Bette ploughed on
“I – I worry that I am more like them than I want to admit. My family make me so sad sometimes. I worry about them and I worry even more that I am becoming them – that truly scares me “
Bette let out a breathe of air – that was way more than she had shared with anyone else in a long time. The only person who came close to knowing the most about Bette Porter was her old friend Alice and even she was deliberately kept at a distance. Bette knew that her fondness for privacy bordered on obsession. She looked at Tina – scared that she had given away too much of herself. Tina smiled at her
“I think that its very hard to know whether an addiction is genetic – you strike me as being someone who is very much in full control of her feelings – maybe too much – but that’s not a bad thing. I am sorry that your family are a source of pain for you – I love my family very much – they are all insane but I do love them and I know that they love me. As much as you worry about your family -you owe it to yourself to live your life in your own way. Just because they have addictions – that is no reason to assume that you are the same. One of the reasons I went to Liquid the other night and met you was that I was not prepared to deny how I know I feel about women. I come from Falls Lake North Carolina – I don’t think we have any gay people in my hometown “
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Ally, I love all your stories. This one is getting off to a great start. I can’t wait for the next post.
Too much black coffee?
what cute update! they are so adorable together, love how they spend the day, walking, talking, holding hands so sweet…. i’m such a sap,lol
This was very sweet. I can’t wait to find out what Tina’s real name is. PPS!!
Great Ally and I have learned how to go at your pace too despite it’s killing me I mean what can I do I love your stories that much, Great job dear, please post soon.All my love
Fanstastic! PPS
I love the way that you have them taking their time to know each other and become friends before they become lovers. Great story Ally, can’t wait for your next update.
I’m really liking your characterisation of these 2. Thx.
As per usual you got me hooked at chapter 1, your just so great at these fanfic stories what can I say other than pps
Sweet.
AllyE, the girls are just too cute together. Learning more about each other. I like the way you have them meeting. Happy that you will have two wks. off and yes we would love more posts of the stories, especially AYNiL and L Wing. PPS
funntone, ui thought it was gas! this is a fun side of each of them. thx
They are so cute and sweet and funny!
Hey Ally, Can you see I’m jumping up and down with the excitement of more chapters from you. I am just loving this romantic and gentle tale. The dialogue between Bette and Tina was awesoem. Honesty poured from Bette as she tried to show Tina the real Bette Porter. These glimpses into Bette’s psyche are so telling. I’m not sure if Tina really appreciates this now. This love affair is beginning blossom. Just perfect. More please. Many, mnay thankd from Your Loyal Fan.
I feel like I’ve seen that somewhere, Bette Porter being POTUS. Where would that be? ;-)
Hey Ally, sweeet update… I had to laugh at Bette’s full name, I’ve only seen that on your neck of the woods. Almost everyone on my other side of the family have 3 or 4 names and I love it! ;)
Hooked already and it’s only Chapter 4!