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Something so right – chapter one
Dana sipped her bottle of something that was an un-natural colour of orange
“We’d love to “
Encouraging Dana was looking across to Alice while she spoke to Bette. Bette looked at the blonde fully for the first time
“What about you ?”
“Yes thanks “ the blonde’s accent was Southern – Texas or some state around that sort of area. Bette walked across with Dana and the blonde and busied herself finding two extra chairs.
“This is Shane, Alice and I am Bette “ Bette did the introductions.
“I’m Dana “ said the brunette
“And you are professional tennis player “ Alice said smiling nervously
Bette turned to the blonde and raised an eyebrow
“I’m Tina “ the blonde said holding out her hand. Bette shook it and gave Tina the very best of her smiles. Introductions were made and the five women settled down to chat – no one showed any sign of wanting to dance yet. Alice clicked with Dana – they were laughing at some lame joke of Alice’s. Shane seemed happy just to watch Bette and Alice carrying out their moves.
After a couple of hours it didn’t seem in question that all three friends would not be taking a woman home. Shane had hooked up with a very slim brunette, Alice was doing remarkably well with Dana and Bette — Bette was putting all her well rehearsed moves on Tina. The blonde was not only sexy to look at – but also she was intelligent and witty. Bette for the first time in a lot of months was smitten. This woman was not like any other she had slept in ages – she was capable and very sexy.
Bette returned from the bar and handed a single vodka to the blonde
“I thought maybe that we could skip this and go somewhere else “
Bette said softly
“Are you sure ?”
“Its up to you Tina “
Bette reached her hand out and stroked Tina’s fingers – another much rehearsed move.
“Sure “ Tina said softly
Bette wondered if Tina was nervous – well so what if she was – she would be very relaxed by the time that Bette had laid all the usual moves – moves that never failed.
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(9 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
Wow. I’m really intruiged my the start of this one. Definitely understand that you can’t post as much as you used to but i hope you get another chapter of this story out soon.
I am sooo glad to see a TiBette story in the making… Thank you. This sounds great. I love the way Bette feels Tina is so special. Soon to be the love of her life. PPS
How the hell do you do that? Having me hooked with for pages? PPS! Pleeeaaaase!
Wow Ally nice start, I love it, you have great ideas there friend please carry on, we will be waiting for the next chapter.All my love
I like it Bette was a little pushy but she is used to all those easy girls that just fall into her bed if she looks at them. Hope she stays and takls to Tina and tries to be a friend to her first.
CON-TIN-UE!
Keep going Ally, like only you know how!
Oh I like… actually erase that… I love! Can’t wait for more!
You’re amazing. Your imagination is exhilirating. How do you come up w/all these different ideas? PPS.
Bette made Tina cry? What a smoothie.
Great beginning Ally. Love all your stories. Can’t wait for more!
Ally you did it again! what fantastic start! please keep going…. love ur stories!
great start. lets see where you take us this time. thanks.
Ally i am so happy to see that you have posted a new story, well i didn’t read it yet, but i am going to right now, i just wanted to ask you, is it a short or long story? thanks love
Good God Ally, how do you do it… your writing especially these Tibette beginnings are so vivid and wonderful. Well you know now that you will simply have to post another chapter pronto :-)Thank you!!!
God Ally I am a tibette beginnings fanatic, and knowing you…it’ll be one of the best Thankyou!!!
I love it!!…Especially, Bette as a demi-goddess….PPS
Woohoo another B&T beginning, like it my friend and please post more, thanks!
Ally, I so love this!!!! My god woman you are one of a kind!!!! Thank you PPS
Great start. Can’t wait for you to contiune.
I look forward to all your stories. Have a great weekend.
Seems that you have started another great B&T beginning. Please continue AllyE. Just how many of these beginnings do you have in mind?
You are a fountain of great stories. Thanks for another great start.
hey ally, this is a great start to what must be a wonderful story, since you are writing it. can’t wait for the next chapter. sorry that you are busier but hope all is well. you know youa re important to us :)