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Something so right – chapter two
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Bette shook her head – this woman was something else – they even had the same taste in expensive briefcases. Tina smiled and took out a card holder and handed Bette her card. Bette tried to fake indifference by just slipping it into her wallet – in truth she was dying to know what this beautiful woman’s full name was.
“Well Bette Porter -thank you for being incredibly kind and understanding “
Tina was looking at Bette’s card
“Pleasure “ Bette walked to the door and looked back at the blonde
“I mean it – ring me and we will have coffee “
Tina nodded “ I will “
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Bette’s day was taking on new depths of boredom. Being in her own bed when she had woken up on Saturday morning had meant that she had got more done in the morning and it was now 3pm and she was at a loose end. What to do ? She could ring Alice or see how sober her sister Kit was – neither appealed. Certainly not as much as thinking about Tina Kennard – Bette had not been able to get the blonde of out her mind all day – there was something about her that she just couldn’t shake off. After channel hoping for ten minutes she finally picked up her phone and dialled the number.
“Hello “
“Hey Tina – its Bette”
There was a silence for a few seconds
“Hey there “ Tina said brightly
“You okay ?”
“Fine- what are you up to ?”
“Nothing – -what about you “
“Just about to leave work “
Bette wasn’t used to being this nervous – or even having to ask a woman if she could see her
“I was just wondering if you fancied doing something “
“I would love to “
“Really ? “ Bette cursed herself – why was she so pathetically pleased about not being turned
down “
“Sure – where do you live – I’ll come and get you “
Bette paused.
“Do you know where the Torrent Market is in Lennox “
“Sure “
“Well I’ll met you there – I have to pick up a couple of things “
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Yeah, this story is very easy to fall into because the premise is so good. I’m guessing Helena will hate Bette..and not trust her. However, I hope Bette keeps proving she isn’t just a one night fuck them and leave them type.
My God that is a total torture, i can’t seem to wait, can you make it alittle faster, but i guess that is just a wish and i have to wait right?? very nice Ally as always please continue.Love
Ditto all comments. Audi has a very good point Helena being the preditor type herself will automatically think Bette is out to victomize Tina since I am sure they have run around in the same circles at some time or another but actions speak louder than words. So if Hel watches and listens instead of jumping to conclusions she will see that the old Bette is no more.
I’m totally hooked as everyone else is… I love B&T beginnings! Please continue soon!
Alright this is so good and let see their date coming. Please post soon, thanks!
You making me grin uncontrolably Gumby. I’m so crazy about beginnings, so glad you giving us one.
Wonderful beginning – how Bette leaves the predator past behind and maybe we will learn something interesting about Tina’s past – thank you Ally great new road with this one.
I am so hook on this one. It’a my new fav story. Pls continue soon, Ally.
I love this story. Bette always melts around Tina.. I love their beginnings..
Like this one AllyE, poor Bette does nt realize that she is pure toast and a goner. PPS
Yeap… hooked on this one too… Sigh… why did my boss has to changed my flight to UK to 11 Dec instead of 27 Nov, or else I would have met this certain blonde called Laurel in Blackpool too ;)
I love your stories and I love B&T Beginnings. I love it, when Bette becomes a softy around Tina and she does not get it at all – cute.
what blase and zabo says, I am hooked on this one too. PPS:)
It’s just something special about beginnings. I can’t wait to see how Bette and Tina get along. Sounds like Bette’s predator nature will be put to the test. PPS
delicious, Ally. Love when Bette shows her softer side… cute and flirty. Can never get enough of your amazing writing!!
Ditto what ever else says…. please keep tina strong and confident! also make sure they communicate always regardless good/ bad pps
ok here I am leaving a note (when I said I hardly ever with your stories), I AM REALLY LOVING THIS ONE, now I can honestly say between this and The L Wing I don’t know which one I’d like you to update sooner!!!! LOVE THIS TINA (strong, confident, knows what she wants etc). GREAT START!!!!
Love how they are opening up to each other. PPS!!
If Liquid is a bear pit how come it’s full of lesbians and not big, hairy, gay boys? Must be nice to be 26 and a rich executive, I’ve not been so blessed. OK, they’ve gone all gooey for each other-carry on.
I love that this Tina has some guns of her own, vulnerable yes, but doesn’t seem to be a pushover…a mix that will be sure to keep Bette on her toes…PPS, as usual I’m addicted already, in a kind way….you’re like what I read about chrystal meth….one dose and you’re hooked for life
Tina’s strong and confident? Where? When?
great beginning 4 them both.
yeah, im not a rich ex ecutive either and im way older than 26. dont like hairy (gay or not) men. scary. thanks.
Yes, hooked! I do love the way you write bette and tina falling in love. It’s tender, sweet, and sexy. Thank you for sharing with us.
This is so flipping great!