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Stained – Chapter 11
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"Hey Tina, it’s Bette. You left your earring in my car yesterday. I could send it to you or you could come by the set this afternoon to pick it up if you need it soon or something. I should be done shooting around 4. I’ll let security know to let you in." The rest of the message was Bette giving her directions to the set. Tina’s heart rate had once again doubled when she heard Bette’s voice and she was feeling all warm and fuzzy inside.
The warm and fuzzy feeling remained the rest of the afternoon, but was slowly being replaced by a nervous anticipation. She couldn’t even remember losing her earring again. ‘No, of course not. If you did, you would have picked it up again.’ Come to think of it, leaving her earring would have been a pretty clever move. Had she really done that? ‘Maybe I did it subconsciously? If I had been fully aware of it, I would have probably chickened out. God, maybe I have selective amnesia… Well, never mind that. I’m going to see Bette again!’
Bette would of course be surrounded by the people she worked with and she wouldn’t have a lot of time, but still… She was going to see Bette again! Just thinking about her made Tina’s heart rate speed up yet again. This was not good for her. She was suffering from severe Bettina pectoris.
*Bloody motherfucking hell! I can’t work like this! The phone has been ringing off the hook the entire day. That wouldn’t be so bad if it were some cute guy – or girl of course, you never know… – calling for me, but it’s just my dad’s co-workers and weird, weird people calling for my twin brother. From now on I’ll be answering the phone with ‘Yesh, this is Ali’s shlaughterhouse. You want sheep? I have many, many dead sheep just for you. I cut them up with big knife for you.’ Jesus fucking Christ, there it goes again! I swear it has seriously rung 10 times in the last hour. And our phone makes a blood-chilling sound, too. I’m going to become a hermit. Yeah, sorry. I’ll try not to make a habit of interrupting the story, but otherwise I would have had to throw something out of the window and the only thing close is my computer –> would be worse for the progress of the story. :D*
‘Maybe I should call Bette to let her know I’m coming? Yes, that would certainly be polite.’ Tina dialed Bette’s number -she already knew it by heart – and waited.
"Yesh, this is Ali’s shlaughterhouse. You want sheep? I have many, many dead sheep just for you. I cut them up with big knife for you." ;-)
"Eh, I think I dialed a wrong number, sorry!"
Tina quickly hung up the phone. Okay, so maybe she didn’t know Bette number by heart yet. Now she was afraid to call again. It was probably best not to call her. She wouldn’t be able to say a word and Bette would think she was some sort of weird phone stalker just breathing heavily into the phone. And this way she could still chicken out.
Tina’s couldn’t remember how she had gotten through her last class. She was in a daze and did it on autopilot. But finally the bell had rung and she was done teaching for today. Still a little dazzled Tina got into her car. Would she or wouldn’t she? Deep down she knew it would haunt her forever if she decided to play it safe and not go.
‘Okay, I’ll go.’ The voices in her head had taken a vote and the decision had been unanimous. So Christina Kennard went on a quest to retrieve her lost earring. What she didn’t know yet was that some parts of her would not return from this journey. They would be forever lost; lost to a beautiful mocha-skinned brunette.
TBC…
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i love your interruptions…sheesh they are so fuckin funny …..this story is goin so smooth..love it
I’m with violet_rose, were cuttng the cord so you can write. Love this, you crack me up. Ali has to be Alice. Come on we know Tina’s already falling for the Porter charm and heck Bette hasn’t even really started yet, what more. I don’t know if I can take it.
Now i’m addicted to your story AND your interruptions… You’re a genius! post soon
even fan fiction has commercials… love this… please continue
Bettina pectoris ha good times always a joy
just wonderful, can’t wait to see tina’s journey to get her earring
IC doesn’t need to be laid she just needs to be part of the slaughter house that Ali has set up. I have been summoned a couple of times to the principals office this year myself. Damn out of the years in school this year I get called down more than any of those years put together. I am going to blame it on IC’s abuse of her characters and show. Yeah, that’s it, it is all IC’s fault that I keep getting into trouble. If I was in Tina’s class I would be drooling also. Now, I hope that Tina is able to get to the set to see the one who is sending her into a tailspin. But I have this feeling that Tina has also sent Bette into a tailspin.
this is a beautiful story. please post soon.
Awww how sweet was that ending – I love this….more and now please :o))
You’re killing me here…I swear! I can take the wait anymore….but its a killing and sweet agony!
God you are hilarious! I was rolling of my chair with laughter on the Ali thingy… OMG… I love this story! Even the interruptions are cool LOL
I was sitting here trying to figure out who the hell was doing the Ali thing. Then I realized it was a “time out.” LMAO!!!! One of my friends used a fake answer message once. “Church of God…God speaking.” It was her grandmother calling. OOPS! People have mentioned “Notting Hill” being on cable all month long. I was driving home yesterday after a weekend outing and heard a song on the radio from the movie. Of course I thought of this story and I’m shocked I didn’t wreck my car from some of the, erm, thoughts I was having. ;) LOVED the use of “warm and fuzzy.” It’s one of my favorite phrases. =D
yes you posted!!! love it can’t wait to see what happens when Tina visits Bette. You writing keeps me so entertained, post soon please, like right now! cheers
Loved the ending U keep writing your story and I’ll keep writing mine =)
LOL! Love your interuptions, classic! This stoey is very charming, romantic and comdedic! I wouls so watch this on t.v if it were a movie!
that Ali thing on the voice mail was Alice wasn’t it???!!!! LOL!!!!!!!!!
I am going to lead a stealth mission to cut the phone line to your house so that no one can ring you and interrupt your fantastic writing – anyone going to join me? Keep it up, I get more excited with every chapter!
Um… have I ever mentioned that your interruptions COMPLETELY make my day?! Right, story… Well, I love it. That’s why I’ve been reading. And I’ll be looking forward to my next fix. ;)
You are soooooo funny!! Yes I would like a sheep to go please..:)
Good chapter. Your interruptions is so funny and maybe I can use your line when the phone call bothering me. Anyway Tina is going to see Bette and let see what’s next, thanks!