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Something so right – chapter one
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“Shall we go “ Bette said raising her eyebrows.
“Go where ?” Tina asked
“Your place “ Bette said laying her offer straight on the line.
“That – eh – would be nice “
Bette drained her scotch and stood up “ Lets enjoy our evening away from all of these people “
Bette had never been turned down at this seduction stage. She smiled and offered her hand to Tina. Tina got up and accepted Bette hand.
Tina drove a red Mercedes C class – it was a serious beautiful car. Bette stood in the car park and admired the car -that was almost as beautiful as her beloved blue Saab. She got in the passenger seat and sunk into the delights of the vehicle. It was SO quiet – just bloody wonderful. Bette asked questions about the car on the short journey to Tina’s apartment.
Tina’s apartment – wow – Bette looked at the apartment with serious admiration. It was in an old building – it was the top apartment and very contemporary. Pieces of modern art were cleverly scattered around the place. Bette spotted a piece and whistled
“That’s one of the first piece that Hannah Hobbs ever sold “
Tina smiled “Yes – I saw her work at a gallery about 18 months ago “
Bette smiled “That would be the gallery I used to manage “
“The May Gallery “ Tina concluded “ I hadn’t linked you with that gallery “
“I started my own gallery about 7 months ago “
“Well done – is your gallery as innovative as your old place ?
“
“More so “
Tina nodded “I look forward to seeing it – would you like a coffee ?”
Bette turned to face the blonde – oh God. There had been times when Bette had slept with women for no other reason than they were available. They had been almost preordained – but Tina was different. Tina was stunning – by far and away the most beautiful woman she had craved in months. She was almost smart and cultured – Bette thought that it was almost a shame that she had met Tina here and now. If she had met her at work maybe they would have become more than just a fuck relationship.
Slowly she moved to the blonde and reached out her hand to touch the blonde woman’s face. Tina almost recoiled but stayed at the same place as Bette.
Tina swallowed and reached out her hand to touch Bette’s face – Bette smiled. Tina’s touch
was as good as the blonde looked . Bette moved carefully in for the first and most crucial kiss. Bette was only a few millimetres from Tina’s lips when the blonde pulled away.
“What ? “ Bette asked slightly puzzled
“I can’t “ Tina moved several feet away
“You can “ Bette moved closer to Tina again
“No “ Tina kept backing away
Bette finally cornered Tina against the corner of the breakfast bar and placed her hands either side of Tina stopping her moving but not overtly forceful. Tina was visibly squirming – a fact that made Bette nervous- this did not happen with the women that she seduced.
Bette moved closer and came even closer to kissing the blonde
“NO “
Bette was horrified that Tina was now crying –
“Tina ?”
“I am sorry – will you please go ?””
“Are you sure ?”
“Yes – please “
Bette turned to walk away but something stopped her. This woman was not the standard woman she seduced. She was sexier and there was a connection that she could not deny. Bette took several steps towards the door but stopped and gathered her thoughts for several seconds. She went back and found Tina crying.
“Tina – what’s wrong ?”
Tina tried to turn away but Bette held onto her arm and they faced each other
“I am so sorry “
“Tina – please talk to me”
“I am sorry “
“Tina “
Tina looked at the stunningly beautiful brunette
“I have never slept with a woman – I am utterly terrified Bette — I am sorry “
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Wow. I’m really intruiged my the start of this one. Definitely understand that you can’t post as much as you used to but i hope you get another chapter of this story out soon.
I am sooo glad to see a TiBette story in the making… Thank you. This sounds great. I love the way Bette feels Tina is so special. Soon to be the love of her life. PPS
How the hell do you do that? Having me hooked with for pages? PPS! Pleeeaaaase!
Wow Ally nice start, I love it, you have great ideas there friend please carry on, we will be waiting for the next chapter.All my love
I like it Bette was a little pushy but she is used to all those easy girls that just fall into her bed if she looks at them. Hope she stays and takls to Tina and tries to be a friend to her first.
CON-TIN-UE!
Keep going Ally, like only you know how!
Oh I like… actually erase that… I love! Can’t wait for more!
You’re amazing. Your imagination is exhilirating. How do you come up w/all these different ideas? PPS.
Bette made Tina cry? What a smoothie.
Great beginning Ally. Love all your stories. Can’t wait for more!
Ally you did it again! what fantastic start! please keep going…. love ur stories!
great start. lets see where you take us this time. thanks.
Ally i am so happy to see that you have posted a new story, well i didn’t read it yet, but i am going to right now, i just wanted to ask you, is it a short or long story? thanks love
Good God Ally, how do you do it… your writing especially these Tibette beginnings are so vivid and wonderful. Well you know now that you will simply have to post another chapter pronto :-)Thank you!!!
God Ally I am a tibette beginnings fanatic, and knowing you…it’ll be one of the best Thankyou!!!
I love it!!…Especially, Bette as a demi-goddess….PPS
Woohoo another B&T beginning, like it my friend and please post more, thanks!
Ally, I so love this!!!! My god woman you are one of a kind!!!! Thank you PPS
Great start. Can’t wait for you to contiune.
I look forward to all your stories. Have a great weekend.
Seems that you have started another great B&T beginning. Please continue AllyE. Just how many of these beginnings do you have in mind?
You are a fountain of great stories. Thanks for another great start.
hey ally, this is a great start to what must be a wonderful story, since you are writing it. can’t wait for the next chapter. sorry that you are busier but hope all is well. you know youa re important to us :)