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Stained – Chapter 16
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"John?" Then she realized who John was. "Ooooh! Very nice, Bette, you’ve passed the test… with honors I might add."
The remainder of the evening was spent drinking, laughing and drinking some more. Around 1 am Tina announced it was time for her and Bette to go, which earned her a lot of "Boo’s" from her friends.
"Well, some of us have places to be, tomorrow!" she defended herself.
"Yeah, but that isn’t until like 9 am, right?" a slightly slurring Steve threw in, convinced it was a winning argument.
"Oh please, like you’re even gonna wake up before 9 pm!"
Tina playfully shoved her tipsy friend, knowing he would now be too preoccupied with remaining on his feet to deny it.
"What about you, Bette?" Kate informed, talking too loud in a way only drunks do.
"Are you gonna go with little Miss Bore or are you gonna sssssssstay and party with us…us…"
She turned to Steve to see if he could help her out defining what exactly they were.
"Us masters of mirth, foremen of fun!" Steve was happy to chime in.
"Yeah, what he said, party poopers!"
Then she launched into a fit of giggles, finding herself incredibly funny.
"Actually, this party pooper also has a bright an early start tomorrow…no, make that today at 7 am."
"7 am?" Tina exclaimed, to which Bette shrugged her shoulders. "I’m so sorry for keeping you here this late!"
"Don’t be," Bette smiled, "I had a great time."
Then she turned to the host and hostess. "Thank you for the lovely evening."
"Anytime." Idzy simply stated.
"Yeah, thanks guys and good luck with those two…" Tina nodded towards the intoxicated half of her group of friend.
"She means you two," Kate pointed at Steve.
Tessa pushed the unwilling Steve and Kate back inside and closed the door behind her with a last wave. Bette, who had switched to water towards the end of the evening, held the passenger door open for Tina, who beamed at Bette for her thoughtfulness before getting in.
On their way to Tina’s they talked about everything and nothing. The ease with which they could talk to one another was refreshing for both of them. In no time at all they had reached Tina’s apartment and again, Bette walked Tina to her door.
"Thanks for coming with me tonight, Bette." Tina said a little shyly when they had reached the door to her apartment complex.
"No need to thank me, I had a great time."
"And thank you for putting up with my friends. I hope meeting them hasn’t changed your mind about…well…us." Tina continued, only half joking and looking to the ground."
Bette lifted Tina’s chin with a bent index finger and leaned over to put the sweetest kiss on her lips.
"Not in a million years. Now, go get yourself some sleep and I will call you tomorrow. Have sweet dreams."
Bette stole another quick kiss before she turned around and walked back to her car.
Tina saw her disappear into the darkness and heaved a longing sigh. "I definitely will," she mumbled and made her way to her soft, warm bed, all the while wondering if it was possible that tonight had just been a wonderful dream.
TBC…
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Oopsy, forgot to say that I, shameless as I am, stole the word ‘bi-curious’ from JustLoveB+T. Sorry, Captain Mom! ;-)
I think it’s going to be fun when all their friends get together. I like the way Bette shut them al up.
Oh wow! That chapter had me grinning so hard my face ached. Just wonderful writing. I love Tina’s crazy friends and the way that Bette dealt with them was classic. Just fantastic. I will return to this chapter the next time I am feeling down so I can be cheered up. Thanks for sharing you story with us.
i loved every word of this, thanks for posting
This chapter was like a ray of sunshine all bright and shiny. I just love your writing and I too could not stop smiling while reading this chapter. Please give us another chapter soon.
haaaaa good times noc-t
very sweet and I am enjoying this very much
“Oh no, you’re not getting off that easy! I want a birthday kiss.”…Well, now we know which of Tina’s friends has balls of steel!…now, back to the story…
So how did Tina finally get her jaw from slamming against the floor over and over? Maybe Tina needs the doctor to help her out (Dr. Noturnal). I can just see Steve and Alice together hooting and hollering with each other. Nocturnal you had me rolling on the floor with this chapter. This story is really brighten my spirits. Post when you can like in a few hours.
OMG I had forgotten about the sheep. Too bad no one got Kate a strap-on to use with the sheep. =O
Glad you posted nocturnal!
only three words.UR STory Rocks.
so cute! i can’t wait to read more! please post soon!!! =)
good story lil’sis… keep going!!!! :D
Hey Nocturnal! I’m new at commenting but not as reading your posts, and I’ve loved this story from the beginning! Well done, and please come back soon, we miss you! Okay, I can’t believe I am the first one to say this but: Am I right to presume that you might have been inspired by a scene of the movie “Notting Hill” with Hugh Grant and Julia Roberts? I loved that scene in the movie but I adore even more this chapter and the humor you put into it. BRAVO and THANK YOU!!!
great update..i wish Bette Porter came to my b-day party, or maybe i can get her cardboard figure and have fun like alice
hehehehehe.. that was one funny chapter Nocturnal.. can’t wait to read the next chapter.BTW you think U seen some funny porn titles, I worked in a video shop once, some of the one’s I have seen =)
Oh man this is so freaking funny, I love about the sheep. Bette is awesome and so charming to Tina’s friends. Ok post soon please, thanks!
it was a funny chapter, all Tina’s friends was atonish because of Bette! and Bette with her amazing charmed keep them quiet! take care
Hey Noc – my face hurts after laughing so much because of yours hilarious author’s note and a post that is freaking funny, great and sweet :o))) Tinas friends are totally weird and that is the best kind LOL and what a great way for Bette to make them shut up!!! I think that Kate, Steve and Alice will totally hit it of together :o)) More please…..
LOL… I didn’t make up that word Nocty, but don’t worry about it, I’m all for sharing :) And THANK YOU for sharing this chapter with us… Can’t wait for T to meet Alice… Oh and Kate and Alice LMFAOOOOOO Hopw you update soon!
yup, this is a keeper, first time read and it’s going on my favourites list…love the humour and the humourous Bette…more…
Believe it or not, I gave that same sheep to my brother for his 40th birthday. I love Bette. She is so cool. This story is great.
please post again soon….