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Something so right – chapter three
“Now drop it “ she pointed an angry finger at Alice “ I MEAN IT “
Alice was rarely left without words for very long but Bette’s behaviour had left her speechless. Bette was acting very oddly – and for her not to make a beeline for the hottest woman in the club was unusual -Bette always took a woman home – and it was nearly always the sexiest woman available.
“Tell us about your week “ Bette said to Shane pointedly ignoring Alice
Shane raised her eyebrows at Bette – it was not like the brunette to be so abrupt with Alice- even though Alice was enough to test the patience of a saint.
Shane started to chat hoping to thaw the atmosphere between Alice and Bette. Bette was angry – angry with herself for rising to the bait from Alice. But if she was honest she was even more angry that she was in this club when all she really wanted was to be with Tina – the woman who had never kissed another woman. The woman who was still debating whether coming out would damage her career. But Tina was also the woman whose laugh made her day brighten and whose soft Carolina accent affected Bette in ways that she just couldn’t articulate. The woman who was more beautiful than any model
Across town Tina was also thinking about the woman she had met in Liquid the week before. She was out with Helena and Dana – they were having a Thai meal before going onto a club. Tina hadn’t seen Helena for several days – it was always good to be with the well dressed and slightly snobby English woman. Helena arrived last and quickly placed her order and ordered the best bottle of wine on the menu.
“So -tell me about what you two have been up to “ she grinned at her two friends.
Tina raised her eyebrows at Dana – don’t tell her about last Friday .
Working and not much else “ Tina said
“No fun ? “ Helena asked “ Because you should have been with me in New York – man there were so damn hot women – you have no idea how it feels to be in a lesbian club with all these beautiful and hot women – just gorgeous “
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Just like all the rest, I love this story too.
Ally, great story! Thanks for the post!
hey funnyone, i share. this is cute. but knowing you im sure drama will follow. thanks.
Ally you are amazing. I hope you had a wonderful nap, because you definitely deserved it!
What a great story about Tina’s birth! LMAO. I like where this is going. Bette has found her match!
Loving Tina’s back story – finally something funny about where Tina came from – I’m loving watching Bette fall for Tina – this is truly a first last and forever relationship from the start. Great.
Wooow i am first comment later
Hello ally, once again you have taken my breath away. This story is so very powerful, and fun, I love that Bette is settling down and Tina… Woodstock… White Rabbit… that is so F#$%ing awesome… I love the ambiance of Woodstock… so free… so pure. You are amazing. Sincerely, JC (PS – I had to go to youtube to listen to that song… and guess what the Woodstock performance… just brilliant)
I love it.
I’m sure the breaking of Tina’s mother’s water only added to the mud factor-the summer of love=a large puddle of mud after the rains came. Evidently the good music and right combination of drugs helped to overcome the discomfort. I do love White Rabbit on the radio I turn it up and sing along, both really loudly. A truly bravura performance on Grace Slick’s part! Don’t Bogart that joint!
I like this one, Alley! PPS
Tina, the summer of love, oh wow, what fun. You make them seem so comfortable with one another but yet, there is that undertone of unease because Tina is unsure and Bette has to keep her Lothario ways in check so she doesn’t run Tina off. A very intresting juxtaposition and I can hardly wait until Tina loses her reticience and just goes for it and we know she will, for who can resist Ms. Hotness, one Bette Porter. PPS
Tina’s Mom was high when she was born? Damn. Yeah, thats.. weid. I’m really happy that Bette likes Tina so much she isn’t spending all her time with her..and dogging her behind her back with other girls. However, Alice and Helena are both mad obnoxious. They should hook up..and leave everyone else alone. Can’t wait for more of this one. I looove beginning stories.
Ally, I just read all 3 chapters of your new story and it’s fantastic. I also love the fact, unlike a lot of B&T stories, to get to know each other before jumping into the sack. Can’t wait for your next post!
I am loving this story more with every chapter. Your talent is boundless. The connection between the two is so appealing… a definite case of opposites attracting. Enjoy your well-earned nap!
Yes she does have to have her & what a whirlwind she will be with her hippie parents & you with your staid conservative but unfaithful do as I say not as I do father!!! Great story, SOUNDS LIKE IT WILL BE LOTS OF FUN PPS
This is awesome and love it!