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Something so right – chapter three
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Bette parked her car and smiled – Tina was already there. Bette liked a woman who was always on time. She left her bag in the car and went inside. The café was half empty and Tina was sitting in a booth beside a window. Bette slipped in facing her
“Hey there “
“Hey Bette “ Tina was always glad to see Bette
Bette smiled – Tina’s smile was a thing of joy.
“I’m hungry – you ?”
“Yeah – I need to soak up the alcohol “
“Bit of a night ? “ Tina said sympathetically
“Not in the way you think – Alice started on at me and I was just very grumpy “
“Why did she pick on you – yes – can we have a pot of coffee please “
Tina spoke to the waitress
Bette waited until she was hugging her first coffee of the day
“So – why did Alice wind you up ?”
“Alice doesn’t need a reason “ Bette said sipping the strong black liquid
“So – why was she winding you up ?”
Bette smiled “Alice is insane – I do like her but she gets things in her head and it takes a giant crane to get it out. There was a model in the club last night “
“Which one ?”
“Pippa something – advertised Levis “
“Blonde – about 6ft “
Bette nodded “ Yeah “
“And Alice expected you to make a move on her ?”
Bette nodded as she looked at the menu – the food that other people were getting looked delicious – it was along time since she had enjoyed some good basic food. The waitress came across
“I will have bacon and scrambled eggs” Bette said
“Same for me – with lots of toast “ Tina said
Bette nodded “Make that double toast “
When they were alone Tina looked at Bette
“You don’t do models ?”
“I am with you – I don’t do anyone when I am in a relationship “
“You are monogamous ?”
“I am “Bette sipped her coffee “ I saw so much about how infidelity can destroy a relationship . I may be a hound dog but I do believe in marriage and being faithful to only one woman “
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Just like all the rest, I love this story too.
Ally, great story! Thanks for the post!
hey funnyone, i share. this is cute. but knowing you im sure drama will follow. thanks.
Ally you are amazing. I hope you had a wonderful nap, because you definitely deserved it!
What a great story about Tina’s birth! LMAO. I like where this is going. Bette has found her match!
Loving Tina’s back story – finally something funny about where Tina came from – I’m loving watching Bette fall for Tina – this is truly a first last and forever relationship from the start. Great.
Wooow i am first comment later
Hello ally, once again you have taken my breath away. This story is so very powerful, and fun, I love that Bette is settling down and Tina… Woodstock… White Rabbit… that is so F#$%ing awesome… I love the ambiance of Woodstock… so free… so pure. You are amazing. Sincerely, JC (PS – I had to go to youtube to listen to that song… and guess what the Woodstock performance… just brilliant)
I love it.
I’m sure the breaking of Tina’s mother’s water only added to the mud factor-the summer of love=a large puddle of mud after the rains came. Evidently the good music and right combination of drugs helped to overcome the discomfort. I do love White Rabbit on the radio I turn it up and sing along, both really loudly. A truly bravura performance on Grace Slick’s part! Don’t Bogart that joint!
I like this one, Alley! PPS
Tina, the summer of love, oh wow, what fun. You make them seem so comfortable with one another but yet, there is that undertone of unease because Tina is unsure and Bette has to keep her Lothario ways in check so she doesn’t run Tina off. A very intresting juxtaposition and I can hardly wait until Tina loses her reticience and just goes for it and we know she will, for who can resist Ms. Hotness, one Bette Porter. PPS
Tina’s Mom was high when she was born? Damn. Yeah, thats.. weid. I’m really happy that Bette likes Tina so much she isn’t spending all her time with her..and dogging her behind her back with other girls. However, Alice and Helena are both mad obnoxious. They should hook up..and leave everyone else alone. Can’t wait for more of this one. I looove beginning stories.
Ally, I just read all 3 chapters of your new story and it’s fantastic. I also love the fact, unlike a lot of B&T stories, to get to know each other before jumping into the sack. Can’t wait for your next post!
I am loving this story more with every chapter. Your talent is boundless. The connection between the two is so appealing… a definite case of opposites attracting. Enjoy your well-earned nap!
Yes she does have to have her & what a whirlwind she will be with her hippie parents & you with your staid conservative but unfaithful do as I say not as I do father!!! Great story, SOUNDS LIKE IT WILL BE LOTS OF FUN PPS
This is awesome and love it!