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Stained – Chapter 4 + 5
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“Yes, of course.” She managed to say.
“I had a great time today, though.” Bette said.
‘Yay!’ Tina
thought. ‘She had a great time!’ Then her more rational inner voice kicked in.
‘Of course she had a great time today… with David. You’ve said about five
sentences, most of which were along the lines of “ehh, I… ehhh…sure.”
“Yeah, me too.” Tina replied.
“Say goodbye to David for me.” And with that, Bette turned around
and started walking to her car, leaving Tina with nothing but a great view.
‘She has a
boyfriend! Why does he have to have a freaking boyfriend? Of course she has a
boyfriend, you moron. What did you expect? She is sweet, gentle, smart –
despite the first impression – and hot as hell but totally unaware of it.’ Bette
could work around the straight thing – after all, you’re only straight until
you’re not and frankly, Tina didn’t even seem that straight to begin with. But
she couldn’t work around a boyfriend. Well she could, but she didn’t want to.
She was not a home-wrecker. ‘Damn you, moral standards! Isn’t there a way to
surgically remove your conscience? That way I could just pull a Bette on her
and seduce her right into my bed.’ That – to her own surprise – wasn’t what she
really wanted, though.
Bette was so
lost in thoughts about the great question of life – To Bette or not to Bette –
that she almost walked right past her car. As she pulled out of her spot she
noticed the time. ‘Shit, I better hurry.
being late again.’
Chapter 5
“Gaaaawd, does that woman have to be
fashionably late ALL THE TIME?” an exasperated Alice Pieszecki exclaimed. She
dialed Bette cell phone number again. It went straight to voicemail.
“Hi, this is Bette. I can’t take your call
right now, but if you leave your name and number I will get back to you as soon
as possible… except when you’re
you stop calling me, ya crazy woman! Get your own life instead of living
vicariously through mine! Beeeep.
“Ha. Ha. Ha. Very funny Porter! In fact,
it was so funny that I forgot to laugh. Get your ass over here already! Oh,
this is
you’re best friend Alice! Thought I’d mention the best friend part too, ’cause
you certainly seem to have forgotten that little detail about me! Don’t worry,
though. Being the great friend that I am, I will let you make up to me for
ignoring my calls by buying me that fabulous dress I saw the other day. Oh come
on! Like there is a more charitable thing to do with all that money you’ve
earned by sitting on you’re ass in front of a camera all day than buying me a
dress! Bye now!”
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hi, I really LOVE this story! Very crisp, the inner dialogues and the conversations are marvelous. Has anyone wondered why no one has killed Alice yet? I’m just sayin! write more soon! really soon! I am also glad you cleared that up about the score of 10 being god. In olympic scoring, yeah, but in exams, at least for yanks,not so good!! Congrats!
good. I meant good!
Still liking it alot… :) post soon
Thanks. I’m really enjoying this, any chance of getting longer chapters?
Alice is being Alice. I love the voice mail message to Alice. Even though Bette is famous (and not just in my mind) she still has time for her friends to sit and laugh with each other. I wonder what is going on in her mind about Tina. I also wonder what is going on with Tina. Hope that they see each other soon. I don’t hate Eric, I just want to see Tina with Bette just because they are soooo hot together.
This comment board needs a Dutch language translator. Funny lines in this story. Pls. continue. Fun story
Poor Erik he doesn’t see that Tina is boring from him! i hope in the next chapter we read another talk between B&T
Good chapter. Well now Tina doesn’t like eric anymore so its time to kick him out off the picuter. Damn Alice is so funny and crazy!
2 chapters and you still leave us hanging!!!!!!! LOL Ik was aan het hopen op nog een hoofdstuk van dit verhaal… En nu kreeg k r zelfs 2!!!!!!!Je schrijft echt heel goed! Bedankt!
ps gefeliciteerd met de 10!!!!!!!!!!!!
haha…that voicemail really funny..can i borrow it be my voicemail greeting? :p
Wow, justloveB+T is one to talk about cliffhangers. LMAO =p Yeah I kind of feel sorry for Eric already. He seems like the kind of guy who tries really hard and of course, the guy every mother wants her little girl to bring home. I dated a guy like that when I was 13. BOOOOOOOOOOOOOORING! lol I had a reason which I’m not proud of, but I was only 13 so I chalked it up to being immature. I also know about the ending of the “you get all my free time” phase. So far, if I’m with someone and I get to see them often (as in we live in the same general area), then I fall into a comfortable phase with that person, get bored, and want to find someone new. I haven’t been afraid of committment in the past. I just have relationship ADD or something. And why the hell did I just go into my lack of a love life? Give me a top 10 list and call me Alice I guess.
I really like this story, Alice is funny as hell. En ja hier is het ook te koud wanneer komt de zomer eraan?Je schrijft echt goed en ga vooral zo door. Post soon.
I agree with B&Tforever…I am sure Eric is a very nice man…he is just not the one for Tina! And, the sooner he knows that, the sooner he can move on and find the one he is meant to be with!! Thanks!
i don’t hate eric, i’m just always bored by him…let’s get another B&T accidental meeting
I love the story 2 chapter in 1 day whooooooooooooooooooooooo but your killing me here you have to make them longer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great! please continue as fast as you can!
Poor Eric he either slaping Tina around or following her like a puppy.. Cant strike that happy medium. Bette will be back, she did make a promise to David. thanks