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Soul Mates – Chapter 1 ((edited))
Tina felt her heart begin to race as she felt Bette’s warm breath fanning her cheeks. Her lips parted instinctively as Bette brought her face closer and gently lifted her head so that her nose lightly tapped Tina’s. She spoke so low, so huskily that Tina forgot everything. She forgot where she was, what she was there for and why. She even forgot to breathe.
"I’ll tell you what . . "
Tina’s skin tingled as Bette placed her hands on her waist. They were as strong as Tina remembered, strong but so tender at the same time and so utterly pleasing. Tina used to easily get off on imagining the things Bette’s magic fingers had done to her, on what she wanted done to her. She willed her body not to tremble as she felt those hands and those slender fingers slowly glide along her waist and wrap around to the back.
"After you finish seeing your parents, I’ll sign the papers . . does that sound fair?"
All Tina could manage was a slow nod of her head, swallowing while trying to ignore the throbbing that began between her legs. How could Bette still have such an effect on her after so long? How could her body respond so easily to Bette’s touch after just a few minutes ago all Tina wanted to do was ring her neck?
Bette’s lips lifted to a smirk, a very sexy "I have you wrapped around my finger" smirk. Damn her and her seductive ways.
"Good, so its settled. Until then . . ."
Before Tina could even process what happened, Bette snatched the envelope out of her hand and turned around to walk back to her porch. Tina was stunned, staring at the retreating back of her wife, wide eyed and speechless. After a few moments, she blinked and snapped herself out of her lustful daze.
"That was low, even for you"
Bette looked over her shoulder and smiled victoriously, "All is fair in love and war, darlin’"
Tina’s eye narrowed and shook her head as Bette walked toward her door.
"You’re such an ass!" She called out.
"Prissy" Bette called over her shoulder as she opened the screen door.
Tina was so upset she couldn’t think of another comeback. She pressed her lips together before yelling out, "Ass!" once again before Bette walked inside her house. Tina turned around and let out a loud growl of frustration and stomped over to her car. She got inside and sat there for a second before hitting the steering wheel a few times.
Bette really knew how to get under her skin. If there was a word for irritating and frustrating put together, that would be Bette. How dare she step so close, looking at Tina as if she desired her? She looked like she wanted to kiss Tina, a kiss that Tina wasn’t so sure she would reject.
At that thought, Tina turned on the car and headed toward her parents’ house. The sooner she visited them, the sooner she would be back so that Bette could finally sign the divorce papers and she could go back to New York. Helena was waiting for her.
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mckenzie04 says
that was awesome! it’s exactly the way i imagined the banter between them. i can’t wait to read the next one.
talaula says
Damn Liah!!! You just made this movie 1000x better. I’m going to think of another movie you Lwordize (yep, I just made that up) 😄 oh well. Thanks for the awesome update.
jp22 says
I guess Tina had better see her parents then… Helena is waiting. (ha!) So Tina only left Bette three years ago and has been trying to get Bette to sign divorce papers for at least two of those years, what happened to have their relationship be on the rocks for FIVE years then? I’ve never seen the movie, so what’s so severe that they’ve lost so much time? Let’s see if Tina actually gets to her parents house and therefore gets Bette to sign those divorce papers. Thanks for the post! :)
wkm says
Loved it, thanks
ut says
Damn that was so good and hope they can talk land work thing out. Please post more, thanks!
Dainty says
Loved it. The movie premise is perfect for these two. PPS
nanouchbaby80 says
sweet home alabama i like it thanks!!
mush1912 says
Oh I think I’ve got me a new favourite story ;)…enjoyed the film can’t wait to read your version – loving the banter, bring.it.on!!!! Pps
virginiagirl says
Loved the movie & I’m loving this.. pps .. can’t wait
favcouple says
That was just absolutely wonderful. Thank you.
sarah1706 says
Love this! Please post soon! :)
didi1956 says
Bette don`t sign the papers !!!Great update,thank you.PPS
bette.porter.fan says
thnks Liah this is amazing its crazy b/c i saw this movie about a year ago and so thought of making it into a tibette story but i cant write so i didnt.. I also thought about making indecent proposal into tibette too maybe one day ill try to write a story.. thanks again for this, hope to read more soon.
Tibetter24 says
Tina, don’t you know it’s the spark that matters? Sorry Helena lol I love this Liah really awesome. Maybe a good movie you can do is the Wedding Date hahaha pretty funny one to do
aqueous_one says
First, thx for this update..didn’t get to leave a comment before it was re-edited. You helped clear most of my questions up, but I still have two more – when Tina says their 8 year anniversary, she was referring to her and B being together since they were 13? Next, she got together with Helena a year after she left B? Looking forward to the appearance of Peggy..though I can’t imagine her disliking T as Candice Bergen didn’t like Reese’s character. Anyway, thx again & now off to enjoy the next post!