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Something so right – chapter four
Bette pulled a face back at Tina “ THAT ! “
“Obviously you play by different rules than me – is there a gay book that I need to study ? “
Bette was still laughing. It had been a long time since she had met anyone who had blown her away. But Tina had utterly shocked her in how many ways they were on the same wave length. Plus – and this was growing more obvious with every hour they spent in each other’s company -they were very attracted to each other
Bette had never thought that she had a “type “but there was something about Tina’s blonde hair and hazel eyes that just DID things to her. Tina was stunning and Bette wanted her. The way she smiled was just so welcoming and soft – Bette thought that Tina’s smile was the most beautiful thing that she had ever seen. Bette became aware that she was staring at Tina who was amused by the silence.
“You okay ?”
Bette snapped herself back from her daydream
“Sorry “
“What’s up ?”
Bette decided that having opened up once and it not being a disaster she should risk a little more honesty
“You are so beautiful “
Tina blushed
“I was thinking the same thing about you “
Bette looked around the diner -there was no one near them
“Would it be okay if I held your hand ?”
Tina nodded
Bette moved her hand so it was resting lightly on Tina’s
“If you don’t feel comfortable – tell me “
Tina nodded again “It feels fine “
“I don’t go in for any of this – for having feelings and letting anyone get through my formidable defences “
Bette pressed down on Tina’s hand
“You – have made me really take a hard look at myself. You know that I am a player -you saw my moves. I am tired of that scene -I was in Liquid last night and I hated it “
“Why ?”
“Because of how fake it all is. Because of how fake I am when I am there “
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Ally, I love all your stories. This one is getting off to a great start. I can’t wait for the next post.
Too much black coffee?
what cute update! they are so adorable together, love how they spend the day, walking, talking, holding hands so sweet…. i’m such a sap,lol
This was very sweet. I can’t wait to find out what Tina’s real name is. PPS!!
Great Ally and I have learned how to go at your pace too despite it’s killing me I mean what can I do I love your stories that much, Great job dear, please post soon.All my love
Fanstastic! PPS
I love the way that you have them taking their time to know each other and become friends before they become lovers. Great story Ally, can’t wait for your next update.
I’m really liking your characterisation of these 2. Thx.
As per usual you got me hooked at chapter 1, your just so great at these fanfic stories what can I say other than pps
Sweet.
AllyE, the girls are just too cute together. Learning more about each other. I like the way you have them meeting. Happy that you will have two wks. off and yes we would love more posts of the stories, especially AYNiL and L Wing. PPS
funntone, ui thought it was gas! this is a fun side of each of them. thx
They are so cute and sweet and funny!
Hey Ally, Can you see I’m jumping up and down with the excitement of more chapters from you. I am just loving this romantic and gentle tale. The dialogue between Bette and Tina was awesoem. Honesty poured from Bette as she tried to show Tina the real Bette Porter. These glimpses into Bette’s psyche are so telling. I’m not sure if Tina really appreciates this now. This love affair is beginning blossom. Just perfect. More please. Many, mnay thankd from Your Loyal Fan.
I feel like I’ve seen that somewhere, Bette Porter being POTUS. Where would that be? ;-)
Hey Ally, sweeet update… I had to laugh at Bette’s full name, I’ve only seen that on your neck of the woods. Almost everyone on my other side of the family have 3 or 4 names and I love it! ;)
Hooked already and it’s only Chapter 4!