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Something so right – chapter one
SOMETHING SO RIGHT
Chapter One
Alice made her way to the bar of Liquid – it was Friday night and it was the usual scrum to get to the bar. Even though it was a little after 7pm it was clear that this was going to be another night where the atmosphere of the club encouraged every lesbian to drink and dance too much. Friday night was the highlight of her week. It was the night she stepped away from the boring heterosexual word she inhabited through the week and she let down her hair and hopefully picked up a hot date for the week ahead.
She looked around for her two friends who would be at the hub of the club tonight like they were every Friday. Alice knew that she was no means a player herself. She was slim and blonde – tonight she was in black combat trousers and a thin and revealing silver coloured shirt – she felt that she looked good. After ten minutes she managed to get to the bar and bought three bottles of beer confident that her friends would be somewhere in the club or just about to walk in the door.
Alice found a small table in the line of the front door so that when her friends arrived she would see them and they would see them. She sat down and took a swig of beer at one of the bottles of beer as she looked around. There was no feeling more exciting that Friday in a lesbian club – the sexual tension was palpable – there was so much hope and expectation. Friday night – lose all the tensions of the week and let your hair down. It was special to leave your weekday personality behind and revel in your sexuality in the company of other lesbians. Alice watched as two women who were dancing together suddenly forgot about the room and everyone around them and began to kiss. She shuddered – there was nothing more sensual than two women locking lips – that sweet taste and the heat coming from their bodies.
“Fuck I just love women “
“Well that is why you are a lesbian Alice “
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(9 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
Wow. I’m really intruiged my the start of this one. Definitely understand that you can’t post as much as you used to but i hope you get another chapter of this story out soon.
I am sooo glad to see a TiBette story in the making… Thank you. This sounds great. I love the way Bette feels Tina is so special. Soon to be the love of her life. PPS
How the hell do you do that? Having me hooked with for pages? PPS! Pleeeaaaase!
Wow Ally nice start, I love it, you have great ideas there friend please carry on, we will be waiting for the next chapter.All my love
I like it Bette was a little pushy but she is used to all those easy girls that just fall into her bed if she looks at them. Hope she stays and takls to Tina and tries to be a friend to her first.
CON-TIN-UE!
Keep going Ally, like only you know how!
Oh I like… actually erase that… I love! Can’t wait for more!
You’re amazing. Your imagination is exhilirating. How do you come up w/all these different ideas? PPS.
Bette made Tina cry? What a smoothie.
Great beginning Ally. Love all your stories. Can’t wait for more!
Ally you did it again! what fantastic start! please keep going…. love ur stories!
great start. lets see where you take us this time. thanks.
Ally i am so happy to see that you have posted a new story, well i didn’t read it yet, but i am going to right now, i just wanted to ask you, is it a short or long story? thanks love
Good God Ally, how do you do it… your writing especially these Tibette beginnings are so vivid and wonderful. Well you know now that you will simply have to post another chapter pronto :-)Thank you!!!
God Ally I am a tibette beginnings fanatic, and knowing you…it’ll be one of the best Thankyou!!!
I love it!!…Especially, Bette as a demi-goddess….PPS
Woohoo another B&T beginning, like it my friend and please post more, thanks!
Ally, I so love this!!!! My god woman you are one of a kind!!!! Thank you PPS
Great start. Can’t wait for you to contiune.
I look forward to all your stories. Have a great weekend.
Seems that you have started another great B&T beginning. Please continue AllyE. Just how many of these beginnings do you have in mind?
You are a fountain of great stories. Thanks for another great start.
hey ally, this is a great start to what must be a wonderful story, since you are writing it. can’t wait for the next chapter. sorry that you are busier but hope all is well. you know youa re important to us :)