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Something so right – chapter two
But she hadn’t been able to look after herself had she ? She had lost her nerve when she had got a beautiful woman to come back to her apartment. It wasn’t just that she had got a woman interested in her but it was the hottest woman that she had ever seen in her life. Tina had not been able to take her eyes off Bette and she thought that Bette was interested in her – Bette could have had any woman and she had picked her. What did that say ? That Tina had been a fool to turn Bette down ? No – she knew that she could not have gone through with having sex with the brunette. Maybe that was her one and only chance with the sexiest woman she knew. But it was encouraging that Bette wanted to see her again.
“Tina – are you awake ?”
“Sorry – day dreaming “
“You have to stop day dreaming about women and met some – how about I set you up with a nice lesbian “
“I don’t want a nice lesbian- I want a hot one “
“Tina – if I introduced you to some of the serious players you would faint “
I nearly did Tina thought
“Tina – you are very vulnerable at the moment “
“I’m fine “
“You are attractive and wealthy – you would not be short of offers – I don’t want you falling in with some predator who will only want to fuck you and then dump you “
“Are there women like that ?”
“Yes – they cruise lesbian bars and they take a different woman home every time and they get you back to your place and then they jump on you “
“And if I said no to the jump“
“One of two things – your protests would be ignored or they would make you feel like shit and just leave you “
Tina thought back to the night before – Bette could have jumped on her – but she hadn’t. Just like she could have just walked out – she hadn’t done that either.
“This is all very educational but I am running late – when are you back ?”
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Yeah, this story is very easy to fall into because the premise is so good. I’m guessing Helena will hate Bette..and not trust her. However, I hope Bette keeps proving she isn’t just a one night fuck them and leave them type.
My God that is a total torture, i can’t seem to wait, can you make it alittle faster, but i guess that is just a wish and i have to wait right?? very nice Ally as always please continue.Love
Ditto all comments. Audi has a very good point Helena being the preditor type herself will automatically think Bette is out to victomize Tina since I am sure they have run around in the same circles at some time or another but actions speak louder than words. So if Hel watches and listens instead of jumping to conclusions she will see that the old Bette is no more.
I’m totally hooked as everyone else is… I love B&T beginnings! Please continue soon!
Alright this is so good and let see their date coming. Please post soon, thanks!
You making me grin uncontrolably Gumby. I’m so crazy about beginnings, so glad you giving us one.
Wonderful beginning – how Bette leaves the predator past behind and maybe we will learn something interesting about Tina’s past – thank you Ally great new road with this one.
I am so hook on this one. It’a my new fav story. Pls continue soon, Ally.
I love this story. Bette always melts around Tina.. I love their beginnings..
Like this one AllyE, poor Bette does nt realize that she is pure toast and a goner. PPS
Yeap… hooked on this one too… Sigh… why did my boss has to changed my flight to UK to 11 Dec instead of 27 Nov, or else I would have met this certain blonde called Laurel in Blackpool too ;)
I love your stories and I love B&T Beginnings. I love it, when Bette becomes a softy around Tina and she does not get it at all – cute.
what blase and zabo says, I am hooked on this one too. PPS:)
It’s just something special about beginnings. I can’t wait to see how Bette and Tina get along. Sounds like Bette’s predator nature will be put to the test. PPS
delicious, Ally. Love when Bette shows her softer side… cute and flirty. Can never get enough of your amazing writing!!
Ditto what ever else says…. please keep tina strong and confident! also make sure they communicate always regardless good/ bad pps
ok here I am leaving a note (when I said I hardly ever with your stories), I AM REALLY LOVING THIS ONE, now I can honestly say between this and The L Wing I don’t know which one I’d like you to update sooner!!!! LOVE THIS TINA (strong, confident, knows what she wants etc). GREAT START!!!!
Love how they are opening up to each other. PPS!!
If Liquid is a bear pit how come it’s full of lesbians and not big, hairy, gay boys? Must be nice to be 26 and a rich executive, I’ve not been so blessed. OK, they’ve gone all gooey for each other-carry on.
I love that this Tina has some guns of her own, vulnerable yes, but doesn’t seem to be a pushover…a mix that will be sure to keep Bette on her toes…PPS, as usual I’m addicted already, in a kind way….you’re like what I read about chrystal meth….one dose and you’re hooked for life
Tina’s strong and confident? Where? When?
great beginning 4 them both.
yeah, im not a rich ex ecutive either and im way older than 26. dont like hairy (gay or not) men. scary. thanks.
Yes, hooked! I do love the way you write bette and tina falling in love. It’s tender, sweet, and sexy. Thank you for sharing with us.
This is so flipping great!