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Something so right – chapter two
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“Wednesday “
“Okay – I’ll talk to you tomorrow okay – I haven’t got anything planned”
Tina hung up the phone and gathered her thoughts – so why had Bette not jumped her or just left her alone when it was obvious that she wasn’t going to put out ?
Maybe Bette was not the vamp that Helena was forever warning her about.
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Tina pulled up at the place she had agreed with Bette. There was only one car that could possibly belong to Bette– the perfectly clean blue Saab- Tina swung her car around and parked next to Bette’s car. Sure enough the brunette was sitting in the passenger seat. Tina waved and waited. Bette got out of her car and moved round the front of Tina’s car. Tina looked the brunette over – faded Wrangler jeans and a red shirt. Very nice.
Bette opened the door and got in
“Hi there – right on time “
“I hate lateness “
“Me too “
Tina laughed “What do you fancy doing – food ? Shopping or just a coffee “
“There’s a second hand book shop a few blocks away – I keep promising myself that I will check it out. I know they have a café as well “
“Sounds perfect to me “
Tina started the car and in ten minutes they were in the converted warehouse that housed a bookstore as well as an organic food store, a café and several antique shops. They started in the café – Bette insisted on buying the coffee and two pastries.
“Can I ask you something “
“Of course “
Tina took a deep breath
“Helena keeps warning me about predators who will chew me up and spit me out “
“There are a fair few of those around “
“Are you one ?”
Bette looked down -yes she was. Tina saw the reaction and knew the answer
“So why did you not jump me last night ?”
“I’d never do that -that’s not who I am – I “ Bette stopped – in the past she had done that though.
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Yeah, this story is very easy to fall into because the premise is so good. I’m guessing Helena will hate Bette..and not trust her. However, I hope Bette keeps proving she isn’t just a one night fuck them and leave them type.
My God that is a total torture, i can’t seem to wait, can you make it alittle faster, but i guess that is just a wish and i have to wait right?? very nice Ally as always please continue.Love
Ditto all comments. Audi has a very good point Helena being the preditor type herself will automatically think Bette is out to victomize Tina since I am sure they have run around in the same circles at some time or another but actions speak louder than words. So if Hel watches and listens instead of jumping to conclusions she will see that the old Bette is no more.
I’m totally hooked as everyone else is… I love B&T beginnings! Please continue soon!
Alright this is so good and let see their date coming. Please post soon, thanks!
You making me grin uncontrolably Gumby. I’m so crazy about beginnings, so glad you giving us one.
Wonderful beginning – how Bette leaves the predator past behind and maybe we will learn something interesting about Tina’s past – thank you Ally great new road with this one.
I am so hook on this one. It’a my new fav story. Pls continue soon, Ally.
I love this story. Bette always melts around Tina.. I love their beginnings..
Like this one AllyE, poor Bette does nt realize that she is pure toast and a goner. PPS
Yeap… hooked on this one too… Sigh… why did my boss has to changed my flight to UK to 11 Dec instead of 27 Nov, or else I would have met this certain blonde called Laurel in Blackpool too ;)
I love your stories and I love B&T Beginnings. I love it, when Bette becomes a softy around Tina and she does not get it at all – cute.
what blase and zabo says, I am hooked on this one too. PPS:)
It’s just something special about beginnings. I can’t wait to see how Bette and Tina get along. Sounds like Bette’s predator nature will be put to the test. PPS
delicious, Ally. Love when Bette shows her softer side… cute and flirty. Can never get enough of your amazing writing!!
Ditto what ever else says…. please keep tina strong and confident! also make sure they communicate always regardless good/ bad pps
ok here I am leaving a note (when I said I hardly ever with your stories), I AM REALLY LOVING THIS ONE, now I can honestly say between this and The L Wing I don’t know which one I’d like you to update sooner!!!! LOVE THIS TINA (strong, confident, knows what she wants etc). GREAT START!!!!
Love how they are opening up to each other. PPS!!
If Liquid is a bear pit how come it’s full of lesbians and not big, hairy, gay boys? Must be nice to be 26 and a rich executive, I’ve not been so blessed. OK, they’ve gone all gooey for each other-carry on.
I love that this Tina has some guns of her own, vulnerable yes, but doesn’t seem to be a pushover…a mix that will be sure to keep Bette on her toes…PPS, as usual I’m addicted already, in a kind way….you’re like what I read about chrystal meth….one dose and you’re hooked for life
Tina’s strong and confident? Where? When?
great beginning 4 them both.
yeah, im not a rich ex ecutive either and im way older than 26. dont like hairy (gay or not) men. scary. thanks.
Yes, hooked! I do love the way you write bette and tina falling in love. It’s tender, sweet, and sexy. Thank you for sharing with us.
This is so flipping great!