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Something so right – chapter two
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Bette grinned
“Something like that – Helena is protective of us. She has been terrific – talking about how she feels about being gay and what pitfalls to avoid “
“One of the pitfalls being avoid bear pits like Liquid “
“Yeah “
“I remember when I was at college we got some fake id’s and went to a lesbian bar in town. Well I was terrified – the place was full of lesbians – some utterly terrifying – others just drop dead sexy and all I could think was “ – these women are exactly like me in that they like women – I probably was as scared as you were tonight “
“I wasn’t scared – I loved it. Like you say -the whole thing about being in a place where you are not the odd one out for looking at women in a sexual way. The atmosphere just felt like nothing I have ever felt before. It was exhilarating – but I am sorry that I lead you to think that I was going to “
Tina looked down. Bette put her coffee mug on the coaster on the coffee table and went across to where Tina was sitting on the sofa.
“Tina – please stop apologizing . I am a big girl and I can look after myself. You were the sexiest woman in there tonight “
Tina went red and smiled at Bette
“Thanks – are you always so smooth ?”
“Yes “
Tina laughed and rubbed her eyes again
“I am sorry “
“Will you stop saying that word. Look its late “
“Yeah and I have a meeting at 7:30 and I am so not a morning person. “
Tina reluctantly agreed that they should end the evening
Bette took her purse and withdrew her business card
“Give me a call if you want a coffee “
Tina took the card and stood up
“I’ll just get mine “
She picked up a briefcase and put it on the sofa
“Wow “
“What ?”
“That’s a Schedoni “
Tina nodded “ Yeah – most people don’t recognise it as being one of the best manufacturers on the market “
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Yeah, this story is very easy to fall into because the premise is so good. I’m guessing Helena will hate Bette..and not trust her. However, I hope Bette keeps proving she isn’t just a one night fuck them and leave them type.
My God that is a total torture, i can’t seem to wait, can you make it alittle faster, but i guess that is just a wish and i have to wait right?? very nice Ally as always please continue.Love
Ditto all comments. Audi has a very good point Helena being the preditor type herself will automatically think Bette is out to victomize Tina since I am sure they have run around in the same circles at some time or another but actions speak louder than words. So if Hel watches and listens instead of jumping to conclusions she will see that the old Bette is no more.
I’m totally hooked as everyone else is… I love B&T beginnings! Please continue soon!
Alright this is so good and let see their date coming. Please post soon, thanks!
You making me grin uncontrolably Gumby. I’m so crazy about beginnings, so glad you giving us one.
Wonderful beginning – how Bette leaves the predator past behind and maybe we will learn something interesting about Tina’s past – thank you Ally great new road with this one.
I am so hook on this one. It’a my new fav story. Pls continue soon, Ally.
I love this story. Bette always melts around Tina.. I love their beginnings..
Like this one AllyE, poor Bette does nt realize that she is pure toast and a goner. PPS
Yeap… hooked on this one too… Sigh… why did my boss has to changed my flight to UK to 11 Dec instead of 27 Nov, or else I would have met this certain blonde called Laurel in Blackpool too ;)
I love your stories and I love B&T Beginnings. I love it, when Bette becomes a softy around Tina and she does not get it at all – cute.
what blase and zabo says, I am hooked on this one too. PPS:)
It’s just something special about beginnings. I can’t wait to see how Bette and Tina get along. Sounds like Bette’s predator nature will be put to the test. PPS
delicious, Ally. Love when Bette shows her softer side… cute and flirty. Can never get enough of your amazing writing!!
Ditto what ever else says…. please keep tina strong and confident! also make sure they communicate always regardless good/ bad pps
ok here I am leaving a note (when I said I hardly ever with your stories), I AM REALLY LOVING THIS ONE, now I can honestly say between this and The L Wing I don’t know which one I’d like you to update sooner!!!! LOVE THIS TINA (strong, confident, knows what she wants etc). GREAT START!!!!
Love how they are opening up to each other. PPS!!
If Liquid is a bear pit how come it’s full of lesbians and not big, hairy, gay boys? Must be nice to be 26 and a rich executive, I’ve not been so blessed. OK, they’ve gone all gooey for each other-carry on.
I love that this Tina has some guns of her own, vulnerable yes, but doesn’t seem to be a pushover…a mix that will be sure to keep Bette on her toes…PPS, as usual I’m addicted already, in a kind way….you’re like what I read about chrystal meth….one dose and you’re hooked for life
Tina’s strong and confident? Where? When?
great beginning 4 them both.
yeah, im not a rich ex ecutive either and im way older than 26. dont like hairy (gay or not) men. scary. thanks.
Yes, hooked! I do love the way you write bette and tina falling in love. It’s tender, sweet, and sexy. Thank you for sharing with us.
This is so flipping great!