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Something so right – chp 91
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“You stay here “
“Bette “
“No – I want to talk to her “
“Bette “
“Ti – please honey “
Tina looked at her for a minute and finally nodded
“Okay “
Bette went across and put a part of shorts on and a tee-shirt
“You just take a nap “
“What are you going to say ?”
“I don’t know “
Bette lent forward and kissed her fully on the lips
“I love you “
Just as they kissed again the door bell sounded. Bette sighed and grin at Tina
“Wonder who that could be “
Bette walked out of the bedroom and through to the front door. She unlocked the door and opened it. Her mother was standing carrying a box
“Hello darling “
“Hello Elizabeth – come in “
Bette stood aside for Elizabeth to walk through “Can I put this in the kitchen ?”
“Sure “
Just as Bette said yes she remembered what was in the kitchen. Oh hell.
Elizabeth stepped over Tina’s discarded sports bra and put the box down. Bette cursed
“Sorry – eh “
“Bette – you are a truly terrible liar. You were when you were a child and I am pleased to see that 27 years has not changed that. There was no lunchtime appointment with your friend’s mother.”
Bette blushed and nodded
“Sorry – it was just that “
“Yes ?”
“I – we get “ Bette sighed – the game was up – tell the truth as lying had been such a total disaster “Tina and I get really horny and we just wanted some time “
“To make out “ Elizabeth inquired
Bette nodded
“Hence the clothing as carpeting ?”
“Yeah – I’m sorry. You shocked us both- we had been promising each other than we were going to make out when the race had finished. We just couldn’t.. oh hell – I am really sorry Elizabeth “
“You forget that I was young once upon a time and I do know what its like to be so all consumed with desire. “
“Lets sit down “ Bette indicated the kitchen table
Elizabeth did and regarded Bette.
“If its any help Tina and I feel really bad “
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Maybe rare, but sizzling.
WoWWWWW!! and Thanks for the heat in the foggies and freezing day in Chicago. :)
I’m with the others in not trusting Elizabeth. She comes across very overbearing and intrusive, not to mention her creepy, stalker tendencies. She makes Melvin look like the good parent…yikes! As for the NC-17, feel free to describe each day of Tina’s dominance. So glad you’re back posting!!
AllyE, you are not rusty in doing NC-17’s, you did a wonderful job and warmed up my cold Sunday. I’m with everyone else, I don’t quite trust Elizabeth for some reason, it is just a gut feeling but it’s there anyway. Maybe she is on the level and just wants to get to know Bette and doesn’t want to waste any more time in doing so. She had already promised Tina that she would not keep showing up unannounced and she has shown up twice since promising Tina. What she doesn’t want to do is make Tina angry with her if she upsets Bette. Because our beautiful and sweet Tina will be like a uncaged lioness if Elizabeth hurts Bette. She will get to see what an Alpha Tina is all about. We know she doesn’t want that even if she doesn’t know it yet. I know I’m taking a risk asking for another story but how about a chapter of JTWYA. Take care AllyE and thanks too for posting today.
AllyE, you are not rusty in doing NC-17’s, you did a wonderful job and warmed up my cold Sunday. I’m with everyone else, I don’t quite trust Elizabeth for some reason, it is just a gut feeling but it’s there anyway. Maybe she is on the level and just wants to get to know Bette and doesn’t want to waste any more time in doing so. She had already promised Tina that she would not keep showing up unannounced and she has shown up twice since promising Tina. What she doesn’t want to do is make Tina angry with her if she upsets Bette. Because our beautiful and sweet Tina will be like a uncaged lioness if Elizabeth hurts Bette. She will get to see what an Alpha Tina is all about. We know she doesn’t want that even if she doesn’t know it yet. I know I’m taking a risk asking for another story but how about a chapter of JTWYA. Take care AllyE and thanks too for posting today.
That was great and hot, they are wonderful. Elizabeth need to back off a little and let Bette breath and have time with Tina. Please post more, thanks!
okay what does bette’s mom really want? :)PPS
I think meeting Hannah may shed a little light. And when is Bette going to beat Melvin senseless for hiding all this info? Thanks for posting!
Yes Wow! Wow! Wow! What a post all right. Thank you for this story. So so loving it.
WOW!! What a post to wake up to so early in the morning. Elizabeth is coming on a little strong. I wonder does she have something up her sleeve?I would be a little annoyed and curiousas to why she’s being so pushy. Love this story and all you write. PPVVS
It does bother me that Elizabeth is being a little pushy and coming on too strong right now. I’m not sure that I trust her, but I’m interested to see how things develop and how their dinner goes. Thanks for the NC17! What a way to wake up this morning, and from one of my favorite writers! PPS
“the heat they were going to generate could accidentally defrost the fridge” – love it! Elizabeth intrigues me, what is she up to?! PPS!
At least they conserve water by showering together, cause they may be responsible for some of the wildfires plaguing LA these days.
As the saying is, Elizabeth “so sticks than the burdock.” :o)
I’ll raise my glass to that too. Cheers! Thanks for the update.
I agree with trecelovinit, there is something about Elizabeth that is making me feel uneasy. I hope Elizabeth doesn’t make Melvin look like a saint. Tina will rip Elizabeth’s head off if she as so much makes Bette shed a tear. Awesome update.
Terrific!!!! That was sexy and hot!!! Elizabeth will back off somewhat now. Thx.
Hey Ally, You always keep the physical side of Bette and Tina’s realtionship fresh and exciting. Their need for each other was immediate while the pay-off was so torturously slow that eveyone was due to explode. Good to have Bette and Tina so passionate in their carnal relationship. This cements their union at every turn. The heat between them was intense and I am surprised that the shower didn’t just evaporate when they entered. Now could we have Tina returning the favour as the show mainly had Bette was the giver. I want to have the tables turned. OK so Bette is the slave but I believe handcuffs were mentioned and shouldn’t Ti be teasing her sexual minion. Please make it so and make it soon. Much appreciation from Your Loyal Fan.
I’m like Tina and still think there’s something that’s not quite right with Elizabeth. I hope for Bette’s sake it isn’t something major. Sooo happy you’re posting again!
WOW!!! Another wonderful update Ally!!! I do hope Elizabeth is not up to something. Thank you
Great post. I”m glad Bette has her priorities straight. Even though she has always longed for a relationship with her mother she knows that her relationship with Tina is the primary one. Hopefully Elizabeth will keep that in my too.