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    Stained – Chapter 9 part 2

    Story written on May 5, 2006 by Nocturnal.
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    Tom Cruise is not gay. No, really. A B&T Beginning.

    When the whole group had gathered in the country club’s main building one of the more powerful club members, a woman who obviously didn’t have anything better to do with her time and money than have lots and lots of unnecessary plastic surgery, gave them a talk about the history of the country club or something completely uninteresting like that. Tina didn’t really pay much attention after the second word. She was immensely impressed with the children for managing to keep quiet for so long when even the adults could barely manage. She saw Bette struggling not to yawn, but decided it would be better for her not to be looking at Bette, because she would drool all over herself or do something similarly embarrassing. Tina tried to kill the time by guessing which parts of the creepy lady were from last century. She had intended to count the ‘new’ part but came to the conclusion it would take her too long. Hell, she wasn’t even sure she could count that high.

    Finally senior Barbie shut up. She was probably late for another surgery. They were guided to the golf course and when everyone had a golf club a remarkably short, pimply teenager shyly approached to tell them the trainer was running late with an aspiring pro, but would be there in 5 to 10 minutes. "In the mean time, just swing away!" He lisped through his braces.

    Everybody stood there a little lost. None of them had played golf before. Well, Tina had been forced by her parents one time, but she had sucked so profoundly that her parents’ embarrassment took over their determination to teach her how to play their favorite sport. Tina hadn’t minded back then, but now she sure wished her parents had taught her a little more than where to put the ball. Then she saw Bette walking casually over to a golf ball lying on the ground, taking a very professional looking pose and hit the ball out of sight with a perfect swing. Not that Tina knew what a perfect swing looked like, but she was pretty damn sure this one had been close.

    "Holy crap, Bette, I thought you didn’t like golf?"

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    2. oooh the earring! different situation but the earring still present! this chapter was so nice and the part Bette teaching Tina play golf excellent! i can’t wait for the next chapter, thanks for spent your time writing!

    4. Lovin’ lovin’ lovin’ this story nocT! You cracked me up with you Authors Note and then with this chapter too! Especially when you broke in with your rant about your “awful metaphor.” You’re hilarious! So glad you staved off the window sander long enough to finish this for us! Oh and I feel your sarcasm – and I like it! Can’t wait for more of Chapter 9!

    8. Ok am grinning like a loon and I have you to thank for it. Absolutely genius chapter. I was already loving it from the author’s note at the start! Loved the author’s interuption to laugh at her own metaphor and was literally laughing out loud (to disturb my housemates) at the suggestion of Alice making a list of celebrities who wouldn’t sign her ass. Just fantastic! Oh and I thought it was cool the way you brought in the earring. Ah Bette and Tina beginnings – is there anything better? Reading this was just bliss. Hope your studying goes so well that you have time to spare to work on your tan and write more chapters for the salivating masses!

    9. “Nice car.” This statement alone is laughworthy because I’ve seen “Incredibly True Adventure of Two Girls in Love” so many damn times and “Nice car” pops up a lot in reference to Evie’s beast of a vehicle. Love the little “time out.” lol Maybe the reason “I” is capitalized is because the person who made up that rule was very egocentric. But then I have to wonder why nouns are capitalized in German. So much to think about…Veronica needed her Ronald McDonald ass kicked. Tina should call Bette and be like, “Yes, I need to make use of your talents…for golfing. I want to go golfing with my parents and since I suck at it I need some help. blah blah blah” The rest doesn’t matter. I wonder if Tina knows she left her earring in the SAAB? Maybe she did it accidentally on purpose. >:D

    10. Okay I confess I have been a silent reader since the beginning. I love your sense of humor. I had to stop myself from LOL because I am at work and do not want to alert anytone to that fact that I am not really working right now, oh well! Anyways, I am loving this story, especially the random thoughts tina has,classic. Funny thing “Notting Hill” has been on all this week on cable and I immediately thought of this story. Keep em’ coming! Also I have no don’t know why I is capatilized, english is weird like that,, afterall it is a bastard language!

    12. you really crack me up, i think i can totally really to your wacky sence of humor, can’t wait to see where you go next!!!!!!!!!!!

    17. Good chapter. Bette and Tina have a good time and now the erring will be the reason for them to see each other again and hope soon. Damn Alice is crazy and funny too. Ok post soon please, thanks!

    19. I really need golf lessons. Do you think that I borrow Bette for a private lesson? Poor Tina keeps loosing that damn earring. Maybe I need to loose mine. I would take Bette or Tina anytime and hope that one of them find it. My luck it be the golf instructor. Love the story and hopefully Eric will be taking that long road trip soon.

    20. What I can say that has not been said already. Except Tom Cruise IS NOT GAY!;)Wink wink. Move the computer outside and get a tan while you write more chapters I solved your problem.

    21. So funny this story, you’re better and more crazy than Alice LOL, but it’s a good thing. The post was also very sweet and I like the earring thing, did Tina do it on purpose??? Post soon – I’m addicted….

    22. Loved this line: “Tina could feel Bette’s breast pressing against her back. Her heart rate spiked. ‘Oh, I’m swinging alright…” Very cute.

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